failbot31
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| 21 Mar 2012 08:48 PM |
When failbot woke up the next morning, he looked outside. It was still nighttime. He got up and looked at the message board. All that was up there was, "Congrats Yo for being an overseer!" "'Grats yo!" "Our new overseer! YO911!" Nothing about when failbot managed a raid against 8 raiders by himself. He swallowed. He thought about leaving, but his eyelids began to droop, so he just went to bed. He dreamt about everything in TC. Guns. Tanks. AntiFiter. Why had he not been chosen? Why hadn't he been appreciated? He took deep breaths and kept sleeping. |
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Yo911
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| 21 Mar 2012 08:51 PM |
| I wish I was still an Overseer.. :/ |
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failbot31
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| 21 Mar 2012 08:53 PM |
less QQ more pew pew. noob
Respect my authority |
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failbot31
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| 21 Mar 2012 08:55 PM |
No. I have more posts than you. Respect MY authority.
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Neo1035
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| 21 Mar 2012 08:57 PM |
tip for formatting character dialogue:
He slowly walks through the forest, when suddenly a man jumps out from a bush.
"Heegaobobobo!" Jimmy Chonga shouts in fear.
"URF URF URF," the man who appears to be part walrus says in response.
Notice the
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failbot31
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| 21 Mar 2012 09:02 PM |
Thanks for the advice, neo. (Lol'd at the heegaobobobo!) |
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