sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 01:30 PM |
You enter a competition, and the prize is a one in a lifetime luxury cruise to the Caribbean. You go to the harbour and find out many teenagers your age have won the prize, you beleive it's just a coinsedence. It all goes well, workers waiting on you hand and foot and overlooking the beautiful teal sea while drinking cocktails. Its perfect, but what holds for the future? Will it be good? Will it be bad? Who knows.
Rules: No godmodding, You cant bring family, Roblox rules, Simple.
CS: Name; Appearance; Personality; Talent; (Optional) Other; Bio; (Also optional)
Have fun.. |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 01:36 PM |
CS: Name; Skye Flint.
Appearance; Blonde wavy hair, Teal dreamy eyes which are her best feature, Great smile, Black and white striped tank top, Ripped jean mini shorts, Tanned skin.
Personality; Shy and secretive, Sticks up for herself and her friends, Adventurous and curious, Likes to explore.
Talent; Surfing, Plays guitar and sings.
Other; Originally comes from New Zealand so has a strong accent. Smirks alot but doesnt realise.
Bio; Has lived on a yacht until she was 12.
RPAge: 15
ADD RPAGE ONTO YOUR CS.
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| 21 Mar 2012 01:47 PM |
| I swear to god, I live in the Caribbean and this is a disgrace. |
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TheNman1
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| 21 Mar 2012 01:48 PM |
| What is the point of this Rp...? To go on a cruise and see what happens while your on the cruise? Sure its original..but...you need a better plot if your going to attract people. |
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| 21 Mar 2012 01:50 PM |
Name: Honey Tanglewood
Apearance: She has long, wavy, blond hair to her waist in a Ponytail, with one of her stilish headbands, Currently Star headband. Her eyes are sky blue and her smile is dazzling. She is currrently wearing her simple purple T-Shirt and Skinny jeans.
Personality: Ignorant, Artistic, Smart, Independent, Sweet-tooth, Shy.
Talent: Art and Crafts
Other: Loves the carribbean islands.
Bio: Cant think of 1 |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:00 PM |
| (Accepted, Ignoring the other posts) |
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TheNman1
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:01 PM |
| (My post is called "criticism". Just saying, so really you shouldn't ignore it.) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:10 PM |
| (Sorry, its just that I try my best to think of good idea's and all that anybody does is say my idea's are a waste of time) |
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TheNman1
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:15 PM |
| (I've been having that a lot too. That is mainly why I kinda stopped making RPs.) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:45 PM |
(I guess?)
Skye.
I got the letter on my Birthday. "I won! I won!" I screamed throughout the house. I was so exstatic. I was literally bouncing off the walls. I would leave the dock tommorow. 'Hmm.. Short notice or what?' I thought to myself. |
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:54 PM |
(I'm reading a book and the 2 girls in it are Honey and Skye xD.)
Honey~
I open the letter, my hands trembiling, my whole family leaning over my chair watching me. As it comes out we all scream with excitement. 2 of them were from my annoying sisters screaming "I get Honey's room!" and "Whoooo No honey for the rest of our lives!" I'm actualy glad that i'm leaving them. My Dad read though the letter. "It's leaving the dock... Tomorrow.." He said staring at me. The screams stopped they all looked at me eyes sadening. "I guess I should pack then" I say skiping over to my room, Ignoring their sad expressions. |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 02:58 PM |
Skye.
I race up to my room and grab my bag. I cram all the clothes I can into it and everything I can into it that would be useful. Including a photo of my family. Im then too tired to do anything, so trapes into my bed, and sleep like a log 'till morning. |
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| 21 Mar 2012 03:07 PM |
Honey~
"What to pack" I say to myself, opening my walk in wardrobe and all my draws and art boxes. I start packing summer stuff like my bikini, my shorts, my sunglasses and other stuff. Then i pack all my headbands, clips, hairbrushes, bobbles. Then i pack ALL my art packs. Then i put a photo of my family to remember them. I finish packing all my other stuff, such as books, Pajamas, toothbrush, Laptop. Then i collapse on my bed, suitcase sitting in the corner, and fall fast asleep all the way untill morning. |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 03:08 PM |
| (Lets wait a bit incase anyone else wants to start) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 03:56 PM |
| (or not... she cant find it..) |
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| 21 Mar 2012 04:01 PM |
| (She found it! Makin' her CS) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 04:10 PM |
| (she might be a while she doent really do RPs) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Mar 2012 04:21 PM |
Hey sketch, some advice, Try putting a main antagonist. Like someone trying to kill everyone on the ship. Sinking it, maybe. Also, you need a multi-paragraph plot, and good CS. This idea is plenty original, just not very developed. Work on those things. |
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| 21 Mar 2012 04:31 PM |
| (is it just me or has rockn's CS not came up?) |
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