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| 13 Mar 2012 11:51 AM |
story:
once i (usedundertaker)found out pinkie pie killed rainbow dash ive decided to trick her into thinking im having a party so i told her that it is at 5:00 PM *at 5:00 PM* pinkie pie is there. i give her a cupcake (that makes her go to sleep) she is sleeping *i hook her up* she wakes up i told her IT WAS A TRICK! i did the things she did to rainbow dash but after i did that i took her flesh off baked it. and leave her body hanged
THE END! (of part 1) |
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Lumpytusk
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| 13 Mar 2012 11:52 AM |
I was gonna say "EPIC FAIL.", but then I realized it wasn't even epic.
~THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING! -Rarity~
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| 13 Mar 2012 11:54 AM |
| ok... THEN ILL DO IT TO RARITY! I AM SORRY RARITY BUT YOU MUST DIE FOR HATING ON MY STORY SINCED PINKIE PIE KILLED RAINBOW DASH! *DOES THINGS I DID ON PINKIE PIE* |
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th112233
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| 13 Mar 2012 11:56 AM |
This is really kinda the same as cupcakes...
~Watch Cupcakes HD! Its to DIE for!~ |
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Lumpytusk
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| 13 Mar 2012 11:57 AM |
Nonononnonono.
The whole premise fails, for example, it's never explained how you even got to Ponyville; and you're assuming "Cupcakes" is canon, which is just...
~Mission Terminated: Subject Demonstrated Extremely Poor Judgment -HEV Suit Mk. V~ |
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| 13 Mar 2012 11:58 AM |
| @th i did something diffrent at the end are you to DUMB to look at the thing i said at the ending!? i said "i took her flesh off and then left her body to hang" and i already watched mlp:cupcakes its sad and stupid |
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:00 PM |
| @lumpy i forgot to put "i land on ponyville and" at the beginning so thats how i got to ponyville |
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th112233
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:00 PM |
| Who cares? Its almost the same. |
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:02 PM |
| i did not sow her back up so there for its not the same as cupcakes and i watch both hd the animated one and the GMOD version |
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Lumpytusk
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:04 PM |
I read the story, and this is plagiarism to the max.
~/faceblock~
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:06 PM |
| lol roblox forum should be faceblock and @ lumpy it is not i did not sow her back up i did not just do nothing after that and this story is revenge for sgt. sprinkles for making that horrible story and revenge on pinkie pie for killing rainbow dash |
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Lumpytusk
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:07 PM |
/faceblock
/facehoof
/facepalm
/facegun
You're an idiot.
~.. Especially when ya got ME goin' round, bein' better then the rest of us. -Rainbow Dash~ |
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:16 PM |
| rainbow dash is killed IDIOT! i also forgot to add that rainbow dash comes back and wonders where is pinkie pie so that she could get revenge and i told her i killed her already so ill spead it around websites i have an account on |
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| 13 Mar 2012 12:18 PM |
Oh, okay, that makes it so you pretend it isn't plagiarism. Brilliant.
~..I was never properly trained in it's operation. -JC Denton~ |
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:48 AM |
| look this is revenge for sgt. sprinkles for making a horrible story |
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Lumpytusk
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:51 AM |
Then you should at least capitalize it properly.
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:52 AM |
| That was absolutely terrible. |
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:54 AM |
"no gramr copyin other crappypasta cus i hav no imagintion and wnt to mak myslf sem col by puting myself in story"
I do not approve |
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th112233
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:55 AM |
This is illegal you know
/Wizard Voice |
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| 14 Mar 2012 11:58 AM |
You dont just land in ponyville and start killing everyone.
Your an idiot to not know that you can get arrested for being a serial killer. This is a fanfic (Cupcakes) and is not entitled for you to hate Pinkie Pie and you should not be such a idiot. |
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| 14 Mar 2012 12:06 PM |
| DID I SAY I KILLED EVERY PONY? no and i know i can get arrested for being a serial killer but there's no cops in ponyville and it was in a basement so no one hear her and how many times i have to say I DONT CARE! if sgt. sprinkles makes another one then i will |
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| 14 Mar 2012 12:07 PM |
You just killed Rarity and Pinkie.
Idiot.
And yes there are cops in Equestria, You must not be a brony to know that there are Cops and Guards. Your a idiot
get out |
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| 14 Mar 2012 12:11 PM |
Almost an exact copy of Cupcakes, you just twisted the ending a little and replaced characters.
You make Cupcakes look bad.
And Cupcakes was good. |
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| 14 Mar 2012 12:23 PM |
@th the rarity one i only did that because she said the story was awful
and i wanted cupcakes to look bad because it is NOT famous it is horrible and if you like mlp:Cupcakes then you got no taste of my little pony: freindship is magic |
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