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| 08 Apr 2012 03:09 PM |
Author Notes:
WIJ is Dutch for We or Us.
WIJ is a group created by SilentSwords. As a Sergeant in WIJ I have seen a lot of things. I decided to write this story as a fan fiction of WIJ. Some of the people in this story are based on soldiers in WIJ. Some names have been change to make it seem more like a real person's name. iRykorz name would be Rykors.
Prologue:
"Sir we have something on our radar." Trooper Parker said. Officer Jammy looked up wonder what it was. " Bring up the front ship camera." Officer Jammy ordered. The holoscreen lit up showing what was in front of them. Officer Jammy looked confused as there was nothing in view. "Sir we have scanned the object and have found it's not moving at a constant speed." Officer Jammy turned to Corporal Davis. "Tell me Corporal what do you think it is?" Officer Jammy asked. Corporal Davis turned to his holoscreen looking though WIJ logs. "SIR! A high energy signature is coming from the unknown object." "Switch to energy scans." Officer Jammy said. The holoscreen started showing high volumes of energy and growing. "What the hell is that thing?" Looking though the glass Trooper Anderson could see a high concentration of energy coming from out of the blue. "Sir Look!" Officer Jammy jumped from his chair to see what Trooper Anderson was seeing.
"Switch to FTL drives! We are getting the hell out of here!" Officer Jammy Yelled. "We can't sir. Something is blocking our Jump point." In a blink of an eye the energy that was forming out of thin space shoots towards the WIJ class carrier. Ripping though it like there was nothing there at all. "Officer Jammy! We have high casualties in the medical Wing!" Officer Jammy just stood there, frozen in fear. He could not think straight will all of the sounds of people and screaming going on in the Ship. Sergeant Connor comes running in the room. He then grabs Officer Jammy by the arm tugging him yelling at him to "Come on."
Jammy and tall started running down though the corridor to the emergency escape pods. Jammy peek left to see that the energy blast ripped apart the ships cloak. He could see it was a unlike anything he had ever seen in his entire life. Before he could finish comprehending every detail, he was pushed into on of the escape pods. "Sir you ok?" Sergeant Connor Asked. Jammy did not say a word. He just sat there still in shocked. "Connor what was that thing. It just cut though us like butter!" Trooper Anderson asked. "I don't know but it one hell of a ship." Jammy looked though the rear view of the pod. "How many made it?" Officer Jammy asked. Connor stared for a second. "Aboud four pods made it." "So Fourteen our of Four thousand made it?!" Anderson said out of shock.
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ShadowSTR
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| 09 Apr 2012 12:16 PM |
| What the hell??? That is not aprppiate for me I'm only 9. Please no stuff that would be cussing. |
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| 09 Apr 2012 12:23 PM |
| I made my brther post that. He's 13. Not what I posted. But it was good. I wish I got comments like this in my story. Atleast you didn't get "Your story is succkish" and "This is just alot of ponies. :D= You D;= me): |
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| 09 Apr 2012 12:39 PM |
| Nice. A teensy bit more detail and better adjectives in Part 3, maybe. Could I be like the annyoing guy with OCD on grammar or something? |
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| 09 Apr 2012 12:40 PM |
| Like I said, really good. Annoying* |
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Evelio95
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| 12 Apr 2012 04:04 AM |
fake
i would never be frozen in shock or use those technical terms when faced with these certain outcomes.
Just kidding; nice story, seems legit. I just like how no one said I was in it. ;-; |
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