15rawsone
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| 11 May 2012 08:09 PM |
Good luck with your "rapping endeavors".
:3
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:10 PM |
I'm trying my best to keep rhyming...
However I struggle to maintain the timing... |
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iText
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15rawsone
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| 11 May 2012 08:12 PM |
Think outside the limit.
As for rhyming is imminent. |
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| 11 May 2012 08:12 PM |
Hmmm, seems legit.
~I heard you like drawings so heres a snake ----- |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:13 PM |
I got the idea from a video which is from a game. Maybe this will hurt my fame. |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:17 PM |
I don't think this needs much praise. Perhaps I need a raise. |
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15rawsone
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Catstorm
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| 11 May 2012 08:19 PM |
Your syllables in lines, they need to match Otherwise your rhymes will never catch |
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15Mason15
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| 11 May 2012 08:19 PM |
Just raise the praise!
~Keep ryhming my friend~ |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:19 PM |
It's bad enough trying to rhyme. Perhaps I need a dime?
I'm trying to have some fun. Perhaps I need to use more puns...
The video is real cool. Parappa the Rapper isn't a swimming pool? |
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Catstorm
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| 11 May 2012 08:21 PM |
Before you get on the rapping scene Make sure your phrases are real keen.
I don't see consistency, I don't see a beat We need to teach you how to keep it neat |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:22 PM |
It seems that indeed I do. I'm doing worse than Peggy Sue. |
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Catstorm
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| 11 May 2012 08:23 PM |
That one was better so keep it up. I'm sure soon enough from your rhymes I will sup.
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adolwa
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| 11 May 2012 08:23 PM |
oh ladies, let me show you how it's done especially when you are the only one
You see, I am the best there ever was searching far and wide to catch them is my real test to train them is my ca-- oh wait nvm |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:23 PM |
I'm not trying to be a pest. I shall give it my best. |
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adolwa
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| 11 May 2012 08:24 PM |
I kind of got myself offtracked but thats no reason to not get back |
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Catstorm
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| 11 May 2012 08:24 PM |
It's problematic that you don't have the right tune in mind, The PokéRap's a better theme to use and find |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:25 PM |
I'm listening to other songs. Perhaps I'm better at Pong. |
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adolwa
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| 11 May 2012 08:26 PM |
You cant just make up random stuff even when you have had enough |
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Catstorm
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| 11 May 2012 08:27 PM |
Count the syllables on your digits I'm sure that then you'll be in to win it
Make sure the numbers are the same Or I'm afraid you're lose at every game Unless of course there is some way For it to still sound poetic to say |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:28 PM |
I'll try to keep that in mind. Maybe I'm just in a bind. |
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adolwa
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| 11 May 2012 08:45 PM |
Lol you guys are terrible at rhyming you cant just go without stable timing If its a wrap, your gonna need a punchline but i guaruntee you that bit is mine.
you guys still cant seem to be anything but orange ..... |
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Gaomon94
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| 11 May 2012 08:46 PM |
I'm trying my best can you see? Maybe I need to charge a fee. |
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| 11 May 2012 08:47 PM |
At this idea I scoff In your words, Gaomon, Knock it off. |
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