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| 13 Apr 2012 03:51 PM |
So i was getting home from school and i did all my match homework at the end of doing my match i got an update on my iphone (ROBLOX extention app) and i had 1 new message i clicked on it, and nothing came up, i tried a few times and it didnt work so i gave up and did the rest of my homework. later, i wondered if it would work on my PC so i logged on and checked my messages and still nothing happened. i clicked 6 times and it lagged out like it usully does on chrome, so i restarted chrome. after that point i was going to go to OT so i pressed "reload pages" and a i was on a persons profile his name was "ACONZENC" I figured i must have hit somthing before google chrome gave out so i forgot about it. Later i went to go build my place, it was pretty cool but thats when it started.. all of a sudden the whole screen went black and i figured it was my browser going nuts again, to i tried curl+alt+delete and got back into the game. except..i wasnt alone..Aconzenc was there..standing there and i was on the floor with my ROBLOXian body parts stretched over a long puddle of blood. at that point i left as quick as i could, and there again, i was at aconzencs profile.. so then i went to his profile and went to his place, where he started giving me clues on who he was..and eventully he led me to a last place, some hospital (theres a storyline he made up) and i thought: HEY! if this is all a storyline he made up, this must be fake! so i was about to click the leave button, when a message appeared in chat saying "i wouldnt do that.." and i looked at its name.."Aconzenc" was 1x1x1x1..Suddenly, my computer shook while smoke spewed out of the sides and then it suddently got super hot so i dropped it on the floor and just then, just like that, the whole computer died.
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:53 PM |
| Hay! i made it in like 20 seconds |
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:53 PM |
I think some of it seems a bit too fake. :/ Like the whole 1x1x1x1 and computer dying thing.
But a really scary creepypasta. e.e |
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:53 PM |
| eh, kind of good but it need to be a bit more...well, creepy. |
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crayon24
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:54 PM |
Needs work. Couldn't have been done in 20 seconds. This belongs in OT. There is all of my criticism. |
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:56 PM |
I agree with winged, but is is pretty creepy.
[~ʎɹǝɔɹos sıɥʇ sı ʇɐɥʍ~] |
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:57 PM |
@crayon this does not belong in OT silly. :3
[~ʎɹǝɔɹos sıɥʇ sı ʇɐɥʍ~] |
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| 13 Apr 2012 03:57 PM |
| me before 1x1x1x1 :\ me after 1x1x1x1 came up :P |
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| 13 Apr 2012 04:07 PM |
"This is creepy"
Its a Creepypasta about Roblox. And What was "Match" Supposed to be? Math? This is stupid. Not one shriek of fear came out of me. |
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Corvu55
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| 13 Apr 2012 04:07 PM |
| lol roblox cannot be creepy |
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