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| 20 Apr 2012 07:58 PM |
Ok rate this poem in this scale: 1-worst poem ever 2-hated it 3-very bad 4-bad 5-failure 6-Average 7-fairly good 8-good 9-very good 10-best poem ever! You must tell why if its anything other than 6,because if you dont,i will not take into notice of the score,cause you most likely no nothing of poetry.
Here it is:
Fire and greed are the same It all starts with a devouring flame That soon becomes impossible to tame But when all is done there is only one to blame
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JoeBobN
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| 20 Apr 2012 07:59 PM |
Eh, I'm going to say 7.
Usually a good poem (however short) uses 1-3 2-4 rhyme,
You did 1-2-3-4.
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gsterman
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Boeing717
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:00 PM |
4
no symbolism no meter no emotions evoked no poetic language but the message attempted to be conveyed was a good one |
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:00 PM |
I agree with JoeBobN, fairly nice.
Not saying it's not good, just saying.
You know there are more "meaningful" poems.
But I love rhyming poems, so I'll give it a 7. |
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gsterman
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:02 PM |
An honset awnser.
-10,000,000,000 |
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:02 PM |
| Boeing,what do you mean no poetic languge? |
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Boeing717
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:07 PM |
| in a poem the words are supposed to flow |
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| 20 Apr 2012 08:09 PM |
| Doesn't flow, like Boeing said |
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