mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 12:54 PM |
A babysitter was watching television in the living room. She finally put the "little brat" to sleep. He kept bugging her ever since his parents left. She could finally relax now. He is sleeping and she is allowed to watch television until the parents return. Finally, she sat down and turned the television on. There was nothing interesting on the current program so she changed it to find something boring on the next one as well. She changed the program every five seconds. "Nothing on this damn television", she though. As she was storming trough every possible program something could be heard from the basement. "Thud, thud." She jumped, the remote fell on the floor. "Damn." She had to bend to access the remote from the ground. As she grabbed it the phone rang. She dropped the remote in shock and fell on the floor. She looked at the phone and sighed in relief. She stood up and grabbed the phone from the table. Her finger pressed the green button, she pressed the phone by her ear. "Hey, I'm just checking. Is everything alright?. It was the mother. "Yeah, I put him to sleep." "Alright, good. Anyway I also wanted to ask you for something". "Sure", she said with a bit of an annoyed voice. "I need you to go to the basement and pick up a black metal suitcase, call me back when you find it". "On it", she said. "My payment is not big enough", she though. Then her thoughts turned to the strange noise that came from the basement. She dismissed the noise, she was tired and probably imagined it. Or it could of been a cat or some other small animal. She put the phone on the table and approached the basement door. She put her hands on the door handle. She hesitated a bit when she finally opened the door. The door revealed a badly lighted stair case leading down to the basement. She felt the wall trying to find the light switch. Finally, she felt it so she pressed the button. It lighted her path and she finally moved down. She reached the basement and opened the light. It lighted the basement and the first thing she noticed was a clown, no not a clown. There was a clown statue in the corner. Before she could analyze it the light bulb burned out. She was scared at the moment but she remembered that she was a grown adult and that her fear is irrational. The light from the staircase lighted the basement enough anyway. She looked at the statue. It scared her. She decided not to look at it anymore. She didn't have to stay in the basement for long. She found the suit case. It was lying on a pile of junk at the other end of the room. She grabbed the suitcase when she suddenly felt cold. She looked up and found that the basement window was opened. She closed it and grabbed the suitcase. Finally she could leave the basement. She turned around and passed by the clown again. It sent chills down her spine. She finally reached the stair case and ran up. She turned the light off and shut the door. She sighted in relief and laughed at herself. But still, there was something wrong about that clown statue. She grabbed the phone and called the boy's mother. "Hey, did you find it." "Yeah", she stopped for a bit, "I did." "Is something wrong, you seem kind of... scared." "Oh, well that clown statue you have at the basement. It just creeps me out". A long pause of silence. "Get out of the house, we don't have a clown statue". |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:07 PM |
| Bawmp, I'm open for feedback. |
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dadudi1
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:32 PM |
| I like it. You should continue on. |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:33 PM |
| Well its already done. I left the end unfinished to make it more scary. Not knowing what will happen makes it scarier. But you gotta admit it, the ending is a real twist. |
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dadudi1
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:36 PM |
| D: I want to you to continue it. |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:38 PM |
| you might wanna try another creepypasta instead, the clown statue one is getting kind of old |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:38 PM |
| Well if it makes you happy. I can't continue but I can tell you what I thought would happen. After the mother said that they don't have a statue the basement doors would open with a bang and the phone would fall to the floor. The last thing the mother hears from the phone would be a scream and then the phone would shut down. |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:39 PM |
| @MrGiraffe1, Never really read one with a clown statue. But I did read one with an angel statue. |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:39 PM |
| Comrade, can you do Slenderman or Jeff? More suspense :3 |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:40 PM |
| @Red, Slenderman I have heard of but Jeff. I think that I'm gonna search it :P. |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:42 PM |
GO TO SLEEP. THE VIDEO.
IT WILL ****** SCARE YOU.
PERMENTALY.
I WARNED YOU.
But it will make a good story. |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:44 PM |
| I can't find the Jeff figure... |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:45 PM |
I think I found it on the creepypasta wiki. Is it Jeff The Killer? The creepy clown dude? |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:46 PM |
YES.
JEFF THE KILLER.
Loook at the face.
Damn nature, you scary! |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:47 PM |
You should do one about Ed Gein, the most famous of all serial killers. :D
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:49 PM |
| @MrGiraffe1, Werid, I've never heard about Ed Gein. Will read about him though. |
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:51 PM |
Alfred based Norman bates off of him, he used to skin woman because he found it weird how woman had control over men. He had weird corpses and bowls made of skulls and stuff.
Oh and there’s this highway in Canada that’s called the “Highway of Tears” where people go missing in.
So much great material in life. |
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mimalover
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| 09 Apr 2012 01:52 PM |
| Interesting. I've got some ideas for my next story. |
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