Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 09:24 AM |
CHAPTER 1 • • • I clutched the paper hard. It was some sort of a letter, that I intercepted from the Vaktovians. My elevator door thrust open and I saw Sir ColourTheory sitting in his chair. "Sir! I-I have a letter that I intercepted from the Vaktovians! Something - suspicious." I called, looking down with humbled respect. I was a secret spy-assassin, bidding my time for the roblox assault team. "Why would you intercept it? We've just recently ended this war, I don't want to cause any more ruccus between---" He paused when he took a quick glance to the paper in my hands, seeing the word 'sparrow' "Give that to me!" He asked impatiently. He put it in front of him and read. *Dear sir General Dologan Madrek, I must not risk too much information within this message; as that is much too dangerous. I would like you to meet me at the abandoned shack east of the Vaktovian Capital, where I have a simple task I would like you to acomplish. Meet me and I will discuss this certain task and is a master plan to crumble the plans of the Sparrow Corporation. Sincerely, Emperor Vaktus* Confused, Jacob looked at this message. *What could he POSSIBLY want to talk about with regards to Sparrow Corp?* "You. I want you to bring back this message to where it belongs. Let us see where it goes. Follow it. Secretively listen to this meeting and report back to me. Understood?" "Yes, sir." I said, taking off slowly into the elevator. • • • I was in my own room - packing up my items, my weaponry, and everything needed for this journey. I will work hard and show myself. I have my Cyclone - my Nisus, my rope and other miscellaneous items. I pack rushed and quickly and at last I am ready. I will not fail. I am Xenatus. • • • I set out for my journey. I am given 1 fighter jet of the lowest class to make my approach. I soar through the skies, seeing it change from the bright white to dark orange. It is long before I return the letter to its designated spot. The mailbox of the Vaktovian central operation center. Of course, dressing as a Vaktovian citizen is mandatory, I am but one inside a city full of Vaktovian troops, trained and ready for full fledged combat. I wait by the post while I wait for someone to arrive. I see a trooper, dressed in Vaktovian armour filling up his bag. He leaves, and I follow him. He is taken to a large office building; at least 10 stories high. I follow him in, and I am taken into a gloomy office building that is greatly alive with much technology work. He goes in an elevator, and I see through the glass it goes 6 floors up. Excellent, I know exactly where to go. When the elevator comes back down, I press the '6' button. Almost instantly, Dologan walks out of an office. I stand innocently, and walk the other way. Thus, he takes the stairs. After a few 30 seconds or so, I follow. I reach the very bottom, and see him down under. He is going outside. He is fulfilling his responsibility. • • • After 10 minutes of walking, I see the old shack mentioned in the message. It appears a bit more foggy here, and Dologan enters the shack. I stay outside and prepare to listen to what is going on.
"Greetings, my lord. How may I be of service?" I heard Dologan say. "Greetings." I heard a few other Vaktovians say. "Very well then Dologan. You see, just a few days ago, my spy squad has retrieved the first Spectrum Technology created by the Sparrow Corporation. This technology is very advanced and will be tested upon the Roblox Assault Team." Vaktus said. It sounded radioized a bit, maybe since Vaktus wouldn't come all the way to an abandoned shack for a short talk. "Sound good." I heard him say. And against my will, I sneezed quietly. "Is there a rat lurking around here?" Someone said. At this point, I ran back as fast as I could. I luckily made it back home. • • • "What have you uncovered?" Colour demanded. I explained what I'd learned. ColourTheory drew his blade and wielded it high up. "Tell the admirals about them. Inform them that I have drawn my blade." He said. And so that is what I did, and when I came back, he asked me to follow him. He led me into a big mothership. And as it went higher up, hundreds of thousands of Sparrow fighter jets and transportation planes soared through the air for the first attack against Vaktovia. "It is time Vaktovians! - FOR WAR!" At this point, the excitement begins. END CHAPTER 1
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:12 AM |
Nice guess, it's close to that.
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:16 AM |
Come on guys, read my stooory.
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ShadowSTR
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:25 AM |
I liked it. Putmeinasavack?
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:26 AM |
| Wow! I wish if I had the time, I'd totally make a ROBLOX film out of this. Wonderful story line, I must say. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:53 AM |
Thanks, I have to go somewhere soon, so I'll finish chapter 2 in the evening.
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:54 AM |
Oh and shadow - would you like to be a fleet co commander?
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 10:57 AM |
Oh come on guys read it.
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Robo104
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:03 AM |
| Lol, I was laughing at the abandoned shack part and the mail-box part too. Why would they meet in some abandoned shack? Lol. Why don't they just talk at their Palace? |
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:04 AM |
| Write more, please, this sounds interesting. |
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:07 AM |
@robo becuz its secret bsns
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:12 AM |
C'mon, view, view, view! Feedback, feedback, feedback!
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:13 AM |
| Saving this to read for later. |
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:16 AM |
Alright. I'll post chapter 2 in this thread as well later.
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isseman5
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:23 AM |
I loved it Can I be in the story? as some sort of villain,but hates vak and rat,and is a war genuis(which I am) ok put me in the story,if you do,and make this great,I will get every jc or ose member to read,not to mention my own group of 120 members,make chapter 2 and put me in it |
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:27 AM |
I'll put you in the VAK side.
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:34 AM |
Gen you'll be in the story sooner or later.
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:40 AM |
Bumpers.
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Xenatus
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:43 AM |
Okay bump again.
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isseman5
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| 06 Apr 2012 11:48 AM |
put my full name,:P,also me and buddies,wil be loyal reader s if u can make more stories :D
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