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Re: Journal Journey ~~ (Story for entertainment.)

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02 May 2012 06:33 AM
BEFORE READING.
I once wrote this on RT, but the mod put it in role-playing. First, this is no role-play; its a story. Second, they didn't ask me before moving it. So, I put it back here.

I hope you like it:

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Journal Journey.


After taking some time of convincing myself that past is past, and the present is happening at time, and the future is to come. I came up to a conclusion that my theory was much wrong.

I was right about the present and the future, but the past? Was it possible to live the past once again after vanishing? Can't past return after disappearance?



http://www.roblox.com/Shrine-Of-The-Fallen-Hero-place?id=1608866
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It was 2019, it was a gloomy day, where the sun hid behind the clouds, but shining from between the clouds linings. As if the sky was torn, leaking a pure matter that shines studs after years of sleeping under the sky's shadows…

The trees and forests were forces of pitch black statues that is spread on the earth, trees lying on the ground as dead bodies after a civil war. It was a disaster, barely anything alive behind the hills and mountains, as silence roams the land from its east to its west, and its north to its south...

There is hope, yes. There are people, of course! Or else for whom was this land built to be roamed? For whom were these clouds risen to shade on?

There were several closed cities around the forests, but with the little numbers of these cities do not haste! For these are huge cities, width by length. Tens of thousands live in these cities in what you could call semi-peace. Also, with the community's ability do not haste! For these people are the masons that built their future with their hands and minds.

People lived happily and wealthy, but never come out from the cities to the forests, or the environment outside. For it is a very dangerous place. A lot tried to come out, little came back alive, some lost and some dead, but there are some people that know these forests by their palms. These are the bloggers that study the world outside, instead of studying the inside.

From all the cities, there was a central station for the bloggers, which is headed by MrDoomBringer. After applying for the job from the staff.

With the big corruption in the country, everybody is affected by the environment they are living, so MDB became greedy and started to make more blogs for more money from the staff.

The cycle of life is all connected to self-destruction and a complete disaster, which is leading day by day for the community to rotting…


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Once upon a time, a Robloxian named "John", whose day is as his night, nothing new in his life to live for, an expert blogger that knows every stud in the forests, who applied to work for MDB to create blogs to make more money for the company.

It was an odd day; the clouds opened some space in the sky for the sun to shine on the cities of ROBLOX. People started to go to the seas to have some fun, considering it as a summer vacation.

John has just arrived to the center to find people leaving to take a vacation, he also wanted to have some fun in the sun, so he grabbed some things he might need for the trip to go to the beach...

“Wait there! John!”

John sighed to hear MDB call him, for he was a man with a special attitude. Always gets what he wants. That happens when corruption hits your brains.

-“Yes, boss?”

“Where are you going with all these tools?!” asked MDB; taking his bag from his hand.

-“I’m going to the beach!”

“You?!” MDB shout, and then started laughing from his lungs, John didn’t understand...

“You…still have some work to do!”

-“Me?! After what?! Making over 6 blogs for you this weekend?! Don’t you know you made me lie and steal documents so I could make you these stories?!”

“Ahhhh, that’s OK John” said MDB; “All I need from you is to do one more thing, after that, you can have a retirement with ten thousand robux a month” said he in a sly tone.

John sighs and accepts, within that time there was nobody but John and his boss in the whole center, waiting to be locked up.

“ All you have to do is find me a story about an abandoned game on ROBLOX and write a documentary about it, you’re my best man in this business, for you know everything outside!”

-“Yes, I do… Any abandoned game?”

“Yep, and you get your retirement... but make it good! Or I will tire you much more than this! I am counting on you!”

John nodded, and then MDB leaded him to an office and opens a drawer.

“Look at these papers and see what place you would like to write about. Now, excuse me; but I am going to the beach!”

-“Wait! Are you leaving me alone?!” shouted John.

“Good luck with that story!” shouted his boss as he was running out to the back door.

After time of sitting behind the desk trying to find out about what place he would choose to make his story, after being “banned” from the shining sun and relaxing in the beach with his friends, after all that time, he chose a place where everybody has forgotten for about 8 years, a masterpiece in building that disappeared from time after its builders vanishing.. or his banning..

