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Re: He just go TOLD by a noob.

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pinbull222 is not online. pinbull222
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16 Mar 2012 11:13 PM
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0 331830 #2 Chapter 2 Posted 2 hours, 12 minutes ago Reply Delete Is English your first language, if not, then it's ok, but if it is...
You need to work on your punctuation, I also advise your re-read your story a couple times, then have someone else read it as-well, to make sure everything is all set to be submitted. Also, you should really mark it at-least teen if there's going to be some violence and swearing, it's got....some potential but you should really re-read and proofread thoroughly.

loke44hardy 0 332225 Posted 1 second ago Reply Edit Delete But if your gonna complain about it then i suggest you GTF OFF and go bother someone else
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pinbull222 is not online. pinbull222
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16 Mar 2012 11:23 PM
And that noob is ME!
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