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Rate this poem please.

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firedragon290 is not online. firedragon290
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20 Apr 2012 07:58 PM
Ok rate this poem in this scale:
1-worst poem ever
2-hated it
3-very bad
4-bad
5-failure
6-Average
7-fairly good
8-good
9-very good
10-best poem ever!
You must tell why if its anything other than 6,because if you dont,i will not take into notice of the score,cause you most likely no nothing of poetry.

Here it is:

Fire and greed are the same
It all starts with a devouring flame
That soon becomes impossible to tame
But when all is done there is only one to blame


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JoeBobN is not online. JoeBobN
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20 Apr 2012 07:59 PM
Eh, I'm going to say 7.

Usually a good poem (however short) uses 1-3 2-4 rhyme,

You did 1-2-3-4.

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gsterman is not online. gsterman
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20 Apr 2012 08:00 PM
negative 5000
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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20 Apr 2012 08:00 PM
4

no symbolism
no meter
no emotions evoked
no poetic language
but the message attempted to be conveyed was a good one
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Coolxdude2 is not online. Coolxdude2
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20 Apr 2012 08:00 PM
I agree with JoeBobN, fairly nice.

Not saying it's not good, just saying.


You know there are more "meaningful" poems.

But I love rhyming poems, so I'll give it a 7.
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gsterman is not online. gsterman
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20 Apr 2012 08:02 PM
An honset awnser.

-10,000,000,000
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firedragon290 is not online. firedragon290
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20 Apr 2012 08:02 PM
Boeing,what do you mean no poetic languge?
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Lavaperson123 is not online. Lavaperson123
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20 Apr 2012 08:07 PM
6
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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20 Apr 2012 08:07 PM
in a poem the words are supposed to flow
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jimbobucky is not online. jimbobucky
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20 Apr 2012 08:09 PM
Doesn't flow, like Boeing said
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