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Re: Dark Lies (Prologue)

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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 03:53 PM
Prologue

The air was frigid and stained with blood all over the hills were mocking him the trees and plants were whispering about the things he’s done but he was finally out he managed to escape the horror of the town, but he knew his nightmares weren’t over the cool fall air was tickling his dark brown face a spewing up dirt into his brown eyes and getting lodged into his thick black hair, every sound made him jump he could still here the voices inside his head he’s seen too much and done terrible things but it wasn’t over yet. The rustling behind him made him jump as he turned around; their it was the monster behind all of this it was just a dark shadow with no face and no attributes whatsoever it had no eyes but he could still feel it staring into his soul and burning him from the inside out.
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 03:54 PM
bump..
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 04:18 PM
ummm...forever alone -_-'
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 04:44 PM
everyone loves my last book...y u no read >.<
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 04:57 PM
y do i keep talking to myself...
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boomboom517 is not online. boomboom517
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31 Mar 2012 07:29 PM
er... not somthing i would normaly read, im all for paranormal... not so much a book with just creepiness and that stuff... you could use comma's and periods in some places though. but it was well writen
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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31 Mar 2012 07:36 PM
finally a comment... and thanks
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pmcdonough is not online. pmcdonough
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02 Apr 2012 06:41 PM
At night you imagine better, write the book the book at night, correct during day.
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purepower212 is not online. purepower212
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02 Apr 2012 06:44 PM
I wrote this at night....on my ipod :3
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