He chose: Minish’s unfinished business on ROBLOX: “Shrine of the Fallen Hero”

He wrote a little message for his boss and put it on his desk, written in blue ink it says:

“Dear boss, I have chosen where I will begin my destination, I will need 3 days to finish the documentary though, so I ask you to wait for me this time. When it is ready I will come to you in your office and give it to you. You know my number, see you.”

John went back to his house, forgetting the sun and the fun people are feeling now, and went to bed... closing his eyes slowly so he can sleep. To get ready next morning for what he doesn’t know… the biggest adventure that he might experience in his entire life.




After the moon ran through all the night’s stages, after all the stars shone until they faded as miniature candles in the sky that lost their fuel, after the dark occupied the world with its black cape, after all that; came the morning. The sun was a hero wearing armor made from light to free these lands from staying drunk under this shade. After fighting the enemy, it came to its people to shine over them, but the clouds came back to forbid that right from the sun.

People could guess when the morning has come even in a cloudy rainy day as this, telling that out from the shouting of the roosters.

John woke up, put on some new clothes, put some tools in his bag, and made himself ready to go out to the forest, to get to his destination.

After going out from the city door to the woods, he got to the bottom of his destination after hours of traveling through the woods, getting some damage to his body. Then he began to recover from his wounds and started climbing the mountain until he reached somewhere before its head. He then rested on a little rock on the edge to start writing his documentary.

He looked from left to right; He didn’t find anything to write about, for the mountain was just a pile of rocks put on each other when he thought back. He then felt very sorry for choosing this place without looking into its details, for he never knew about this place before choosing the subject.


He sighed, “Well, it looks like I have to start writing...” he said.

He pulled his pen out and started to write down on his notebook, here is the conclusion:

“It was a great day for me to come by the Classic “Shrine of the Fallen Hero”, made by the genius Minish, a man that gave his life to building magnificent architects and life-like sights. That can still be seen today, but I today remove the dust off one of his greatest but unfinished masterpiece which I am standing on as I write. It has one of the greatest and longest bridges on all ROBLOX that leads to (as some people claim) a great gate which nobody but Minish knows what he willed to create from it…”

He puts down his pen and put his notebook in his bag, looking for more clues to write about. All that he was thinking about was his retirement. Adding to that, the money he will get after making the documentary. Not caring if it was rubbish or not. All he needed was to finish his assignment and that is it.

He looked and searched all around the mountain, from its top to its bottom. He didn’t find anything else to write about. It was a shame, for John just began, now he cannot finish what he started.

He was a bit bored, so he thought he could waste some time before going back home to begin a new day. So, he went to the bridge, and with a 60 stud meter he started to see how far this bridge was…

The first reading was 60 studs.

-“Wow, this is a long bridge.”

He then realized that he would never get to the real distance of the bridge by studs. He sat down, “Oh, Minish… Why would you make such a boring game without any meaning!”

After this word, there was a little shake in the mountain, John was frightened for his life, so he ran down to the forest and decided to go back home before sunset.

He got back to his house in the city and sat on his bed and thought if he could do this. But he was too tired to think and fell into sleep slowly until he couldn’t move a mussel…

A new morning came, much odder than before. It wasn’t a happy sunny day, but it was gloomier than anytime before, the clouds blocked the sun to even appear anyhow. John woke up a bit late because neither he or the people or even the roosters could tell if it was morning or not.

John woke up by the call of his boss…

“Hey John! How about that story of yours? How is it going?”

John didn’t know what to say, “It’s almost ready, just some touches and it will be done!”

“Well, it’s good to know that I put my faith in you John!”

After closing the line, John hurried back to the mountain to continue what he had begun, but this time to end it. So he climbed the mountain back to the bridge and sit on the edge on a rock, and took from his bag the notebook and the pen and started peeling his eyes harder than yesterday.

After an hour or so, he found a secret entrance leading into what he thought was a maze, in less than three minutes he was lost, so he lead himself back to where he began. Next to the bridge on the rock he sat once again. He was frustrated more than ever and didn’t know what to do…

-“How in the world will I complete this story?!”

He threw the notebook far away from him, but after a bit he felt a bit sad for doing that, so he went to get back his notebook before the wind blows it to the edge.

