lkbirds
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| 25 Feb 2012 08:00 AM |
a team of terrist has taken control over a U.S emmbassy in cuba all we know is the terrist call the mission pandora tommorow they will kill hostages there leader's code name is penguin (not the bat man guy)
you must inffultrate the embasy without being seen evey time your seen an alarm is raised diffrent mission allow so many alarms this ones limit is 1. no hostages shall be killed and you can not use lethal force (only KOing people)
equpment: a black suit (you cant be seen in shaddows) night/thermal googles a silensed pistol extra item used for your position
C.S.
position on the team of spys: codename:(needed) education: Other:(not needed) extra item used for your position: |
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lkbirds
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| 04 Mar 2012 10:06 AM |
Necrobump much? Also, good job with your grammar, spelling and plot. |
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lkbirds
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lkbirds
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| 08 Mar 2012 10:09 PM |
Haters are for famous people.
This is called criticism. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 01:40 PM |
| fine keep your criticsm to your self the last thing anyone likes are critics. |
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| 13 Mar 2012 01:44 PM |
| Even though people do not like critics, they're there to help you. If you take their advice people would actually JOIN your RPs. |
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| 13 Mar 2012 01:45 PM |
This is amazing
This is the best thing I have ever seen in my life.
No one wins a butter eating contest. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 04:42 PM |
| ok whats wrong with my grammer |
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jcarsonw
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:15 PM |
I agree with tay.
RAINBOW MANGO CHUTNEY |
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loppolh
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:17 PM |
| And this was copied.YOU NOOB.BURN HER. |
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:17 PM |
| Go to grammar school in learn. You should know by kindergarten that the first letter of every sentence starts with a capital letter, and that you end with a period. |
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:18 PM |
| If you do this, then it makes you more less of a retard. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:21 PM |
| Ok. I get it, but realy more less. Thats what i call bad grammar. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:22 PM |
| Finnaly somebody that has played splinnter cell. XD (thats what ive been waiting for) |
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brad9873
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:26 PM |
| Also try and say the sentence out loud to see if the grammar seems right. You should always use correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. Try and spend more time on the plot. Get at least a paragraph at the least for the plot. Run it through spell check and see if you can get someone to double check it. Start a collab and get some help with the thoughts. If you get help make sure to acknowledged it. Never be afraid to try a new type of roleplay. Also if you can, use Google Chrome. It has a nice spell check when typing on Roblox. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:28 PM |
Thanks, but im just going to close the thread.
thread closed. |
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brad9873
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:29 PM |
| You don't have to give up. Just practice and get better. Nothing is easy at first. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:30 PM |
| Ok, thanks but in closng the thread. |
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:32 PM |
| *im (i might start that collab though) |
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roman117
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loppolh
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lkbirds
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:39 PM |
| lop yes it was off a video game |
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loppolh
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| 13 Mar 2012 05:41 PM |
| No.A thread on the role play forums. |
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