dale111
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| 28 Mar 2012 09:54 PM |
The buildings are aflame. My heart is the same.
My infatuation for pain has drove me insane.
I’m the only one around so I’m the only one to blame.
At first it was just a game to play , but not today.
My motives are personal, there’s no fame to gain.
I just want to watch the world waste away.
It all started as a vision in my mind.
Always thinking “Is it now? Is it time?”.
Have you ever lived your dreams? Well , I’m living mine.
Cept’ in my sad story , everything dies.
No surprise , its my hands that guide.
Guide to destruction. A endless oblivion.
Never again will life be , its death by the billions.
Trees , cars , earth , stars , they don’t mean anything.
Its just more for death to bring. As your angels sing,
mine are trying to bring ruin to everything
This was an experiment to see Off Topics reactions to my poem. |
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| 28 Mar 2012 09:55 PM |
Three thumbs down.
--Īrijas kartupeļu bads bija mana vaina.-- |
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dale111
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| 28 Mar 2012 09:56 PM |
@nooby
Please explain to me in depth of why you dislike this. |
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| 28 Mar 2012 09:58 PM |
I love it the image is frightening and scary 10/10!
~Forumers gonna forum~ |
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| 28 Mar 2012 10:00 PM |
mony dun getit.
☭ Trololol. ☭ |
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| 28 Mar 2012 10:01 PM |
Wrong forum, sir.
1cooldude361 AND 1cooldude381 are banned. |
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dale111
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| 28 Mar 2012 10:03 PM |
@Ro
please read the lsat line at the very bottom of the starting post... |
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| 28 Mar 2012 10:30 PM |
To cliche And emo.
--Īrijas kartupeļu bads bija mana vaina.-- |
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dale111
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:18 AM |
@nooby
Maybe its emo, but most because I write in a emotive style...
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ichigo72
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dale111
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:23 AM |
@talon
Whats wrong with being emo, besides i'm not emo im gothic, I write with a emotive style, like I said if you can't except that then you can go (insert suicide threat here) |
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Mikkia
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:30 AM |
Still dun get it
☭ Trololol. ☭ |
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ichigo72
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| 29 Mar 2012 07:30 AM |
Mikkias post attacks OP
It's super effective! |
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dale111
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| 29 Mar 2012 03:23 PM |
@mikkia
And whats wrong with being goth? |
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9volt
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| 29 Mar 2012 03:25 PM |
i just skipped the entire thing after reading the first 2 lines.
my reaction:
WHAT THE WHAT IS THIS |
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missmanga
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| 29 Mar 2012 03:27 PM |
This is amazing.
-You got this, Off Topic- |
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dale111
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| 29 Mar 2012 03:27 PM |
@9volt
Its called the american language, if you break it down some more its called words. |
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9volt
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| 29 Mar 2012 03:28 PM |
@dale
YA DON'T SAY, MATE? TELL ME MORE! |
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