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| 13 May 2012 04:36 AM |
I need some opinions on a promotional video I made for RAT. It's nothing fancy since I just made it real quick to see how it goes. v=Lw7vDdrX_yE
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| 13 May 2012 04:42 AM |
Any opinions?
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smcrules
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| 13 May 2012 04:43 AM |
It's Ok. It would be better if you had a video with members in rather then a picture and words.
Overall: 8/10
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| 13 May 2012 04:44 AM |
Yeah, it was a 2 hour project. I wanted to see what I can achieve. Thanks for the feedback.
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| 13 May 2012 04:47 AM |
Any more opinions?
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| 13 May 2012 04:51 AM |
I did this at night. When I have free time. So yeah shud up.
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| 13 May 2012 04:58 AM |
Bump.
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| 13 May 2012 05:04 AM |
BUMP
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| 13 May 2012 05:05 AM |
yes
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| 13 May 2012 05:07 AM |
| nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo |
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| 13 May 2012 05:08 AM |
yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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| 13 May 2012 05:10 AM |
rate it please
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| 13 May 2012 05:13 AM |
Okay, any ways you think I can improve?
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| 13 May 2012 07:04 AM |
Add a small clip of admirals or CT or whatever saying rat is awsome.
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| 13 May 2012 07:07 AM |
Haha. Needs improvement.
but overall its good enough |
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| 13 May 2012 08:23 AM |
It was extremely difficult to read the text over the background, however I liked the style.
The video wasn't exactly appealing as it was just words. I'd recommend adding footage with clean cinematography that's straight forward, clear of GUIs, and 'cinematic.' :) |
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| 13 May 2012 08:58 AM |
Show pictures of Members lined up. Take videos of them having discipline. -Cs3 |
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| 13 May 2012 09:00 AM |
''Yeah, it was a 2 hour project.''
That thing took you two hours.
No offence, but it took more effort than it needed to read what it says, due to your clashing background.
The music was draining, and didn't suit the video at all.
The whole thing was boring and choppy.
You need to have more action, videos, pictures, something to make it more appealing. |
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| 13 May 2012 09:03 AM |
| I didn't watch it but from these comments, I think you should watch some video making tutorials, and download Videopad it's a free video editing software and pretty good aswell. |
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