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APscript is not online. APscript
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03 Apr 2012 05:09 PM
huzzah

*8* requests done

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03 Apr 2012 05:13 PM
DON'T DO IT.
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03 Apr 2012 05:14 PM
not bad.

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03 Apr 2012 05:14 PM
Cool

-I don't like it when the raid makes me wet
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03 Apr 2012 05:14 PM
Want a critique?
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03 Apr 2012 05:15 PM
@Takai

i guess so
just keep in mind that i've been at this for 5 months

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03 Apr 2012 05:18 PM
oyus, i haz some st00f to criticize.

- shoulders/limbs stiff
- eyes have no pupils (bugs me)
- chins are to pointy for my liking
- some cases hands are actually pretty good, they're hard to do.

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03 Apr 2012 05:18 PM
Horrible
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03 Apr 2012 05:19 PM
@Mr

Thanks.

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03 Apr 2012 05:50 PM
First off, please look in the mirror. What do you see?
Your shoulders should be about 3 of your head's length. Your neck isn't that thick, but it's fairly thick. There's an outlined V shape near your throat and collarbone. It should be pretty close to the middle. The size of the joint in your arm socket is how much space there should be before it reaches your underarms. Your arms are curved near the joint, and the joint is right about where the ribcage ends. The tips of your hands go about half-way down the upper part of your leg. The upper part of your leg is thicker at the top and it doesn't get thicker as it goes toward the knees, it gets slightly thinner.
You have a rounded chin, not an exact point.
Take the time to learn what the body looks like if you want to improve.

Next, I noticed that your drawings look rather flat. And have the same exact pose. Go out of your comfort zone. The arms are too stiff and the hand posing is awkward.

When drawing eyes, think about how it would look if you could see through skin and skulls. If you look at an actual eye, the iris and such only take up a small amount of the eyeball when looking straight at it. Draw the rest of the eyeball around one of the eyes on something you drew, in relativity to a real eyeball. They would be huge. It wouldn't even fit in the skull! Plus, there wouldn't be any room for anything else your head, like a brain. Eyes are inside of the head, not just a decal painted in the front of it. Realistic eyes have an almond shape. Even if you vary the shape, it must connect or nearly connect on each side.
Another thing is, eyebrows aren't that low. Feel your eyebrow. It's a bone, the hair on top is just hair. Give the eye a little room, there needs to be an eyelid.

Moving on to the face, all of the features are cramped. Reshape your faces, and make the chins less pointy. It barely looks like there's a jaw there, so make the face longer.
They're facing straight ahead, right? If so, noses shouldn't be drawn at an angle like an L. Move it more toward the middle, and even our where the under-part of the nose is. If that makes any sense.


TL;DR:
-Fix the eyes. They're way too big.
-Work on anatomy.
-Too stiff.
-Too flat.
-Neck is too thick for that tiny head.
-Face is too cramped.
-Eyebrows too low.
-Blah blah read it yourself


If any of this is wrong or could be reexplained better, please do so, to anyone other than OP.
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03 Apr 2012 05:51 PM
@Takai

Alright. Thank you for the feedback.

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03 Apr 2012 06:00 PM
But come on, for a person who hasn't had very long experiences with drawing (5 months), that's at least half decent, right?

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03 Apr 2012 06:27 PM
...Right?

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03 Apr 2012 06:29 PM
Yeah, it is. The coloring is pretty solid and the shoulders are a good length apart, even if the head's a little small.
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