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| 11 Apr 2012 08:07 PM |
So some people have been debating wether I can rap or not. Here's some raps that I used in a rap battle forum earlier.
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Let me show you how to assemble a rap. I first take some ideas which you seem to lack
Then I start to peice together a line or two Soon they start coming together like they always do
Once I get my lines out and you see them fly You best just sit there and let the time fly by
Because these lines, you know they can't be beat I got those rhymes that you hear echoing off the street
And the best part is all I have to do Is think for a bit then deliver this to you
Now just imagine if I couldn't rap like this You may not care, but it'd make my fans pretty pissed
And see the thing is, it isn't too hard to be like me All you have to do is some link words, pretty easy?
One word here. a rhyming one there Even though lines like mine are pretty rare
You better just stop trying, might aswell quit Because everybody knows that my lines are legit
And yours, well, let me just say this Even Hellen Keller can tell you're lines are ****
And that, son, is why you shouln't come in this game Because when that crowd goes wild, I'll be the one to blame
You'll just be sitting on your couch, watching TV Watching me make them screem cause I'm the dopest MC.
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Son, I don't think you understand the seriousness of this game. You just showed up and put your name to shame.
I think that this entire forum will agree, When I say that nobody's better than me.
I'm Eminem, the king, the father of rap. All you are is "Zertex", who's ever heard of that?
The best thing for you to do right now is quit. My lines are the greatest, even you have to admit.
Oh, and you want to talk about who just got servered? Take a look right here to see who got the last word.
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Why do all of you think you can rap? I swear you'd give a deaf person a heart attack.
Even Trix The Rabbit can rap better than you. Hey, you know, maybe even Helen Keller too.
There are certain things that you shouldn't mess with, men. Like guns, fire, and especially Eminem.
Just stop trying, look at my pages of rhymes, Then go back to your corner and stop wasting your time.
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:08 PM |
| Oh great! You've copied and pasted. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:08 PM |
| I wonder how much time he spent typing this... |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:08 PM |
| Award for first Forum rap that didn't suck. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:09 PM |
| If you made this then you can rap well son. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:09 PM |
You can't rap on a game. All you're doing is typing, not talking in a rhythmic speed. tl;dr, FAIL.
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:10 PM |
Here's the link to the forum for proof:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65974128 |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:10 PM |
I just read all that. I don't know why.. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:11 PM |
| Theres rhythm in poetry and all that is is typing. Explain that CopyWighted. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:11 PM |
I read the first lines and stopped
"rap" and "lack" don't even rhyme |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:12 PM |
| It's a slanted rhyme. Sticklers for every little thing... People need to become educated.... |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:13 PM |
| @Anna (How was Sword Fighting Tournament?) And yes Rap and Lack do sorta rhyme. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:14 PM |
Sticklers... heh
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:14 PM |
| Most of us can't rap. This guy can. Most rappers I listen too are just horrible. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:14 PM |
To rhyme the ending letters have to be the same.
>ap >ack
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:15 PM |
@Jelly Poems aren't rap. Rap usually moves in a fast beat. This has no proof of being fast, or having any type of beat.
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:15 PM |
der, they don't have to be the same post edit
"straight" "late"
but you know what i mean |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:15 PM |
So..where did you copy that from?
-Sev7en |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:16 PM |
| Didn't understand huh? I said poems have rhythm and all you do is type/write it. If poems can do that so could typed out raps. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:18 PM |
@Jelly You're silly. I laugh.
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:19 PM |
Ok here's the thing.
1. Completly original, I swear to everthing I hold dear.
2. Look up the definition of a slanted rhyme for you uneducated kids.
3. Seriously? What kind of ignorance do you posses to think that poems can't be fast or have a beat. Rap is a forum of poetry. In fact, about 20% of rap songs were poems at one point. If you can't but a beat in your head and read this to it then you have never heard quality rap before. |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:20 PM |
@Eminem No rap has quality. For rap is ghetto, poetry.
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:21 PM |
Copy, you're stupid, I laughed.
Why argue something so obvious? |
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| 11 Apr 2012 08:21 PM |
| Honestly, I hate rap, especially the ones with endless cussing. In my opinion its the worst music ever invented |
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