He caught the book just before it fell, while going back to the rock… he noticed a little crack in the mountain with what looked like a purple book inside.

Because John has the spirit of adventuring, and a very curious person, he took the book out of the crack to find out it was a blank name purple journal.

Without thinking of who owns this book he opens the pages to find it blank.

-“Pshaw!”

He slowly closed the journal; suddenly the journal opens on the first page. Then words start to pop up from the journal:

“Who dares open?”

John was surprised. He looked from left to right to see if anybody is watching…

-“It looks like Minish scripted a talking journal!” he laughed.

The journal pops more words: “You don’t believe that I am talking to you? Well, you’re in for a surprise!”

John was frustrated, suddenly, from the gate after the bridge, a great source of light bursts out to blind John which lead him to faint out.



After waking up, he was much afraid from before, he wanted to go down the mountain. But the cloudy weather didn’t allow him to do so. He tried to remember what made him faint.

“Was it something I ate..? Wait the gate!”

He looked back to the gate to find it open, with a source of light still shining out from it. For that he put on some sunglasses, took his bag, made his notebook and pen ready to write any updates to come… John slowly came forward and started to cross the bridge. He came to the gate to find the source of this light still coming out from it, but weakly. With a little thinking he said that only meant that this gate will not last being opened. So he walked into the gate, then it closed.

The gate must have lead to a green baseplate with a skybox from the 06. It was Old ROBLOX, even he looked much odder, and his hair was replaced with a wizard hat, his T-Shirt turned from a jacket to a Bloxer Title.

He looked up to find the moon as a picture hanging from the sky with the sun shining on both the baseplate and the moon, creating a shadow of the moon on the baseplate.

John looked right and left, to find someone inside the shadow of the moon looking at him. There was nobody else but him in the area.

“Hello there, this is a little record I made for who took the journal from the mountain, I cannot hear you or answer your questions…”

-“Yeah right.” said John.

The figure continued: “…for those who are asking me about my identity, if they are from the far future or not. I am Minish. I made this very important record for who found a purple journal in the mountain.”

After silence he continued: “I made this record because I knew a secret project that if I told a soul then something terrible may happen. So, with my whole ability, I made myself banned and made this journal my messenger from Banland. Don’t misunderstand me, but this is Advanced Lua, you wouldn’t understand. But this journal will lead you to something huge. I cannot tell you anyways, but I assure you that if you do as the journal says without telling anybody. Then you will be in a surprise, I am sorry, I can’t personally help you more than that.”

John showed some surprising from such a result… Minish banned himself for something top secret?

“Well, I don’t want to make my speech any longer than that. But all I have is to say this: I was a bit disappointed when I knew that the admins didn’t will to delete me. So I wanted to put a little clue on the description of the game as you see. But they found out, so they are going to ban me and take the eggs that I hid carefully in the mountain… I have my sources from inside the staff. So this is the truth.”

He continued: “Every egg has a description, read it please. I really hope they didn’t remove it. For I forgot it, it is the only way to find out the truth. The eggs may be hidden in the HQ in a secret teleporter that leads to a base for secret weapons that the staff keeps as a secret from the community…”

Silence and he ends: “That’s it, I end my words hoping you find your way, stay alive mate...”

John nods, as then the figure disappears and a gate appears from in-front of him. He goes through it to see his new destination. Forgetting his pen and notebook behind him on the baseplate, he crossed to find himself in the ROBLOX HQ… forward in 2019.




-“Now, lets find that teleporter Minish was talking about!” said John to himself.

After the gate closed, he looked back into his bag to find his notebook and pen missing, but to be replaced by the purple journal.

-“Odd, I don’t remember taking the journal.”

He opened it to find the words in the journal: “Look under the ruins to find new buildings”

John thought that “new buildings” is the secret base. So all he had left to do is know what ruins were. Looking into his gear he found out he had missiles, bombs, weapons…

John had an idea; “ruins” is the HQ when it falls! So he began his duty, he went to the basement of the HQ and started planting bombs on its weak spots, adding to that; damaging the building with missiles, he had to do all that before the game restarts again.

