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| 29 Mar 2012 11:05 AM |
==========================Chapter 2=========================
The chosen... January 2013 time: 9:45. Commander Kayle called in every single soldier in the Combust Union HQ. "Greetings soldiers" said Commander Kayle on the microphone. Everyone was all nervous... they didnt want to be picked to fight the evil and risking their lives. "I have chosen the squadrons and divisions that will be honored and will fight against the evil JC Empire. There is a squadron that hasnt been organized so I will form a new one." Said Kayle and when those words stopped echoing everyone was even more nervous. "The first squadron is squadron lion led by Captain Ryan Seizmore. The second squadron is squadron bull led by Lieatenant James Croese." said our leader. I couldnt believe this. My brother is gonna be fighting and risking his life... for me. I just cant beleive this Im so scared if something happens to him. "The third squadron is squadron eagle led by captain Diego Misher. And now for the not sorted squadron is... squadron Trencher which includes 8 men. Here they are: Private Goldberg Menner, Private Jackson Miller, Private Marshal Shooter, Corporal Edward Eiden, Corporal Mannor shelder, Sergeant Shelmer Shizen, Lieutenant Jordan Pereira and captain Edgar Ostrowski Cobas, the leader of this squadron. Oh and I forgot that in the list there is also Sergeant Nigel Croese." Ended Kayle. We had permission to go to our tents but I was shocked and I couldnt move.Atleast Ill have one of the best captains in the Comust Union. The nexy day all the squadrons that were chosen had to go with their team to their helicopters and listen orders from our leaders. And thats when our adventure began.
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| 29 Mar 2012 11:28 AM |
| Edgar O. Cobas thats me :P |
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| 29 Mar 2012 12:35 PM |
| It could be written and worded better. |
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| 29 Mar 2012 12:43 PM |
| Cudd you said chapter 3 this is chapter 2 i will put you in dont worry :P |
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:02 PM |
| I liked it. But idk who was who. Except the names I recognized. You should make it Roblox names instead. Its easier to figure out who is who. :P |
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:11 PM |
| I sent you a message through friend request,so make sure to see it |
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