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TheCryptKeeper is not online. TheCryptKeeper
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25 May 2012 01:55 PM
>Short story


No.
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25 May 2012 01:57 PM
I think it's good.
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25 May 2012 01:58 PM
tl;dr

Friendship is a potato
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25 May 2012 01:58 PM
Not bad so far. You are great at giving details so far. And next time, don't stop mid-entry. It gets people quickly uniterested.
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25 May 2012 02:03 PM
Nice I cant wait to see PART 2

~{In the dark there is always light,and that light will punish the dark always forever}~
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25 May 2012 02:06 PM
It has what I call a "hook",a "hook" is a word or sentence or couple of sentences that gets the reader interested.

~{In the dark there is always light,and that light will punish the dark always forever}~
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25 May 2012 02:19 PM
Slender Man stories all suck.
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Impossible, they all suck too bad.
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Billions of crappypasta lovers/people who haven't heard of the story
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25 May 2012 02:25 PM
Please ad more.. I'm loving this story so far.



I find your lack of brains amusing
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25 May 2012 02:47 PM
They're interesting. You should continue them if you really want to.
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MOAAAARRRRR!!! I R LOVES EET!!! YOU HASH MEH HANGING ON TEH EEDGE OF MAI COMPOOTER CHAIR!!!

MOOOOORRRRRRREEEE I DEMANDD EEEEET!!



I find your lack of brains amusing
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25 May 2012 03:25 PM
not bad

as a corollary to the never end mid entry thing i think ending mid entry would be acceptable for the last one
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25 May 2012 03:29 PM
Not bad at all. Im so far enjoying it.
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