The HQ started to lean forward, John hit it a missile at an exact point to make it fall backwards and to let the shreds and bricks fall off the baseplate. Then he could search “under the ruins”. It happened, the HQ fell backwards, and under the ruins was a little room as big as the size of a person. Inside it was a little teleporter.

John was excited! He was the first one to go on an extraordinary adventure as this, so he touched it to find himself teleport outside a military base, lucky for him; its was time to shift the guards, so he had five minutes to find the eggs.

He opened the journal once again for these words to come up: “Do you actually need me to find a couple of eggs?”

John sighed, but with an extra pen he wrote down: “How can I get in?”

The answer came indirectly, for the backdoor opened by itself, John face palmed and continued his way inside. The place was like a museum; all the weapons and writings are put in glasses and protected very carefully by guards. He had about 5 minutes to find the eggs and leave. He entered very quietly and started looking everywhere.

-“Where can these people hide eggs?”

-“Oh look! Scriptures about ROBLOX UFO’s! The most powerful weapon in history! Oh my god… Is it a real crystal ball?!”

Every antique John sees makes him forget that time is not on his side. He looked back at his watch to find out he only had one more minute to find the eggs…

He hurried all over the base and looked in every place he could, he was almost late, and the guards are right at the front door! He rushed into a room and locked it on himself, breathing heavily; he sat down to find himself in the Lockers Room. Then he had a brilliant idea.

“How about a cup of coffee, Tim?” said the first guard.

“Yeah, but lets stay for a while before going to the café.” said the second guard, Tim.

They entered to find a guard wearing green soldier clothing in front of them standing.

“And you are?” shouted the first guard.

-“I?”, he looked at the jacket to find a name on the nametag, the name was Kevin, he pointed it so they could understand.

“Ahhhhh, now I see, sorry because we forgot you, Kevin.” said Tim. “As long as you are here, we will go get ourselves a cup of coffee, want us to get you anything?”

-“Err, no thank you.”

With silence roaming the room, they left to the café. John continued his work and tried to find the eggs, he looked in most of the rooms until he got to what looked like a fancy office. Without knocking; he busted in. To find one egg sitting on a pillow inside a protecting glass. He took off the glass and put the egg inside his bag. To find out that the alarm went out. He went out rushing from the backdoor into the desert outside the building; running for his life.

After him came helicopters, which were ready to aim and fire. They looked all over the desert for John but couldn’t find him. That is because John was hiding in a little hut he found while running from the forces.

John opened the journal again to see what the new order was. The words came up to read: “Put all the eggs back to the nest.”

-“Eggs?! I thought it was just one egg..” said John, sneaking back to the building to find the eggs that he was told about. He bumped into a guy in a suit back in the office.

“Hey Kevin, what’s with all the helicopters in the skies?”

-“Beats me.” said John. After silence John asked the guy in the suit: “Say, do you keep any secret eggs or something here?”

“Why, that is an odd question for someone for you to ask, Kevin. I thought you hated eggs!” he laughed.

-“Yeah, I do. But there was some tale about...” ….and without completing his words the guy interrupted him: “Ah! You might mean the legendary eggs Minish created! Oh, he burned them up, sorry to tell you that.”

The journal suddenly opens as it is in the bag, John looks inside the bag to find the journal writing: “He lies.”

-“Well, I wonder why Minish made some useless eggs anyway.” said John in a way trying to get the man’s attention.

“The eggs? It is said it had some powers, why are you so interested in this story. Go do your work or you get fired!”

The suited man turned his back on John, John; on the other hand, found out he was holding a gun in his military wearing, he hold it up in the man’s face.

-“Put your hands up, now!”

The man put his hands up slowly.

-“Now, you are going to tell me what really happened to the eggs.” said John.

“Okay okay… the staff gave us an order to destroy them and all the scripts and riddles that it held.”

John got angry, but accidentally put a bullet in his face, to kill the suited man. He looked all over the room, in the desk. He didn’t find any documents about any eggs or anything about them.

Suddenly, the journal glows. John took the journal and opened it to read the word: “RUN”. He had no time. He didn’t know where to go. But he used the map in the room to find what he read as the Teleporting Room. He ran very fast to the room before the soldiers could enter the building. He closed the room with a lock as he was inside. He was astonished by the looks of the room as it was some Sci-Fi project. He looked carefully at where every teleporter will teleport, from reading the descriptions; he chose to teleport to the mountain once again. So, he got inside the machine, and pulled a lever to find himself suddenly on the mountain, over the clouds.

