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Re: WIJ Book 1 Chapter 3: Act Of Valor

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kungfuman32 is not online. kungfuman32
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09 Apr 2012 08:13 PM
This Is the third chapter in the "WIJ Book 1". If you have not read the other chapters, please do so. I have taken the time and effort to make sure everything is understandable in the chapter. Please Enjoy the story.

Prologue:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65873219

Chapter 1: Shockies Til The End
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65902778

Chapter 2: Citadel Under Siege
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65937864

Chapter 3: Act Of Valor

Marshal Owen looks at Silent as he closes the door be hide them. "Sir, all of the Citizens have been evacuated. Is there anything you want me to do?" Silent look at Owen. "No." Silent replies. "Sir, we need to get out of here. Hostiles are moving closer and closer to this hanger." The pilot said. Silent climbs in the the shuttle with the rest of the Colonels. "Marshal Owen are you coming on?" Colonel Lucario asked. "No, I need to make sure that the Central Mainframe it wiped clean from here." Marshal Owen walked out the hanger towards the central mainframe. Right outside was two WIJ personal. "You two soldier. Where are you headed?" Marshal Owen asked. The two troopers turned around and saluted. "I'm Corporal Relex." "And I am Corporal Cortes." Marshal Owen looked at bother of them and nodded. "Follow me, I am heading to the Central Mainframe. I will need your help getting there." The two soldiers picked up there rifles and began to follow Owen to the Central Mainframe. While they was rushing down the hall, a Imperium squad spotted them. Owen took cover be be hide a bench while the other two his be hide some crates. "Dammit, I need a weapon." Marshal Owen said. Corporal Relex pulled out his Y17 and threw it to Owen. "Thanks!" Owen said. Relex peek around a corner and shot one of the soldiers in the leg. This caused him to fall from cover. Corporal Cortes sought to finish the job and fired a shot though the soldier's head. The Imperium soldiers began to rush Owen. Owen quickly shot the soldiers before they could get to him. "Are you alright?" Owen asked. Corporal Relex nods and looks to see Corporal Cortes dead on the floor. He was shot multiple times in the chest. Owen Leaned his head down for a quick mourn and began to head towards the Central Mainframe.

Kung looks at Flint. "So where were you?" Kung asked. Flint looks back at Kung. "I was escorting civilians out from the market district. That's when I saw you, Nahom, and Tommy." The four soldiers continued to rush down the corridor avoiding enemies when ever they can. They stop at a closed door. Nahom presses his head against the door to hear gunshots coming from the other side. "Guys get your weapons ready." Nahom said. The opened the door to see a the the Bio-Park being torn from battle. It felt like a war zone. "Nahom sir!" Nahom looked to see a soldier calling out to him. He rush pass the trees and over the bench to the rock. "Keep your head down sir!" the soldier said. "What's your name soldier?" Nahom asked. "My named is Ash. We were guarding this area of the citadel when the Imperium broke down the door. We have been fighting them for over an hour now!" "Kung peaked over the rock to see how many soldiers were fighting. There was 17 WIJ and 18 Imperium soldiers. "Sir if we can" before Ash could finish he was shot dead by an Imperium soldier. "Flint, If we can run and grab that turret. We can mow these guys down." Tommy suggested. Flint looked at Kung then back at Tommy. "Listen Flint, your the fastest out of all of us." Nahom said. "Alright fine I will do it." Flint grabbed it Y17 and rushed to the turret. He jumped ran pass the gun fire and dove into into the energy shields surrounding the turret. Flint turned the turret on and proceeded to kill the Imperium. The Turret laser ripped the soldiers apart. You could hear them scream in agony as they are rip to shreds. The surviving Imperium soldiers fled off out of the Park to the other room. When all of the WIJ soldiers started assessing the wounded and dead, Nahom Kung could see Marshal Owen and Corporal Relex in the distance. "Marshal Owen!" Kung called out. Owen turned to see Kung, Nahom, and Tommy. "Nahom what are you doing here?" Nahom looked at his damaged suit and back at Owen. "We are doing what the Chairman ordered. Getting the hell out of here anyway we can." "No change of plans. You are coming with me. We have to wipe the Central Mainframe. If those Imperium idiots get their hands on it...." Marshal just stared down. "They would have the info that could cripple WIJ to it's knees."
Flint walked up to Marshal. "Sir don't worry. You have the best soldiers here to help you." Suddenly the Imperium Star Class Destroyer fired a laser at the Park sector. The Laser Ripped a chunk out of the citadel. WIJ personal was being sucked into cold space. "HOLD ON!" Owen yelled. Kung looked down to see WIJ soldiers being pulled into space. Tommy's hands began to let go of the bench he was holding on. Tommy could not hold on any longer and was sucked into space with the rest of the soldiers. Kung tried to grab Tommy but he could not grab him in time. The subspace shields came up and created separate space inside the park. "Kung are you alright?" Flint asked. Kung just sat there. His friend gone just like that. Kung got up and began to walk to the exit of the park.

