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| 31 Mar 2012 09:30 PM |
Chapter 1
The humans don't understand. When they go out into the wild and injure us for their own pokemon experience. Then when they leave us their fainted we have no choice but to sit their and wait for something like a fearow or a todile to come eat us. We die! It's not fun.
I'm a wild, that's right wild, piplub. I'm from the Yenore region, where all types of pokemon live. I just witnessed a charmander getting mauled by a bearatic.
Now that's creepy. Well, us pokemon aren't to stand for it. I'm a new member of the pokemon group the P.A.H.A. or the Pokemon Against Humans Alliance. We are going to fight the humans! Burn down their cities! Kill them and their pokemon!
If you don't already know, are leaders are Entei, Mewtwo, and Zapdose.
An oppisite group is helping the humans, lead by Mew. I've been assigned to a mission that starts in Yenore. We take out the cities and towns and stop this madness once and for all.
Pokemon will rule this planet, and humaninty will fall.
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I hoped you like this chapter, the next will be in Mew's view. Tell me what you think, really. |
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| 31 Mar 2012 09:45 PM |
| Guys, really reply and tell me what you think. Suggestions please. |
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| 31 Mar 2012 09:46 PM |
| Woah. Unexpected. Did you know Pokemon Hide in the tall grass becuase there was this one psycho guy who went around the wild and chopped off their heads? |
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| 31 Mar 2012 10:59 PM |
Chapter 2
"What is this Entei?" I asked.
"Master Mew, it's a plan to overthrow the humans. Were all tired of this, even the fearow want fresher game!"
"Entei! That is awful! How dare you ever even offer such a monstousity!"
"But Mew! We can rule this world!"
"I said no Entei!" I said angrily. I left the little forest tree house into my comfy hole. I wake up twelve hours later to a budew shaking me.
"Mew! Entei, Darkari and Zapdose have rallied some of the pokemon and Cisien City has fallen!"
"WHAT!" And I watched. Pokemon were fighting each other, rebel, my squad, and human owned. People and pokemon were dieing. Then it happened.
Arceus came from the clouds. He planned to stop this. Me and Mewtwo were once in his place. Then, a huge flash of light came and Arceus fell to his death, by Mewtwo.
It was a war. And supreme pokemon was up for the running again. And I would have to take it before it gets into the wrong hands. |
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| 31 Mar 2012 11:07 PM |
| No, Just No, Zapdos was spelled wrong, and Arceus just died right on his arrival, Not even a battle scene between them, He just appeared then died. No. |
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| 31 Mar 2012 11:12 PM |
| Interesting...I've made a story very similar to this. |
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| 31 Mar 2012 11:15 PM |
| (If I were you I would put my leaders as the three musketeers since they hate humans.) |
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| 31 Mar 2012 11:16 PM |
Oh my god! My story's called Life and Death e_0 |
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| 01 Apr 2012 08:20 AM |
| @kcforlife sorry, I wasn't sure about how to spell Zapdos's name. But I wanted more space for Mew and Mewtwo in the story, and besides, when would Mewtwo wait to kill someone? |
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| 01 Apr 2012 09:15 AM |
Chapter 3
"Victory!" Yelled Entei, as he ran across the burning city-scape. Remember me? Yea, i'm Piplub if you forgot.
"Good job! Our next stop, Sertia City!" Entei yelled. We collected our dead, and brought them to the sacred tree that belongs to the legendary pokemon Reshiram. Every alive pokemon has a sacred tree, Mew has one in the Hoenn region. The tree burns down if the Legendary pokemon dies and the legendary pokemon dies if the tree dies.
It is believed to be a horrible form of war, and was last used to kill the legendary pokemon Asderto. You haven't heard of her.
Then I hear screaming from behind. People were gettting hit by a ice-blue beam and pokemon were freezing then shattering into thousands of pieces. Everybody started to run as far as they could from the beam.
I looked up to see what the source of the ice beam was. Articuno! Of course, who else would?
This set off Zapdos, and I could see Moltres not far behind. Another legendary bird battle. Then it hit me. Lugia, the strongest known alive pokemon is coming to stop us. This is all part of Articuno's plan. |
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| 01 Apr 2012 09:37 AM |
| Tell me what you think please, it helps me continue the story. |
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| 01 Apr 2012 10:11 AM |
Chapter 4
"Gather the dead, bury them at the Tree of Girantina. Chanseys and Audinos help the injured!" I was telling them. After that I started heading towards the rebels. I took a chansey and about five hundred pokemon that were in my army.
I hated to make them fight. But I had to. Me, Mew, will stop this war.
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Soon all the birds were fighting. Moltres was the last to get a hit before Lugia came. He started to separate the birds, and soon Articuno and Moltres left. Then Lugia turned his attention to us.
Then it was a battle.
Mew and his army came. there was a huge army, then somebody hit the tree of Reshiram. It exploded, and off in the distance there was a huge boom. Reshiram is dead. Everybody stopped fighting. Then A lightning storm hit, and Zapdos fell to her death. Zapdos hit Zekrom's sisters tree, and killed Reshiram. Zecrom mourned the death of his sister, then left.
Then the budew from mew's army drained many of the water types in the group of us. I was lucky, and I lived. We started fighting again. Mew and Mewtwo were in their bubbles, attacking each other. Entei was attempting to hunt down Articuno for the death of Zapdos.
This war would bring more bad than good. |
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| 01 Apr 2012 12:23 PM |
| I spelled Zekrom wrong one of those times, sorry. |
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| 07 Apr 2012 02:03 AM |
When would Mewtwo wait to kill someone? You obviously haven't seen the first Pokemon movie have you?
Mewtwo isn't a crazed vigilant killer of humans, He just didn't see the real ways of Pokemon training as he was just trained by Team Rocket, He was never able to see the REAL ways of a Pokemon trainer. And he finally saw how it worked when Ash's Pokemon cried for him when Ash froze to stone. |
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| 07 Apr 2012 02:08 AM |
| Also, wouldn't the RULER OF ALL POKEMON put up much more of a fight, instead of falling and perishing? You'd think he'd fly up or survive, and just retaliate against Mewtwo, resulting in an epic battle. |
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| 07 Apr 2012 02:16 AM |
You'd think that the creator of the universe would tragically own a genetically cloned Pokemon.
I mean Porygon was the first Pokemon to be made by computer design by team rocket. You don't see Porygon destroying the creator of the universe. |
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