The journal wrote: “Climb back to the maze, and find the nest.”

So he did, he climbed back to the maze, but this time. He was sure to find the nest to rest the egg in. After taking time, he found out in a little alley that there was a little crack in the wall with a graffiti: “The cake is a lie!”. John noticed that that piece could be moved, so he moved it to reveal the nest of the egg.

Taking it out from his bag slowly, the egg was put back to the nest. Suddenly, the walls began to disappear from around him to create an empty room inside the mountain. Then a little hole in the wall was found, when John got too close to it, it revealed a source of light from it creating a picture on the wall against it. It turned out to be a movie!

John sat on the floor to see what would happen next.

The picture of the famous “Crossroads” made by ROBLOX appeared, and then a voice came up: “The Crossroads, a classic game that people were never bored from playing even after years of creating. One of the first battle games on ROBLOX. A masterpiece made by ROBLOX. As a gift to the community…”

Then came up the same figure John saw before.

-“Minish!” shouted John.

“Hello, dear fellow. It is I, Minish. It looks like you gained the egg and returned it back to its nest. Well done. I thank you very much. But this is not the end of your task.”

“As you see here; the epic Crossroads. This piece of land wasn’t made for nothing. The staff made an excuse to make it a battle game so nobody would actually know the real point from creating it.”

“For, where the roads cross is not any piece of brick was used in building the place. But, it is a gate. Under the cross is a gate that opens another world. You people did not see that when you copied the game. Because the staff was too smart to let anybody know.”

“They were also very clever to make the key… or the gatekeeper very hidden from the eyes of the people. So they hid every part of the key in five places. The reason I said it was a gatekeeper is that all the pieces, when gathered together at the point where the roads cross, it activates the gate.”

“Thus, I did not let you bring the egg for no reason. This egg will teleport you to all five places where the pieces are hidden. When you get close to a piece, the egg will glow. You can gather the pieces with the egg… you will know how it all works later.”

“If you did not collect all the eggs, or if they were all destroyed. Then I fear that the egg may explode if you gather all five items together. So, when you gather them all, you must rush back to the Crossroads or all the items will disappear forever. Now, to begin your mission, all you got to do is shake your egg or eggs. Good luck!”

The film ended and the walls came back together after fading. John shook the egg and closed his eyes to find himself in Shedletsky’s Haunted Mansion.

He put the egg in the bag and started to walk up the stairs. Suddenly, the journal opened and wrote: “Pumpkin heads are edible.”

-“This is no time to joke around!” said John. But he remembered the scare crow outside and thought it was a clue. He went down to the garden, suddenly the egg started to glow. Adding the head of the scare crow too. John held the egg next to his head to find the egg sucking the head, now it is kept inside the egg.

Then, from the soil of the garden, came out a knight with his dead horse, with a head of a pumpkin.

-“Now that, is the pumpkin head?!”

John shook the egg before the knight could hit his head with his sword. For him to teleport to SFOTH IV. The journal lit again and wrote: “Shining armor isn’t helpless”, John knew quickly that the journal meant the armor, but which one.

John tried to get to the armor against the main spawn point of standing, that one standing alone on the ground up there. He rushed up to find someone with a darkheart standing in front of him forbidding him to cross to get the piece.

“You got no chance to go through with me and my darkheart in your way!”

John remembered the gun that he left in his jacket, so he took it out and shot the man dead. “I guess you and your darkheart weren’t so worthy anyways.”

He went to take the armor to find it gone, and next to the place the armor existed was a guest.

-“Oh man, how will I get that armor now?!”. Suddenly, the egg shone and started to remove the guests torso off. Removing the armor he had. The guest then fell to the ground dead, turning his skin pitch dark, he did not respawn. In front of that sight, John feared for his life. Suddenly, the knight showed up with an Illumina in his hand flying toward John. John also shook the egg very hardly and closed his eyes to find himself in Matt Dusek’s Balance.

