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Re: OSE - The New Beginning

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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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08 Mar 2012 03:54 PM
WARNING: This Book takes place in the future, all facts known here may be false, do not take it into offense.

[[CHARACTERS]]

Smog879
eaglesword
Legodude12
Diglet8

((OTHER CHARACTERS WILL BE ADDED AS THE STORY PROGRESSES))

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It has been 3513 years since Octavia's new Emperor was crowned, and already citizens flocked to Recruitment Centers like Mice to cheese. Senator Smog was overlooking a Rally when he was notified that he had a visitor. "Bring him in here." He said. A man stepped in the corridor, he was 6 foot 4 inches, medium build, and had jet black hair. "Nice to see you, Senator." he said. "And you too, eaglesword." Smog continued. "it appears you've visited Octavius Prime lands yet again." Senator Smog finished. "Yes, I wanted to see how things have been." eagle continued. "it's nice to know OSE's held on for so long.". "Ever since the new Emperor was crowned, citizens have been signing up to join the Military like it's Christmas." Smog said. "Let's watch some of the Rally, no?"

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Down on the Rally stage stood Grand Admiral Diglet8, along with other Military officials. As they spoke, the new Recruits exploded with cheers, and confidence. But little did they know what was going to happen. "People of Octavius Prime!" Diglet shouted. "it is time to prove your loyalty to the Praetor, and the Emperor!" The crowd of Recruits grew silent, curious of how they are able to prove such loyalty to these men. "Today marks a new day!" Diglet continued. "By the order of the Emperor himself, we go to war by tonight!" The crowd erupts into excitement. "But who we attack, was his choice." Diglet said, somewhat surprised by the crowd's reactions. "By midnight we invade Vaktovia's outer defences." The crowd grew silent ver quickly, for fear they might not make it back home. For Vaktovia was known well to them, it was the Empire that conquered Worlds by day, and controlled Universes by Night. These Recruits we'rent signing up for a War, they were signing up for an Intergallactic Genocide Mission. "Now, now, I know many of you are worried." Diglet said, "But with the Emperor by our side we shall prevail!" The crowd was silent, except for a few men who were ready for anything. The Grand Admiral then closed the Rally. As the soldiers we're exiting the building, Senator Smog, and eaglesword were speaking with another man, Emperor Legodude12 himself.

[[END OF CHAPTER ONE]]
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dude9er9er is not online. dude9er9er
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08 Mar 2012 03:57 PM
Squadron Commander Dude9er9er.
Nice story, broski.
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searing321 is not online. searing321
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08 Mar 2012 04:08 PM
You should add some Admirals and Senators in. Apart from that, great story Senator.

- Senator Aurkias Verulis
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FIRECAKE is not online. FIRECAKE
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08 Mar 2012 04:14 PM
Do you need to put a list of characters?

It is very unprofessional.

This is coming from a guy who owns a ROBLOX Writing Guild.

⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃ In the night, the stormy night, away she'd fly. And dreams of para-para-paradise. ⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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08 Mar 2012 04:17 PM
I did it to avoid conflict and complaints of people who would want to be in it.
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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08 Mar 2012 04:48 PM
[[CHAPTER TWO]]


“The Empire will experience one of it’s finest wars, I am sure of it.” Emperor Lego concluded, “The men are ready, we have increasing numbers by the day. I don’t see what’s wrong.” Smog then said, “Sir we need time to train, the men have some skill in gun fighting, but not enough to attack Vaktovia!” At the time, Eaglesword was still glancing at the window. As he walked towards it, he saw something. “Eagle, what are you looking at?” Smog said, curious if it was another Pirate ship. “I see something” Eagle said, “it’s glowing a shade of red, and it seems as if it’s hurtling towards us from the sky.” The Emperor quickly said “Get down!” As the men quickly dove for cover, the object crashed through the roof window, and landed in the middle of the room. It appeared to be a sort of Drop Pod. It had symbols on it, the symbols of Vaktovia. The door creaked open, and four men stepped out. One of those men, were Devilishpyro, General of Vaktovia. The other three we’re his Elite guards. As other Senators of OSE rushed in, LordNobody, along with UnstableMonster stared in awe. “What are we going to do?” Asked Lord, when the soldiers set up a perimeter around the Pod. “So… I hear you’re the one… Who declared war on Vaktovia?” Devilish said in a low, deep voice. “What are you doing here?” Eagle said, ignoring the other 3 elite VAK guards. “Oh, don’t worry Eagle, I’m here to just say my friendly ‘hello’". The three guards went behind the Pod to check if anything was damaged during the touchdown. “But it appears the ‘Southern Hospitality’ here isn’t as friendly as I thought.” He started to descend into the Pod. “Wait!” The Emperor shouted. The General slowly came back, grinning. “Yes?” Devilish said. “How did you get here? With the Planet’s Defence Systems online, you would’ve been disintegrated.” Lego said, fearing that he under-estimated their Empire’s skill. “One of my men de-activated your Satellite Core Generator, I got past with ease.” Devilish chuckled, “Now that you know how I got here, I must go. After all, I have a reason to train my men now.” The four men retreated into the Pod, and it slowly floated to the roof of the building, then vanished. “We need to have a meeting, now.” Unstable said. As the Senators gathered at the Senate, one of them handed the Praetor a document, which he opened and reviewed. The reaction of the Prince’s face is what shocked the other Senators. “Everyone please sit.” The Praetor said. “Now, before we begin, would anyone like to throw in an idea of how we can start training the men?” The Senators looked at eachother blankly, then Senator searing321 stood up. “My Praetor, we suggest that we simulate missions of capturing a base, and at least holding it for 20 minutes, it would help the soldiers know what to do in a time of crisis, and improve their fighting skills as well.” As Searing sat down a large sound came from the enterance. As the Praetorian Guards went to look, Admiral DefenderII came running in. “Praetor!” He gasped as he took a breath of air. “We’ve been breached at the south end of the Planet!”