They had made it to the Central Mainframe. "Alright let me just access the database." Owen looked closly at the holo screen. "It seems as tho two shock troopers are located inside the ship." Relex looks at the screen. "Could we contact them in anyway?" Relex asked. Owen began to contact Cymru and Benjonas. "What are you two doing in that enemy ship?" Benjonas replies. "We have found a way to take it down sir. Everything! If one of us could ripped this energy core out. It will overload everything." Owen looks at Nahom then back at the screen. "Can you rip the core out?" Cymru gets on the call. "Sir, if we tried to take out the core. It would overload our Shield implants." "Sir what if they use two shield implants. It should double the effect right?" Flint asked. Owen stared at Flint and said. "That just might work. We have never tried it before but it should work in theory." Benjonas and Cymru who are still in the enemy ship decided it would be Benjonas who would rip the core out. Cymru gives Benjonas his shield implant and preceded to make it out the core room. "Benjonas, when you come back I will have a medal waiting for you." Owen said with a smile. Benjonas looked at the floor then at the core. He began to run towards the core which was about a mile or three miles away. In the WIJ Central Mainframe Imperium soldier rush into the room firing at the WIJ soldiers. Kung dove be hide the holo core. Owen started shooting back at the enemy. For ever Imperium soldier they killed it seemed another one always took it's place. "Dammit they just keep coming!" Nahom noted. "Keep firing we can't let them take this Central mainframe!" Owen yelled. Flint and Relex had little energy left in their guns. "Sir Relex and I are low on energy!" While peeking out of cover Flint was shot in the arm. "Arrrg! My arm!" "Flint are you ok?" Relex asked. "Yeah I will be fine just a flesh wound." While the Owen and them were holding off the Imperium, Benjonas was making his way towards the Central Core. Benjonas ran as fast as he could and leap for the Core. As he grabbed onto the ledge, the energy coming from the core started to drain his suit's battery. Benjonas struggled to grab the core. As he grab the core he ripped it from the stand. In a blink of an eye the ship exploded with Cymru and Benjonas still inside. The explosion was so great it knock Kung,Owen,Relex,Nahom and the rest of their feet. The Imperiums started a mass retreat when there Planet sized vessel was destroyed. The Star like ship began to retreat back to
dark space. "Owen are you OK?" Nahom asked. "I will live." Owen replied as he stood up. Relex looked to his left to see Benjonas suit badly destroyed drifting towards the Citadel. "Silent are you there?" Owen asked. "Yeah I am here." "We will need a ship to pick up a hero."

Later that month Chairman Silent began his prewar speech. Millions of WIJ personal stood as they watch Silent give his speech. "We will not forget what has happened that day. We shall fight. We shall overcome. We shall WIN." Over near the WIJ K.I.A wall Kung and Nahom stood looking at where their friend Tommy name was in graved. "Hey Kung." Kung and Nahom turned around to see Benjonas. "Wow you look like you been though hell." Kung said. "Well the shield only protected be from the blast. Not the space stuff that keep ramming into me." Benjonas walked closely toward the KIA wall. "Captain Cymru was a good friend of mine." Nahom said. "Yeah he was mines too." Benjonas replied. "I guess we all lost someone this month huh? It's cool tho cause we are going to hit those Imperium fools on their home planet." Kung said as he walked back to the crowed. "Hey Benjonas did you get that medal yet?" Nahom asked. "Yeah I got it. It was given to me a few days ago. What did you get?" Nahom looked at his medal. "I was given the "Act Of Leadership" Award. Kung, Flint and Relex was given the "Act Of Valor" Award." Nahom began to walk over to the crowed of people. "Come on Benjonas Silent is still giving his speech." Benjonas nodded and began to follow Nahom.

End Of WIJ Book 1.

I hope you enjoyed it!

Author's Note:

The Park is a district inside the citadel. Which is in space.

The next book will take place on the Imperium Home world.

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Graulas is not online. Graulas
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09 Apr 2012 08:16 PM
Many grammar mistakes but dedication and creativity overall.

Very good.
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kungfuman32 is not online. kungfuman32
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09 Apr 2012 08:24 PM
Thanks. It improves over time.
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kungfuman32 is not online. kungfuman32
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10 Apr 2012 12:29 PM
Comment.
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SilentSwords is not online. SilentSwords
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10 Apr 2012 12:46 PM
I like it.

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tmohs is not online. tmohs
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10 Apr 2012 12:47 PM
And now for something completely different.
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WickedErasor is not online. WickedErasor
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10 Apr 2012 12:56 PM
When a new character is speaking you create a new paragraph. It makes it a billion times easier to read and it is correct.

Ex.)

Jimmy loved to eat his pizza and he gobbled it down by the hand full.

"Jimmy slow down!" Yelled Jimmy's mom as Jimmy continued to gobble down pizza.

"Mom, it ish awsome pizza!" Replied Jimmy with a mouthfull of pizza.
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Yo911 is not online. Yo911
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10 Apr 2012 12:59 PM
This looks like a huge blob....0_o
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kungfuman32 is not online. kungfuman32
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10 Apr 2012 01:50 PM
Thanks....for the feedback..
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jammy101101 is not online. jammy101101
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12 Apr 2012 04:28 AM
Eh, I wasn't even mentioned in this chapter.

give back my fame and glory plz

Nice work, again.
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nahom007 is not online. nahom007
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12 Apr 2012 10:42 AM
I love this chapter. And I also love my sailor mouth.
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12 Apr 2012 10:45 AM
this is for no-lifes like me.
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