He spawned in the middle, the journal did not lit, but the egg did, trying to push him to an edge where a spawn was shining, but John couldn’t move or the baseplate would tilt and lose him and the egg. But he had no choice since nobody was there. So he jumped to the spawn causing the baseplate to tilt but for the egg to contain the spawn. John shook the egg before it was too late. Sadly…

… He survived. He teleported to his next destination, which would be the Roblox Museum Classic Version. He walked slowly to find the egg glowing very hardly when he got next to the dinosaur figure at the first moment he entered inside. So he climbed the figure to its head, the egg took four parts from its head. John thought he was done and ready to get the last part, so he went down and shook the egg. It didn’t work, he shook harder but… nothing.

The sudden roar he heard from behind him gave him the Goosebumps in his body. He looked behind to find the figure alive!

John ran for his life, going from one room in the museum to another being followed by the figure that tried to crush him to pieces. John then ended in a room that contained the first airplane in the history of ROBLOX. John had an idea.

The dinosaur entered the room John was last found, the figure couldn’t find him, suddenly from behind it, John shouted: “Yeeeehaaaaaaaaww!!”. Flying for the first time in his life… a real airplane. His dream came true.

John, with all the guts he had, hit the airplane with all its mighty force the figure, for the figure to fall down pieces. The airplane lost control after losing some pieces after the bloody war. So it fell down violently, so violently that there was no piece left from it. But John survived, he used a parachute he found to land safely inside the chimney if the first house on ROBLOX.

-“Well, it looks like one thing is left to do.” Said John, shaking the egg. He teleported to his last destination. Which seemed a bit odd though, he landed in Shedletsky’s Sword Training place.

He looked around to find nobody or anything but the swords. The journal and egg glowed very much, the journal wrote its last words: “Take a sword”. So John took a darkheart and stood bravely in front of the front entrance where a figure on a horse stood, holding a white sword. It was the knight he saw before coming to end him, or for John to end… him.

The swordsman came forward on his horse, speeding towards John holding his white sword hardly. He came so close to John, but John ducked and hit his arm with the darkheart to make it fall off his body, adding to that, the sword.

John held the sword confident that he will end this man, he shook the egg but it wouldn’t teleport. He knew that the horseman must die so he could move forward, John slowly put the egg back to his bag.

The horseman got off his horse, and with great skill started using his fists against John, the sword fell off and John was hurt very bad. The man came closer to John to finish him, and with a smile pasted on his pumpkin head. He was getting ready to end John, until a sword went through his back. The horseman fell to the ground, and his horse fled away.

John woke up to find a masked man in front of him, he pulled him up.

“Why mate, if I weren’t here then you would be ended!”

-“Who would you be?” asked John.

“Well, I am just some man that comes here. Odd though, I never seen a man with such a body come here lately. Why don’t we take the cover off his head and see who he is?”

-“Yes, lets.”

Both the men took the pumpkin off the man’s head to be surprised that that man was… Shedletsky?!

“God, what happened?!”

John was going to explain, but he remembered Minish’s words to never say a word. He put the sword in his backpack to find the egg sucking it and containing it. The egg started to shake violently. John knew that there was no time left.

-“I am sorry, but I have to go.”

So he went outside the entrance and shook the egg to find himself finally… in the Crossroads.



He approached closely to the center of the map. Until he got to the center, the egg was making explosion noises. When he got there, the noises stopped. John took the egg out of his bag and put it in the center.

Somehow, all the items come out of the egg and start to gather as a figure of a statue, the spawn under, the torso connecting the hands and legs, the head on the top, and finally the sword that was help up to the sky. John stepped back a bit to see what would happen next.

Suddenly, the statue started to fade until it vanished completely. A great explosion that created a great force that destroyed every building in the map. John was afraid for his life, so he went to hide behind what is left from the building underground. He rested on the ground until the chaos ended, but he sensed that he was watched by someone. That someone was the same masked man that saved John.

-“Who are you?! Why are you following me?!”

“I am sorry for bothering you John.”

-“How do you know my name?”

*laughs* “I am your boss!”

-“MDB?!”

“Of course! Sorry for surprising you. You must be puzzled now, yes?”

-“Yeah.”

