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Re: Off the Radar Episode 2 finally here!

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way245 is not online. way245
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16 May 2012 10:56 AM
Hi guys! Off The Radar Season 1: Episode 2 is finally done, it took forever to render correctly. Check it out on my channel:
Way240
Tell me what you think about it and like, comment, and subscribe! Please leave feedback and constructive critisism is taken!
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way245 is not online. way245
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16 May 2012 11:07 AM
If you haven't seen episode 1, watch it on my channel before watching the 2nd.
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Zilex1000 is not online. Zilex1000
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16 May 2012 03:54 PM
Here are the issues:
I could clearly see the bases and this is set IRL so it looks shabby
No name hides
Unfitting music
The camera movements were kind of poor at times

Otherwise I love the plot.
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way245 is not online. way245
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16 May 2012 07:44 PM
Noted.
Anymore feedback?
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tallpie is not online. tallpie
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17 May 2012 05:32 AM
Try to use original intros XD im happy to make one
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tallpie is not online. tallpie
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17 May 2012 05:34 AM
ALso try resize text THERE ARE PLENTY OF VEGAS TUTORIALS :)

(not meaning to be rude)
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tallpie is not online. tallpie
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17 May 2012 05:35 AM
I'm even making vegas tutorials soon
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mayBOMB is not online. mayBOMB
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17 May 2012 02:06 PM
Like Tallpie said the camera was a little shaky and that the music was all random when the tone was serious. But other than that I think it is pretty good.


Good job.
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appleworks is not online. appleworks
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17 May 2012 02:30 PM
Off the Radar was much better with me, but way's attitude got in the way. Not impressed with video.
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kasert is not online. kasert
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18 May 2012 01:39 AM
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way245 is not online. way245
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18 May 2012 02:49 PM
Please disreguard anything apple says. He was actually slowing me down with this series, and could not even make a decent video so I fired him and got a new partner. Thank you for all of your feedback.
@tallpie
This is actually something CRITICVIP2 made for me as an intro but if you would want to make it for me I would be very thankful.
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18 May 2012 03:56 PM
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18 May 2012 08:18 PM
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way245 is not online. way245
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19 May 2012 01:59 PM
I like dubstep, so really anything like that. More feedback?
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way245 is not online. way245
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20 May 2012 02:54 PM
Bump.
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21 May 2012 02:39 AM
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superpenguin55 is not online. superpenguin55
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21 May 2012 03:08 AM
Nice video Way, but it would be better if the text was there longer. I started reading what someone said but it was gone before I could read the all.
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way245 is not online. way245
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21 May 2012 04:42 PM
Ok when either of you get done with the intros send me a pm.
Thanks superpenguin, anyone else have any feedback for me?
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