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Re: [VAKTOVIAN ROLE-PLAY]

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Magmorticus is not online. Magmorticus
Joined: 10 Feb 2012
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16 May 2012 05:42 PM
Corporal Magmorticus Drake was out at the Swampy Moon Outpost, when he heard there was a raid on the Garden Snakes going on, and they needed reinforcements. He knew exactly at that moment that he needed to go and help.

He then went to his home, and opened his garage. What was in that garage, was a treasure to him. It was a Cobra Helicopter. He kept this helicopter from the second invasion led by the emperor, where he flew with him in that helicopter. He then realized he would need a gunner, paratrooper, and a assistant driver. He then called Private First Class Krieger Vousque, Level 1 Soldier Phantus Mektraz Devanti, and Level 1 Soldier Xaing Devanti. They reported to him with their guns in their hands, their knives in their pockets, saying "Ready to depart, sir!".

Krieger helped Magmorticus drive the helicopter, Phantus manned the gunner, Xaing held the gun in his hand, with a parachute on his back. They then set out from Magmorticus' home, to Fort Fang. Phantus shot down about 20 JC, with a smirk on his face. Xaing was ready to jump out of the helicopter, to take the flag back. Magmorticus then saw pspjohn1 killing Level 1's in front of the main gate. The soldier screamed for help, with blood coming out as he screamed. Magmorticus then turned around to help his fellow Vaktovian, ramming into Pspjohn, smashing him into the building. Magmorticus then told Krieger to land to the roof, while he helps the VAC.

He healed the VAC in the nick of time. Magmorticus and the VAC pulled their knives out, stabbing the incoming JC. But then, a whole army of JC started to march towards them. Luckily, Dologan's reinforcements came. They charged behind the army, and shot them all down. They then stacked into the main base, taking the flag. Before the reinforcements arrived, Xaing already took the flag. Magmorticus stayed outside of the main base, to kill more JC.

The Corporal then pulled out his AK-47, and started to shoot down the JC coming through their group doors. All of a sudden, it became quiet. He thought the battle was over...but it wasn't. He then heard a army of JC, led by pspjohn1, coming through the group doors! He desperately tried to stop them, but they trampled over him, smashing his left arm. He then passed out, but before he did, he blinked once. In that blink, he saw Krieger, Xaing, and Phantus killing all JC that came near them.

Magmorticus then woke up from a blood transfusion, with his AK-47 next to him. He woke up in a JC helicopter, that Krieger was driving. The battle was not over. He had no left arm, but he could still fight. He then jumped out of the helicopter, forgetting he had no parachute. The Corporal then landed on his right leg, with blood running down the gate. He limped to the JC spawn, shooting them down, one by one, screaming; "DIE YOU GARDEN SNAKES! DIE!!"
The remaining JC fled in fear of the sight of the Corporal.

After the battle, he returned to the Swampy Moon Outpost, where he then was taken to the medic room, where the doctor did surgery on him. The doctor put in a X9-34 left arm, and a X2-37 right leg. He was able to fight for Vaktovia, once again.

But the most relieved thing he saw, was that when he returned home, he saw his Cobra Helicopter in his garage, without a scratch on it.

Wrote on May 16, 2012.
~Corporal Magmorticus Drake
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 05:44 PM
I saw "Wrote on May 16, 2012. ".

It should be "Written". Because of this grammatical error, I will not read any of this.
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Korvem is not online. Korvem
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16 May 2012 05:45 PM
If you don't want grammar errors, get off of the flippin' internet kiddo.
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xaing is not online. xaing
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16 May 2012 05:46 PM
This is one of the most well written threads I've ever seen!
Absolutely amazing!
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 05:47 PM
@Kor; In college, when you write an essay, the professor looks for grammar errors. If they spot a certain number, let's say it's 20, they will not read the rest of the paper.

And before you say I can't write like this, read this: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=67919431
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Korvem is not online. Korvem
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16 May 2012 05:50 PM
Amazing action, makes images pop into your mind as armies combine, and conflict stirs.
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sergentomega is not online. sergentomega
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16 May 2012 05:51 PM
Very impress.
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Korvem is not online. Korvem
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16 May 2012 05:52 PM
If you're going to go around critisizing everything you see, for the second time, GET OFF THE INTERNET.
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 05:53 PM
@Kor; No. I will give constructive criticism. I won't say something is good when it isn't.
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Xaela is online. Xaela
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16 May 2012 06:02 PM
Cool story bro.
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NarutoFox12 is not online. NarutoFox12
Joined: 22 May 2008
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16 May 2012 06:08 PM
Post this in Clans and Guilds. No one really cares about you VAKs, and this isn't a Role-Play first of all.

I will not read anything that doesn't belong here. Even if it is a story, it BELONGS in Clans and Guilds.

I also love it how you invited all of your VAK friends that probably never posted in Role-Playing forums before.
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LordVolcan is not online. LordVolcan
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16 May 2012 06:08 PM
Very nice, I'm sure it will inspire alot of fellow Vaktovians.
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NarutoFox12 is not online. NarutoFox12
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16 May 2012 06:11 PM
It will not inspire any of us Role-Players here. Of course, your fellow guild members would probably never give constructive criticism because it would break your little heart.

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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 06:12 PM
Naruto has shown me I can be more brutal here.

Go to C&G. You will find people there who actually care. This just proves that VAKs love their members. If you ask the average person about this story, they will say it is a terrible piece of crap.
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NarutoFox12 is not online. NarutoFox12
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16 May 2012 06:13 PM
I could say more, but I would be banned.
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rsmithnvm is not online. rsmithnvm
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16 May 2012 06:13 PM
Very well written Magmorticus, as Korvem said. This sory paints a picture in your mind. Good job, can't wait for more.
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rsmithnvm is not online. rsmithnvm
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16 May 2012 06:14 PM
Story*
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NarutoFox12 is not online. NarutoFox12
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16 May 2012 06:16 PM
Lol, another VAK.

I didn't know this "sory" paints a picture in your mind. In my mind, it paints me
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 06:18 PM
Forget what I said. VAKs don't love their members. They hate them. If they loved them, they would give constructive criticism to this poor OP.
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look01 is not online. look01
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16 May 2012 06:25 PM
Nice story BRO. Keep rightin.

~Vaktovia's Finest~
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Xaela is online. Xaela
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16 May 2012 06:26 PM
*Sigh* Typical stereo-types, I wonder how/who started/made it first.
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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16 May 2012 06:27 PM
@Xaela; What stereotype? All we said was that this story needs work. In the nicest way possible, of course.
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arcaneclone is not online. arcaneclone
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16 May 2012 06:28 PM
Ignore the foolish children who insult this.

Or, just take pity on them.

The human mind can naturally over-look errors, but sadly, theirs apparently cannot.
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NarutoFox12 is not online. NarutoFox12
Joined: 22 May 2008
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16 May 2012 06:29 PM
@PurelyRandom

Why have this in the nicest way? They're a filthy war clan that has no enjoyment but absolutely killing other people in order to be number 1.
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NTV413 is not online. NTV413
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16 May 2012 06:33 PM
@Pure, if you're in college, and you play roblox, you need a life.
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