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| 02 May 2012 09:59 PM |
Chapter 1: The Ranger Intro
War its a disease always fading away then strikeing back at you as conflicts end they begin peace is but a brief moment in our lives as a soldier. We fight and die for our beliefs we go and fight and die because we love war. That is what our lives are about as a soldier conflicts never end for us because we make and bring the conflicts. As a Colonel in FEAR I have been a veteran in almost every war there was. I take pride in it but nothing has ever prepared me for this.
( Information about the book)
This book was a old project and I'm starting it again this book will be different with a new plot and different characters. This story will describe war as it is in real life the battles will be intense using real tactics and weapons. The locations ranging from the frozen wasteland of the Antarctic all the way to the rain forests.
If you want a great reading experience I suggest listen to the book soundtrack. To get a feeling of the story this is optional you can if you like to.
This book will be twenty chapters at least enjoy reading and if you wish to be in the book. Post a comment below and if you want a subscription I'm making a group so whenever a new chapter is out you will be the first to read. The link will be out shortly so enjoy reading and have a good one mates.
(Soundtrack)
Chapter 1: Modern War Fare 2 Opening Titles 1:00.
( In loving memory of my Grand Father who served in WW2 and fought bravely)
Sincerely: FEAR Honor Colonel Cherrybomb117 |
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Oddie9900
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| 02 May 2012 11:54 PM |
| Very touching. God bless your Grandfather. |
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| 03 May 2012 09:34 AM |
I would like to be in it, as I am an old Vet like you cherry, if you can't remember. :P I thank your Grandfather for his service. Reminds me of a time I was at the store, and an old fell over trying to get into his Wheelchair. After I helped him back up, he said he was a World War II veteran, and it was his birthday! I was shocked... XD |
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| 03 May 2012 11:21 AM |
| Very nice, but there're quite a few grammatical mistakes. |
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| 09 May 2012 04:38 PM |
Chapter 2: Operation Desert Thunder
Part 1
Two years ago I was in Operation Desert Thunder our mission was to destroy the last rebel strong hold in the region. Colonel Hawk was in charge of the ground forces and he was leading the assault. I was the only Officer on the field during the mission who knew the rebels can fight like this when everything is on the line.
(Location Southern Deserts of Ghowr)
(Two Years ago)
Everything is slow I look up and see motors landing near me some hitting troops as they blow up. All I remember is a explosion I felt someone grab my arm I look up it was Colonel Hawk. "Get moving Officer your fine get up and lets go!" I grab my ACR And ran as fast as I could.
All around me motors were exploding I see FEAR troops getting hit and seeing our troop transport trucks being flipped over. We ran to a fox hole and got in "Colonel did you get hit?" "I'm fine Officer were is your squad" " There dead my transport got hit I was the only one out".
The shelling stopped we got out of our fox hole "Colonel what do we do now?" "We are going to finish the mission" I ran up to a wounded soldier his leg got blown off I injected some morphine into him. "Cherry the medics will take care of him your with me".
We gathered all who were able to walk and left a few medics behind to take care of the wounded. As we were walking two tanks drove by and stopped ahead of us and started firing. I could see the strong hold far ahead I watched as the tanks blasted away some of the defence positions. Another tank rolled by and stopped Colonel Hawk got on and stood at the top. "FEAR this is your final push towards the rebels we will wipe them from the desert!".
As he started to climb down I heard a small zip sound as a bullet hit Hawk right in the back. "FEAR get behind the tank now!" I dragged Hawk behind the tank he was bleeding out. I looked up and a drone fired on the snipers position Hawk grabbed me.
"Cherry tell Sonic I'm sorry.. I failed" I yelled "Medic!" the medic rushed over to us. "Hawk your going to be fine stay with me" "Cherry..your in command now...tell my family..". "Tell them what Hawk?"...."Hawk!". The medic closed his eyes and I grabbed his tags.