[[END OF CHAPTER TWO]]
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LordNobody is not online. LordNobody
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08 Mar 2012 04:53 PM
I like it.
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soloman1998 is not online. soloman1998
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08 Mar 2012 05:22 PM
Better Octavian stories, and at least you post that it is fake, otherwise I would have disliked it vary.
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FIRECAKE is not online. FIRECAKE
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08 Mar 2012 05:24 PM
It would be better if you used their Octavian names.

⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃ In the night, the stormy night, away she'd fly. And dreams of para-para-paradise. ⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃
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9volt is not online. 9volt
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08 Mar 2012 05:32 PM
i can spot

so many MLP references.
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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08 Mar 2012 05:38 PM
@Soloman

I was thinking of doing that, but what if they didnt have any? Plus, not alot of readers would know who they are.
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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08 Mar 2012 05:40 PM
@my post, I mean to say Fire. My bad. :/ Fire, I was thinking of doing that, but what if they didnt have any? Plus, not alot of readers would know who they are.
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destination05 is not online. destination05
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08 Mar 2012 08:19 PM
Really good. I cant wait to see the other part.
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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09 Mar 2012 06:23 PM
The cold, brisk temperature of the outer defences of the Octavian city was brutal, but the crisp air smelled like a summer breeze. The clanking of metallic boots, and claning swords could be heard nearby. As the hundreds of OSE soldiers marched to the South Compound, there there was only one thing in their mind. Live. Live as a well-trained Octavian would. As they approached, a mountain side overlooking the Compound gave sanctuary for the Army. Grand Admiral Cjremix ordered the men to a halt. “We set up here.” He commanded, “At Dawn we take back the Compound, and rescue –if any-Hostages. “ The soldiers looked at each other with a sense of relief, they had a couple more hours to live. “Say, what if they advance while were here?” a Pilot asked. “Well, you want to go attack now?” The Grand Admiral said, “while they’re expecting us?” The Pilot replied, “No Sir.” As the Army sat down to rest, the following Brigade caught up. Admiral defenderII -Comamnder of that Brigade- Went up to Grand Admiral Cjremix. “Sir, we took out some enemy scouts, but they’ll think the Native’s killed ‘em.” Admiral defenderII said. As the Brigade mixed in with the other group, and rested, they set up tents, and resting quarters. It was getting darko. As the third sun set. Most of the Army was still awake. “You need to rest.” Another Pilot said. “I’ll sleep when we win.” The Squadron Commander said. As it struck midnight the lookout spotted something moving. “Sir, we got something.” As the Admiral got up, he saw it too. Two moving objects. As he armed himself with a Plasma Rifle, he knew what it was. “Calm down, it’s two Pilots.” He walked over to them. “Say, who gave you the order to go out?” he asked, as the two Pilots looked at each other, one said. “Sir, my friend here needed to go to the bathro-“. “That’s all I need to know, you wasted all your energy.” As the Grand Admiral walked back, the Pilot grabbed him by the arm. “Wait! Sir, while we were out, we found this.” He showed him a piece of metal, he examined it. “Well, well, well… Looks like you boys probably saved half of my men, you found a drone controller.” The Pilot grinned. “Thanks Sir.” And he sat down with his squad. As the Grand Admiral was observing it more, he noticed that it was still operational. He turned it on, and the drone activated. He noticed it was behind the Senate Building, he then flew it to the Camp Site. Admiral defenderII stared in awe. “Who found it?” as he walked around it, observing it’s wonderful display. “A couple of Pilots.” He said. The Admiral walked to the resting quarters, and spoke with some Squad Commanders. The Grand Admiral retreated to his tent, eager for tomorrow.
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Smog879 is not online. Smog879
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09 Mar 2012 06:25 PM
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[[CHAPTER THREE]]
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diglet8 is not online. diglet8
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14 Jun 2012 05:16 PM
I was only in 1 chapter, I feel left out D:
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