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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:40 PM |
Mmkay;
I'm a menace villain, my pen is sitting spilling, my livers killing Then I let you witness chiz when it hit the ceiling The idiots willing to give the listeners the sickest feeling Like mixing some Benadryl and penicillin then I'm filling the clip With a written, can you picture my pistol drilling? A million women and children when I'm illing but it isn't real, it's a rap On the real, it's a wrap, how could you possibly stop the Apocalypse When I'm atomic bombing the populous Shock the metropolis hostile as a kid popping the Glock at his moms And his pops then he hops in his drop with his iPod rocking the Slaughterish Documentation and lyrics I write with confidence Write like a columnist slash novelist I'm in this game to demolish, establish my dominance Over prominent rappers you popping chiz 'til you opposite I can spit ominous so spit politics now I'm Haile Selassie Gandhi and Pac of this hip hop genre, boi!
~ Proof
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:43 PM |
A mennace villain? More like a scared chicken.
You call that rap? That's something I call crap.
I've got tallent I've got skills, I don't need to talk about poppin' bottles & taking pills.
So go make up some more words, use that urban dictionary. I'll beat you at anything, even pictionary.
We don't want you here, You're 'dominance' doesn't bring me the slightest fear.
Short. I suck at this. P: |
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:44 PM |
There's A Switch, I Flip, Emotions Cut Off So Cold I Might've Froze My Butt Off And This Ain't Even The Tip Of The Iceberg Yet It's Like Squirting A Squirt Gun In The Ocean, F Off Other Words I Didn't Put A Dent In A Can Compared To The Damage I've Yet To Do Long As You Still Have Feelings To Hurt, I'll Be Around As Long As You Let Me Get To You Long As I Got Two Balls To Palm, I'll Be The Bomb, You're Just A False Alarm Get Scared Little Peasant, And See If I Don't Come Along And Stop Your Farm Thunder And Lightning, Rain, Hail, Sleet With A Tornado's The Kind Of Brainstorm I Get So When The Wind Starts Blowing, Chiz, Talking About Goin' In? Goin' Insane's More Like It! Wizard Of Words When He He Spits Hazardous With It Like A Disastrous Blizzard So You Better Listen Quick Fast Don't Miss It Yeah Go Ahead Little Idiot Diss It But When You Get Hit With A Sick, Explicit Flow Don't Ask How Much Of His Passion Is It That Goes Just Know, That All He Knows Is This It's Better To Kick As Than Kiss It Disastardly Of Audacity Mental Capacity Unmatched It Has To Be Stopped But It Can't Be, But Man I Can't Just Keep Doing Them Like That Or No One Will Rap With Me 'Cept One, You Asked Who Is It?
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battery56
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:47 PM |
This is gettin' tennnnnnse.
~~Squidboi2 for Janitor~~ |
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:47 PM |
Welp, I give up. >.<
I really really suck at this. |
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:48 PM |
Hey, TheShoe, don't put yourself down.
From my view, you can do better than any old rapper.
My inspiration is Eminem, so I listen to his music, and think like him.
Find your inpsiration, and you'll be in the finals.
I can tell this is one of your first rap battles.
~ Proof |
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:49 PM |
The, you did better than Zertex, but okay, ZERTEX, I Challenge you...to a RAP BATTLE!
Duh, winning |
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:51 PM |
Devel, wait, let me destroy YeIIo.
~ Proof |
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battery56
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:52 PM |
I don't need to share these words to put you down I keep hearing you slur Makin' ShowBox frown Your wording shows no skill Just makes me want to kill You. You're right your words are like ice so cold and slow, no one wants a slice. You want a rap battle, come at me bro, Because you got no skill, you just a h-.
<3
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:53 PM |
Hes really good..
Duh, winning |
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battery56
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:55 PM |
I know, I don't rap, I write poems. :P
~~Squidboi2 for Janitor~~ |
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:55 PM |
Battery, sorry, can't reply with rapping. Trying to beat YeIIo with a headache..
Please, another time, right now, YeIIo and me are neck 'n' neck.. :L
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:55 PM |
I'm good?
I hate rap so much, so I can't listen to music.
I do write songs though, I'm a guitarist and a singer. I guess I was just writing out songs and making 'em look like rap. Lol. |
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ISOLAYTOR
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:56 PM |
You're copying off of Eminem. Good job.
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 10:59 PM |
@ISO;
I am?
ISO, just because my lyrics sound like Em doesn't mean I'm copying off of him.
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ISOLAYTOR
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| 08 Apr 2012 11:00 PM |
Loud Noises, Welcome to hell.
It IS those two songs. Search it up.
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| 08 Apr 2012 11:02 PM |
ISO, er... you win..
But, to be honest, I never knew Eminem wrote those..
I just heard them when you posted them..
o.e
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| 08 Apr 2012 11:03 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65910391 Duh, winning |
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ISOLAYTOR
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| 08 Apr 2012 11:04 PM |
LOL RIGHT SO YOU COINCIDENTALLY WROTE THE SAME THING EMINEM WROTE. YEP, I'LL BELIEVE THAT.
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Zertrex
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| 08 Apr 2012 11:08 PM |
Mmkay, you got me. ;c
But whoever said this was freestyle?
It says a 'Rap', so I rapped.
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