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| 09 May 2012 04:50 PM |
| It was awesome! My Great-Grand father was in world war two also. And my Uncle is a colonel. Man do I thank our veterans and present day soldiers. |
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| 13 May 2012 05:47 PM |
Chapter 2: Operation Desert Thunder
Part 2
"Men rally up on me!" they all gathered in a circle around me "We have lost a great leader today". "I know we already lost to many men today but lets not let them die in vain". "We will push on and kill everyone of these bloody rebels are you with me!" they all yelled "SIR YES SIR" "Lets move it out double time!".
Two more tanks rolled on top of the sand dune I went up to one "I want you and the other three tanks to bombard there position". They started firing up into the sky I watched as the strong hold as it's being bombed. I ran back to the troops "the tanks will provide artillery support while we approach lets do this".
We ran towards the strong hold while under motor fire "Do not stop keep running!" we made it to the wall "Anyone hit?" I heard a scream from the field "Help me I'm bleeding out!". A machine gun opens fire on him "Private!" the whole team was silent. I'm used to seeing people die but when it was under my order it's like a hot dagger through my heart. Now I have to face his family and tell them what happened to him.
I had a job to do and the rest of the troops counted on me to bring them out alive. I cleared my mind "artillery unit hold fire were in" "FEAR we got a job to do lets do it" we placed C4 on the wall and we stacked up. I pulled out the charge "Once were in give them all you got" I pulled the trigger the wall exploded I rushed through the hole and started firing.
the rest of the team rushed in we ran to the closest wall. We opened fire and the rebels fell to the ground I threw a grenade into a building across from us. the top floor blew up "Court yard cleared!". |
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| 13 May 2012 05:50 PM |
| Any way to get In the Story? |
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| 13 May 2012 05:55 PM |
| If you are looking to be in a part for this story you will be in it there are plenty parts to go around. These first few chapters are from my past and once I get back to the present that's when parts will be handed out. |
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| 13 May 2012 06:05 PM |
| I want to be in it.You did very good. |
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| 17 May 2012 02:59 PM |
Chapter 2: Operation Desert Thunder
Part 3
I looked at the rest of the team "Anyone hit?" "Were fine Sir what about you?" "I'm...ok". I loaded a magazine into my ACR I thought to myself it's almost over "FEAR search the buildings I need you to split into two squads" "The first squad will search the buildings on the left side". "The second squad you do the same for the right side take no prisoners".
"Lets go first squad on me!" we ran up the the door I kicked it open a rebel charge and me with a machete I shot him. "First floor clear Corporal your on point" he started to climb the stairs. He got shot and fell down I pulled him back he started screaming. "My Chest!" "Stay with me mate your going to be alright!" .
I injected morphine into him I reahced into my pouch and grabed C4. I placed them on the ceeling above me "private get the corporal out of here I can take care of them". He picked him up and ran for cover I reloaded my gun and stood outside. I pulled out the trigger and took a deep breath I pulled it the C4 exploded and the rebels fell through the hole. I ran back inside and started firing my gun I kicked the bodies to make sure they were dead.
I walked back outside the second squad was waiting for me one of them was missing. "Where is the Sargent?......"What happened!" "He....did not make it". I sat down and pulled out the tags of the dead "We completed the mission...but so many good men died today".
A Convoy of troop transports busted through the gate they stopped. FEAR troops rushed out and secured the area. At the head of the convoy General liavkr104 stepped out of his Humvee and walked towards my group. I stand and saluted "At ease Officer well done Cherry you did good" "I did not do it alone Sir some of those that helped are not here anymore".
He paused and patted my shoulder your right they will be honoured "I handed him the tags". "It was my fault that Hawk died I should have protected him" "Don't worry Cherry its not your fault" "Thanks Sir".
(Two hours later)
I was sitting down cleaning my gun and Liavkr walked towards me. "Cherry good knows your going home" I stopped for a minute "Home Sir?" "Yes your needed in Venezia". "Why?" "You will know once your on the plane oh and....tell Sonic I said hello". |
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| 17 May 2012 03:05 PM |
| wow very detailed nice job! |
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| 17 May 2012 05:04 PM |
| Awesome! Well written mate. |
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