Olympus23
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| 10 May 2012 10:35 PM |
Youtube: TheOlympus23.
My new short film is up. Sorry for any black parts, if you need an explantion for those parts, message me.
Jack is a family man, but one day a criminal comes and destroys his family and home. Two years later, he comes back for revenge. But what happens when the tables turn? |
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kasert
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Knoxer
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| 11 May 2012 06:17 AM |
... Okay. The film didn't match the plot, period. The music wasn't compelling for the story and scenes. Bad effects, too much camera movement.
I would rate it a 4.6/10 for the originality. |
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Olympus23
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| 11 May 2012 07:02 AM |
| Bad effects? What effects? All I used was sepia. And what camera movement? I barely made any movement. |
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shadow97
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Olympus23
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| 11 May 2012 07:11 AM |
| I realize now that this video sort-of sucked. I can do better, I know. |
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Knoxer
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| 11 May 2012 09:34 AM |
| Reboot the film, it will be a hit for sure! You just made this film too quick. |
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| 11 May 2012 10:23 AM |
| I liked it, but you can make it better. |
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Olympus23
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| 11 May 2012 02:56 PM |
| Alright then. I'll redo it. |
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