way245
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| 16 May 2012 10:56 AM |
Hi guys! Off The Radar Season 1: Episode 2 is finally done, it took forever to render correctly. Check it out on my channel: Way240 Tell me what you think about it and like, comment, and subscribe! Please leave feedback and constructive critisism is taken! |
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way245
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| 16 May 2012 11:07 AM |
| If you haven't seen episode 1, watch it on my channel before watching the 2nd. |
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Zilex1000
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| 16 May 2012 03:54 PM |
Here are the issues: I could clearly see the bases and this is set IRL so it looks shabby No name hides Unfitting music The camera movements were kind of poor at times
Otherwise I love the plot. |
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way245
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tallpie
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| 17 May 2012 05:32 AM |
| Try to use original intros XD im happy to make one |
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tallpie
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| 17 May 2012 05:34 AM |
ALso try resize text THERE ARE PLENTY OF VEGAS TUTORIALS :)
(not meaning to be rude) |
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tallpie
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| 17 May 2012 05:35 AM |
I'm even making vegas tutorials soon
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mayBOMB
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| 17 May 2012 02:06 PM |
Like Tallpie said the camera was a little shaky and that the music was all random when the tone was serious. But other than that I think it is pretty good.
Good job. |
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| 17 May 2012 02:30 PM |
| Off the Radar was much better with me, but way's attitude got in the way. Not impressed with video. |
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kasert
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way245
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| 18 May 2012 02:49 PM |
Please disreguard anything apple says. He was actually slowing me down with this series, and could not even make a decent video so I fired him and got a new partner. Thank you for all of your feedback. @tallpie This is actually something CRITICVIP2 made for me as an intro but if you would want to make it for me I would be very thankful. |
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MrWizza
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kasert
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way245
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| 19 May 2012 01:59 PM |
| I like dubstep, so really anything like that. More feedback? |
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way245
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kasert
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| 21 May 2012 03:08 AM |
| Nice video Way, but it would be better if the text was there longer. I started reading what someone said but it was gone before I could read the all. |
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way245
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| 21 May 2012 04:42 PM |
Ok when either of you get done with the intros send me a pm. Thanks superpenguin, anyone else have any feedback for me? |
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