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| 16 Mar 2012 09:58 PM |
Chapter 1: The years past as a gun stood there. *20 years earlier*
John Michael:Sir i'm here for training. Frank Butty:Go through the door and then you will start training.
*5 minutes later* Michael:Sir the training is done. Butty:Good job mate.
*1 day later*
Butty:How did you like the tour around the base? Michael:Its great! Thanks for the what th-
*RPG missle hits window*
Butty:WE,RE BLOODY BEING RAIDED! Michael:SIR WE Butty:JUST GET TO THE FRONT WITH THE REST AND HOLD THEM OFF! LMF(Lethal Milltary Force) Soilder :MICHAEL GET TO THE MACHINE GUN AND HOLD THEM OFF! *When Michael takes out two helicopters the machine guns get shot off the barricade* Nuke voice:This place will blow up in 40 minutes. *timer stop*
Butty:ALL LMF MEMBERS GET TO THE LMF PLANES AND FLY OUT OF HERE BEFORE THE BLOODY PLACE EXLPODES!
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| 16 Mar 2012 10:11 PM |
Chapter 2,Escape:5,4,3,2,1, KA BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*15 hours later*
John Michael:Who was that?*Michael was to surprised of what happend to ask eariler.
Frank Butty:It was E.V. (Evil Corps). Michael:Evil who? Butty:They blew our home town a long time ago so we did it to there's. Michael:So they got there first revenge? Butty:Excatly. *Radar beeps*
LMF Flyer:We got E.V. Jets attacking! Butty:GET ON THE GUN MICHAEL! *Michael goes for the gun and takes out 3 out of 4 of* *Jet 4 takes out the gun and the blades of the helicopter*
Butty:GET THE PARCHUTES JUMP OR WE WILL BLOW UP!
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| 16 Mar 2012 10:12 PM |
Fix to chapter 2,Escape.
*Michael goes for the gun and takes out 3 out of 4 of the jets* |
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| 16 Mar 2012 10:25 PM |
Chapter 3,The Forest:
John Michael:They don't know when to give up do they? Frank Butty:Doesn't look like they know. Butty:Goings your navagting where are we? Jacob Goings *The Driver of the LMF Heli*:Were in the forest of Venezia Butty:Thanks Now lets find the way out of here. Michael:Wait shh what was that? *guns shot appear* Butty:GET UNDERWATER!
*Michael,Butty and Goings are captured by an milltary force called M.S. (Morning Star)*
*Michael and the rest wake up* Michael:Who are these bloody maggots? M.S. Soilder:Morning star and your in our base in jail. *The M.S. Soilder walks away*
Goings:We have to get out of here Michael:How? Butty:You'll have the plan. *Michael and Goins are wondering what he means*
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| 16 Mar 2012 10:37 PM |
Chapter 4,Another Escape Envolved:
Frank Butty:You Probaly know what I mean John Michael:Oh no you don't mea- Jacob Goings:Blow it up. Are you sure?It will alert the place. Butty:Well if we escape with there veichles it will be victory to L.M.F. *sets c4 on wall and blows it* *alarm starts* Michael:GET TO THAT TRUCK! *Goings starts truck* *when they take off other Morning Star veichles chase them*
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| 16 Mar 2012 10:51 PM |
Chapter 5,The Chase:
Butty:THEY LEFT GUNS IN THE TRUCK THERE'S A MACHINE GUN IN THERE.GET IT AND BEAT THOSE BLOODY CORPS.
*Michael grabs the machine gun and shoots the cars*
Butty:LOOK AN AIRPLANE!KEEP HOLDING THEM OFF! Michael:I WOULD IF I WOULDN'T RUN OUT OF AMMO! Goings:FIND SOMETHING! Michael:DOESN'T LOOK LIKE WE NEED TO FIND ONE! *Butty drives near the plane and parks* *L.M.F. members go into the plane* *Morning Star trys to shoot wings* Butty:THEY WON'T MISS MUCH LONGER Goings:So they will never get a single bullet on the plane. *Goings grabs a RPG and jumps out of the plane and blows up himself and the enemies* Both:GOINGS NO!
Fire stood there while the 2 L.M.F. corps left.
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| 18 Mar 2012 04:29 PM |
Chapter 6,Memories:
L.M.F. Soilder:In the loving memory of Sgt. Jacob Goings that died by sacerficeing for our 2 L.M.F. corps Gen.Frank Butty and Pvt. John Michael.
*Butty and Michael give speaches*
Butty:Goings was a great soilder. He drove us and picked us up from battle and we always thanked him.
Michael:Goings was my friend and a great soilder. He sacerficed himself for us.We'll never forget him.
