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Re: Avenge is now on youtube!

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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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10 May 2012 10:35 PM
Youtube: TheOlympus23.

My new short film is up. Sorry for any black parts, if you need an explantion for those parts, message me.

Jack is a family man, but one day a criminal comes and destroys his family and home. Two years later, he comes back for revenge. But what happens when the tables turn?
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kasert is not online. kasert
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11 May 2012 12:50 AM
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Knoxer is not online. Knoxer
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11 May 2012 06:17 AM
... Okay. The film didn't match the plot, period. The music wasn't compelling for the story and scenes. Bad effects, too much camera movement.

I would rate it a 4.6/10 for the originality.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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11 May 2012 07:02 AM
Bad effects? What effects? All I used was sepia. And what camera movement? I barely made any movement.
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shadow97 is not online. shadow97
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11 May 2012 07:05 AM
What did I just see.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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11 May 2012 07:11 AM
I realize now that this video sort-of sucked. I can do better, I know.
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Knoxer is not online. Knoxer
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11 May 2012 09:34 AM
Reboot the film, it will be a hit for sure! You just made this film too quick.
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penguinman653 is not online. penguinman653
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11 May 2012 10:23 AM
I liked it, but you can make it better.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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11 May 2012 02:56 PM
Alright then. I'll redo it.
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penguinman653 is not online. penguinman653
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11 May 2012 06:11 PM
And add some VFX.
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