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| 16 Mar 2012 05:45 AM |
Chapter 1: The Explosion
Victoria woke up early in the girl dormitories, she heard the morning trumpet, as usual. She had a hot shower and got changed into her FEAR Officer Uniform with her red beret. Today was the day when they announce the new Colonel of FEAR. She tried to look her best, she brushed her teeth, polished her shoes & brushed her hair. After she got ready she kept a carbine in her pocket in case anything went wrong. She headed out walking to the Promotion Building, whilst she was walking she saw General Animalmagic, Victoria said," Hello Ma'am! How are you today? " Animal replied with a yell considering the traffic was so loud, "Good! Hope your ready for a big long day!" Victoria grinned, she was nervous and excited. She was half scared incase the Commander of FEAR-Sonic didn't like her speech and told her it was horrible.
Victoria got to the building and recited her speech a lot. She sat down front row to the stage where Brian would be talking. She saw Commander Sonic come in, she gulped. Now she was really nervous! She took a deep breath and saw the privates fill the seats. Commander Sonic finally got up and said, "Welcome to the FEAR Colonel Speeches, there are 3 officers, they got through the elections now they will say there speech, we will then decide who gets Colonel, first up, Officer Victoria!" Victoria stood up and walked to the stage without her speech cards, she recited her speech so much she knows all of it. She took a deep breath and said into the microphone, "Hello FEAR Members, I'm Officer Victoria, today i'm up here telling you why I should be colone----" Victoria was cut of by the screeching noises of Bombs, all the FEAR cowards ran out of the building. Victoria saw a lot of clouds, slowly her vision was getting blury and more blury, until there was darkness. |
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Staruel
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| 16 Mar 2012 05:48 AM |
Great book,
You should include RUF! |
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| 16 Mar 2012 06:57 AM |
cant keep a carbine in your pocket, silly girl.
nevertheless, nice story |
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| 16 Mar 2012 06:53 PM |
| Chapter 2 will be out later! |
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| 16 Mar 2012 07:07 PM |
Chapter 2: The enemy
Victoria woke up in a building, hearing screams and gun shots. She looked around, she was in the Team Domino base. She slowly got up and felt for her gun, she felt so lucky to have a gun, she tooks out the gun and walked around corners, slowly and more slowly. Victoria heard footsteps and hid behind a wall, she looked around and saw the leader, Pieperson. He walked over to a wall and typed in a code, Victoria just saw the code numbers! 3129, she grinned. She was just about to get out of her hiding spot until she saw a guard, then she looked at her gun. She shot him silently.
She ran around to the guard, hearing more screams and she took his rifle, knife & radio. She turned to the code door and pressed the buttons, '3129' Suddenly the door opened and Pieperson walked out and saw her, Victoria gulped & ran. Pieperson ran after her, he finally tackled her and Victoria shoulder-checked him in the eye and ran faster. After she outtakend him she saw the Armory, Victoria gulped, she got a head start in life! She ran in and took a backpack, she putted a medkit in there, water bottle, ammo & knifes. She put a whole bunch of Rifle ammo around here body. She got a gun and knife pocket so she put that on her waist and put in her carbine and knife. |
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| 16 Mar 2012 07:13 PM |
Sure! You can be in Chapter 3+
Same as Alena |
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| 16 Mar 2012 07:13 PM |
WHO WAS FONE?!?!!!?!??!
BASJF /SDIGNF................................................ |
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| 16 Mar 2012 07:35 PM |
| Chapter 3 will be out later |
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| 16 Mar 2012 07:40 PM |
I always like to see FEAR members writeing nice story can I be in the next chapter.
Colonel Cherrybomb117 |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:07 PM |
| Argh, I dunno what to do for Chapter 3 |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:09 PM |
| Include me I'm a CPT; Captain, I love the book do far! |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:10 PM |
Ok, Any ideas? Ah,
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:12 PM |
| I'm Irish does that give any ideas? |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:13 PM |
| Nope.....Happy St Patricks day, I'm typing Chapter 3 up now |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:13 PM |
| Also friends with DoctorCooper aka 3rd in command. |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:16 PM |
| Robux that is, not to big not to small. |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:21 PM |
Chapter 3: Meeting FEAR members
Victoria walked out of the armoury with her rifle in her hand, the first thing she wanted to do is free the prisoners and take them out of TD Base. She looked around until she saw the cells. She shot one guard down, the second guard went running at her. Victoria put her rifle around her neck and shoulder-checked him. He fell to the ground, Victoria grabbed his shoulders and kneed him in the face until he got knocked out. Victoria opened a cell were Officer Aleana, Captain Jeff & Colonel Cherry were, they got up and mumbled a thanks. They then returned to the armoury.
Victoria all gave them a gun pocket with a silencer and a knife. Aleana and Jeff had a shotgun while cherry held a minigun. Victoria added some grenades to her backpack and they setted off trying to get a way out of the base. Alena said, " What about that code door?" Victoria gulped and replied, "Well, Okay, I know the code, just keep behind Cherry!" Cherry leaded the way, Victoria pressed the numbers for the code, '3129' and the door opened. They looked in and saw a hall with a table, with two numbers. Victoria gulped and pressed two. Suddenly the door opened and a red alarm went off. RAT were attacking TD. |
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| 16 Mar 2012 09:22 PM |
| Jeff, does Doctor want to be in the story and keep your money to yourself. Save up your money for something, I have over 5,000 robux. (I don't donate unless close friends ask) |
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