Birdzy
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| 10 Feb 2012 05:07 PM |
This is mine. It is original, I did not copy anything!
chapter one Departure
No, no, this can't be happening! Gingerblossom thought. She looked around at the cats she'd grown up with, the cats she wanted to stay with until she went to StarClan! Ravenstar looked down at her, no sign of emotion on his face. He was getting old, and was known to make bad decisions for the Clan, but he refused to resign. Cloudstorm, the deputy, walked up to Ravenstar and whispered something. "What? Of course I am making the right choice! Sending these cats out of the Clan to establish a new one will ensure SkyClan can live on elsewhere, even if the monsters destroy our territory! Are you questioning your leader's decisions?" Ravenstar's eyes narrowed. "O-of course not!" Cloudstorm almost whimpered as he climbed back down. Poor Cloudstorm, Gingerblossom thought, But I'm going to be worse off. "Gingerblossom, and Featherflight... That isn't enough cats. I'll send Fernpaw and Dreamcloud." Ravenstar decided. He had a loopy grin on his face. But Fernpaw is just an apprentice! And you're sending the only medicine cat, Dreamcloud, on the journey?
Gingerblossom didn't dare say that out loud. Instead, she looked over to see if Featherflight would say anything. Gingerblossom enjoyed the look of horror on Featherflight's face; they had never been friends. Rivals, maybe. Foes; much more likely. Poor Fernpaw, on the other hand, was easily scared and would have a lot of trouble on the journey. She was already laying down, shaking, with her paws over her head. Gingerblossom could hear terrified wailing. Ravenstar stood up and began to speak again. "You are to create a new Clan, and to never come back to SkyClan! Do you understand?" Oh, how his dark amber eyes made you feel do small inside! Gingerblossom nodded, trying to hold back tears. Ravenstar climbed down the side of the ledge slowly and led the four cats to the entrance. "Now, leave. And NEVER COME BACK. For SkyClan lives on as long as you are out there!" Ravenstar pushed Gingerblossom towards the camp entrance. She turned around and saw Cloudstorm mouth, "Good luck." "Goodbye, SkyClan." Gingerblossom whispered, taking one last look at her home, and then she strode out of camp for the last time. |
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Birdzy
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| 10 Feb 2012 07:12 PM |
| Translation: That dude was too lazy and didn't read. Lol, k. |
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| 11 Feb 2012 08:08 AM |
| That is so amazing. I started crying. It touched me. |
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| 11 Feb 2012 09:18 AM |
| K sorry I accidentaly pushed post XD I meant *Epik just epik XDDDDDD lol anyways..... how do u make a fourm? I wanna show everyone mai winning first place RWCM story :3 |
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uhavfun
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Birdzy
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| 11 Mar 2012 03:47 PM |
| No no no Birdzy. We don't say really... we lol at how stupid he really is. Next time, he should say: "Why does it have charectors?" or "Why is there a PLOT!!!!!!??????!?!?!??!!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?" I mean really? What a dumb question. I say thumbs up Birdzy. Verrrrry nice job ^-^ |
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uhavfun
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NilPirate
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| 11 Mar 2012 06:12 PM |
I stopped reading at "cats"
Seriously, though. Don't waste your time with writing fanfiction, bad fanfiction at that. Get real. Make a plot. Design a world. Build characters. Improve characters. Write from the heart. Work hard. Losing is fun. Take charge. Get a gun. Stay in school. Don't do drugs. Write. ???. Profit.
-I have a siggy because I'm hip, yo.- |
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| 13 Mar 2012 03:01 PM |
| Well.... maybe some people want to have a say in how they wanted warrior cats to end, and be creative at that. Why don't you read the title? It says: RWCM 3rd Place Winning Story..... R: Roblox W:Warrior C:Cats M:Movie........ reeeead idium. |
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uhavfun
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| 15 Mar 2012 07:04 AM |
| And how should I have known the acronym? |
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NilPirate
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| 15 Mar 2012 03:26 PM |
Roblox Warrior Cats Movie? The plot thickens. The viscosity is too high.
Still, that's a bit of a dumb idea. |
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uhavfun
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| 18 Mar 2012 07:33 PM |
"No, actually it's not"
Yes it is, IMO |
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Olympus23
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uhavfun
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| 08 Apr 2012 01:37 PM |
| Then why would you post if you did not care? |
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| 08 Apr 2012 03:57 PM |
| becuz someone needs to say it depr de derp |
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uhavfun
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| 08 Apr 2012 06:21 PM |
| You should spell correctly. |
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| 10 Apr 2012 02:31 PM |
| yeah wellll i could care less |
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uhavfun
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| 10 Apr 2012 08:47 PM |
| Why? Its a rule last I checked. |
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