“Well, I will tell you the whole story. I knew Minish from before, He and I were good friends, but before his “disappearance” as he calls it, he was very frustrated and awkward. He told me that someone will find the journal and you will have to help him eventually. I didn’t believe him. Lately, I have been thinking about him. So, I thought I could give a chance to see what he meant. That is why I gave you this chance.”

-“Excuse me, why me?”

“I told you, you are the best man in the business. You know the forest better than me. When I got to the Sword Practice arena I was a bit shocked to find you and Shedletsky there. Exactly as Minish told me.”

“Look, we’ve got less than 7 minutes until the forces come. Lets say hello to Minish!”

-“What?!”

“Follow me!”. That time, the explosions stopped, and a source of light came out from a vortex in the middle of the map. Inside that vortex showed Minish, and some of his scripting friends.

“Doom! How glad I am to see you!” shouted Minish as the two came forward to see what happened.

“Oh Minish, it has been a while and your still in great shape!”

Both Minish and MDB laughed hardly. Then Minish turned to John.

“Thank you John, for helping me get out of Banland.”

-“Why would you want me to do all that adventure?”

“Of course to open Banland for the innocent to come back! These are some banned scripters that are going to help me with this project…”

-“Why in the world do you want to open Banland?!”

“The staff is unfair, they ban all who say the truth. But, keep the bad. It is time to put an end to that!”

-“Well then, come out!”

Minish was about to come out, until the forces came and started to shoot the vortex with their high-tech guns.

“Gah! Well, I guess there is nothing we can do!” shouted MDB. “We are going to flee John. We can’t save Minish and his friends…”

“It’s OK John” said Minish with little power left, after hit by bullets. “I am sure I will come back… somehow. Now flee! See you around, friends!”

John, for the last time, shook the egg as MDB was holding on, suddenly, MDB pushed him away avoiding him a bullet.

-“No!”

“Go alone John! Save yourself!”

At that time, one of the forces brought a great piece of machinery, and shot the vortex for it to close forever, with Minish and his friend in it. With John fleeing back to the building, he saw MDB getting arrested and put into their vans.

Before they went off, they removed the main teleportation brick from under the map. Then they went off, John then shook the egg and closed his eyes to find himself on his bedroom, on his bed. It was very late in the city. So after a great day of adventures, he rested on his cozy bed, to end this day.


John woke up, and went to work to find all the employees throwing papers. Singing and dancing. They were happy as if it were some party.

-“What’s happening?” asked John a companion of his.

“You didn’t read the newspapers?! Here!” and gave him that day’s newspaper, the headline was “Mr. Doom finished for Treason”. John went slowly to his boss’ empty office with tears going down his cheeks.

-“I’m sorry boss, I couldn’t finish that document…”

John finally went out to find someone next to the door.

“Congrats, John. Here is ten thousand robux. You got your retirement. Thank you for your great job here, now go rest!”

John made a little smile on his face. “Thanks, man.” He said. Walking out from the front door never coming back.



John, after 4 years, works as a pilot. Following his dreams, he is paid a good salary. He was always waiting for Minish to come back. Everyday he comes back to the vortex’ spawning to see if Minish would come back.

Before his deleting for abusing the staff, he was last found in the Crossroads. Suddenly, a source of light appears from the middle of the map. But it was too late. He was finished as his friend MDB.

The next thing he knew, he found himself sitting on a bench with MDF… and Minish, sitting next to him. In Banland, drinking a cup of coffee. It was a good ending for a great adventure, no?

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THE END



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I thank SCS for the first person to read and like this. :)
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read parts of it, pretty good.
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@ iText

read it all. I am sure you will like it.
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> The trees and forests were forces of pitch black statues that is spread on the earth, trees lying on the ground as dead bodies after a civil war. It was a disaster, barely anything alive behind the hills and mountains, as silence roams the land from its east to its west, and its north to its south...

Since when was Civil War II? Wasn't the Civil War in the eighteen hundreds?

I thought it was 2019.
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First, it's a story. Second, not every detail has to be a real detail.
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Mother of god.

When do you get the time to type all this?
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God has no mother.

Second, I have alot of time, between lunch and dinner. :D
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READ!
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Please comment after reading. :/
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