*There stands the stone that said R.I.P. Sgt. Jacob Goings*
*Michael left a pistol there for memories*
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| 18 Mar 2012 04:42 PM |
Chapter 7,The Book
*Butty and Michael are clearing out Goings stuff when they find a book* *Its called "The Book of the Army"* *Michael reads his last chapter*
Goings:I never told anyone this in the beggening of my army time or now.Morning Star And E.V. are robots.The only way to stop them is a firing key into a hole that the leader General Makorov Sheperd installed. Morning Star has it too but it's made by General Curtis Auditore.If anyone finds this book and you've find out,Do what I couldn't.
Michael:I will old friend I will.
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| 18 Mar 2012 04:46 PM |
| Please, don't continue this. Let it die, end its suffering. |
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| 18 Mar 2012 04:50 PM |
Chapter 8,Locating:
Butty:Okay how are we supposed to find these bases? Michael:Get to the machine. Machine voice:Hello.Please insert the base key. Butty:Base key? Michael:Leonardo Loren has it. Butty:Where is he? Michael:In a different L.M.F. base. Butty:Lets head out then.
*While there on the way E.V. Snipers are postioned*
*One shoots but misses* Butty:SNIPER! *Michael:JUST DRIVE WE CAN'T SEE THEM GOOD ENOUGH! *Butty and Michael get to the base and looks for Loren* Loren:Over here Butty and Michael Michael:How do you- Loren:Goings used to be at this base he told me about you once he met you. Butty:Where's the key? Loren:I was figuring you were looking for that.Its in my room.Help yourselfs.
*Michael and Butty find it*
*They also find a key to a heli*
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| 18 Mar 2012 05:02 PM |
Chapter 9,Discovery and Doom of MorningStar:
Michael:Hey Loren!Mind if we use your heli keys? Loren:Like I said help yourselfs. *Michael and Butty head back* *Michael inserts the key*
Machine Voice:MorningStar is located in underground of us.E.V. is 5 miles away from us.
*Michael and butty get a veichle that digs underground and goes to Morning Star base*
*Butty and Michael fight there way to the top* Loren:You didn't think I was the bad guy did you? Butty:You son of a- Michael:How could you?YOU KILLED GOINGS! Loren:Yes.And now I kill you!And you think that person in the book was really the person?
*guards surround Butty and Michael* *They both take out LMG's from the back of there backs and shoots all the robot guards* *Butty and Loren fights while Michael is down but Butty kills Loren BUT Butty got stabbed in the lungs*
Michael:BUTTY! Butty:Just go I have this *Butty does what Goings wanted him to do and Michael escapes with the veichle he had*
In the loving memory of Butty
R.I.P. Butty.
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| 18 Mar 2012 05:12 PM |
Chapter 10,How it ends: *Michael is ready to fight his way to the top alone* *Michael grabs his LMG,jumps out of the heli and shoots until he can't shoot anymore*
Michael:*He makes it to the top* YOU! Loren:You expect me to die THAT WAS A ROBOT!
*Michael throws a knife at Loren's arm*
Michael:But this is you.
*Loren grabs a pistol while Michael takes cover* Michael:Dangit i'm out. *Loren sticks his gun at Michael's face* Loren:Like they say any last words. Michael:Nope...Except for this.
*Michael gets up quickly,kicks the gun out of Loren's hand and Michael grabs his pistol and shoots Loren*
*Michael goes to the hole*
Michael:The only way is to sacerfice,like Frank and Jacob. Michael:This is for everyone.
*Michael blows up the place in stead of letting in go in the hole*
*Then thats when the gun of the starting falls to the ground*
*It says Pvt.John Michael*
*20 years later*
The gun stood there like it did in the starting.
No one ever found it.
But John did.
Because it was his.
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| 18 Mar 2012 05:15 PM |
Credits:
Author:ZombieAssassin06
Who to thank:Infinty Ward for giving me the army idea.And the roblox group F.E.A.R.
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| 18 Mar 2012 05:21 PM |
2 Fixes to Chapter 1:
Michael:SIR WE-
Nuke Voice:This place will blow up in 40 minutes *timer start* |
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| 18 Mar 2012 05:45 PM |
| What's with Frank's last name? 0_0 Butty |
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| 19 Mar 2012 06:59 PM |
| Sorry thats what I was trying to figure out thats the name I came up with. |
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| 20 Mar 2012 05:45 PM |
Oh. Anyways make a second part.
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| 20 Mar 2012 07:29 PM |
| I like to kick things with my fists. |
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| 20 Mar 2012 07:35 PM |
| It's official. I lost all hope in this world. |
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| 20 Mar 2012 07:40 PM |
| Thank the big atom that the series is over. |
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| 20 Mar 2012 07:43 PM |
| I fixed the title for you. You should thank me for doing that. |
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