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| 24 Apr 2012 07:59 PM |
The world is at war! The crown prince of the Austrian-Hungarian Empire has been shot by a Serbian nationalist. The troops of Austria-Hungary have mobilized against the Serbians, and Russia has mobilized to support Serbia. The German Empire has mobilized in support of Austria-Hungary, and now France has entered the war as well.
The German offensive into France made startling progress, and as Belgian forces were pushed back, so to was the French army, which was pushed back to the Marne. At this point, the violation fo Belgian neutrality brings the British Empire into the conflict.
Now, with the Battle of the Marne over, the British, French, Belgians, and Germans fortify their lines with trenches over five lines thick.
And all of this brings us to you, the loyal volunteer or conscriptee. The application contains several questions to answer.
Nam.e? Ag.e? Countr.y? Arme.d Servic.e?
*Note: You can only serve on the Western Front for now.*
Ready up, trooper, this war won't be over for a long while ...
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| 24 Apr 2012 08:03 PM |
Ex. Application
Nam.e = Bob McBob Ag.e = 23 Countr.y = The British Empire Arme.d Servic.e = Signals Corp.
*Note: Automatic rank is Private, you can be promoted.
NintendoTECH's Application
Nam.e = Henry John Churchill Ag.e = 25 Countr.y = The British Empire Arme.d Servic.e = The British Army Ran.k = Captain |
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| 24 Apr 2012 08:05 PM |
*Raining*
"Ugh, why can't High Command issue some proper rain coats? Or at least a poncho?" |
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| 24 Apr 2012 08:12 PM |
| "I wonder if the Jerries are launching another attack? The first one was ferocious, so I'd say they'll be back." |
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Xzerizon
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| 24 Apr 2012 08:20 PM |
It's good for a first role play.
However, you are lacking a few things.
First, and foremost, most character sheets contain an 'Appearance' section.
Second, it would be interesting to see another country start the war instead of Austria-Hungary.
And what is the technology?
It IS good for a first role play, but take these into mind.
> How to confuse a calculator = 0/0 ▬ Xžε⌐¡z○╖ |
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| 25 Apr 2012 02:33 PM |
| Thanks, I will take these into consideration. |
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| 25 Apr 2012 03:14 PM |
Don't listen to Xzerion.
1. A character sheet does not NEED an appearance. 2. It doesn't matter what country, this is his Role-Play, it can set where he wants it to be. |
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Xzerizon
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| 25 Apr 2012 03:16 PM |
NarutoFox,
good thing my name is not 'Xzerion'.
I never said it needed an appearance: just that most sheets contain it.
I am also not pressuring him into changing the country, but it would be awesome to see what he could come up with.
> How to confuse a calculator = 0/0 ▬ Xžε⌐¡z○╖ |
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| 25 Apr 2012 03:29 PM |
Glad it's all okay.
> How to confuse a calculator = 0/0 ▬ Xžε⌐¡z○╖ |
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