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Re: The Rise of Octavia [A story]

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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 10:30 PM
Chapter One: Sparks

[OSE Rally Center; 0900 hours]

 Legodude12 stood on the podium, waiting for his loyal soldiers to quiet down. His praetor, blackcat54, stood by his side, shifting his weight impatiently. The Praetorian Gaurds stood in various strategic positions, watching for trouble. The crowd slowly quieted down, and Lego began his speech.

 "My soldiers, the pilots, squadron commanders, captains, senators, and admirals of the Octavian Star Empire, today is a glorious day for our empire! Today we march on the clans that thought we died after E981! We shall make our presence known to all, and we shall be a dominant force in the clan world! We will not bow to the demands of those clans larger than ourselves. Instead, we shall crush them underfoot on our path to greatness! We have declared war on all who oppose us! This is our day, our time! Let's take the fight to them!"

 The pilots cheered and clapped as Lego stepped down from the podium, while the higher ranks braced themselves. They, along with Lego and his praetor, knew that this wouldn't be an easy war.

[NFC: Fort Topixa; 1100 hours]

 It was an average day here at NFC's main base. A few raiders, nothing special. But the guards started hearing something, a "whoomp-whoomp" sound as they described later. One man pulled his binoculars out and scanned the horizon. He swept from side to side, seeing nothing, but then, he froze.

 "They're coming."

More to come if you want.
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 10:33 PM
Very nice. I'd like to see more.

{OSE Emperor}
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 10:54 PM
Are you going to make more?

{OSE Emperor}
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 10:56 PM
Alright. That was the prologue, as well as the first paragraph of chapter one. Tiem for copypaste.

[NFC: Fort Topixa; 1100 hours]
 It was an average day here at NFC's main base. A few raiders, nothing special. But the guards started hearing something, a "whoomp-whoomp" sound as they described later. One man pulled his binoculars out and scanned the horizon. He swept from side to side, seeing nothing, but then, he froze.

"They're coming!"

[OSE attack helicopter; 1100 hours]

 The chopper dodged and weaved through the air, trying to stay away from the anti-aircraft fire peppering the sky above Fort Topixa. Captain C747 leaned out the side, holding a sniper rifle. The rest of the team jumped, and the parachutes temporarily blocked his view. He pulled back inside and set up a rest for his rifle. He sighted down the scope and watched for targets.

[200 meters from Topixa's walls; 1110 hours]

 Captains DoctorCooper and Sillylego duck behind a large boulder, barely getting behind it before a hail of bullets hits the opposite side. Both of their assault teams had been taken down. All of them were either dead or wounded to the point that they couldn't fight. DoctorCooper glanced out for a second, then ducked back as a machine gun opened up nearby. The two captains argued, trying to decide how to move up without being filled with bullets. Then they heard a crack, and the machine gun went silent. Another crack, and a scream filled the air, "Sniper!" Both of them smiled, knowing they'd make it out today.

[Outside main entrance within fort;1132 hours]

 Roblox42658 knelt down, feeling for the hairline crack that marked the line between the double doors of the entrance. He and the Praetorian Gaurds he led had neutralized all of the guards outside the main building. He found it after a minute, and smirked. He reached into his pack and pulled out two blocks of C4. He fixed them to the crack. The Guards retreated several feet and ducked behind a debris pile.

 "Fire in the hole!", Roblox yelled, and a loud explosion rent the air. Shrapnel flew everywhere, shredding the pile they hid behind. Roblox was hit by a small shard of glass, and it embedded in his shoulder. He shrugged it off, and the Gaurds moved into the building.

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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:02 PM
It took me a while to type because I had to go do something for about ten minutes.

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:04 PM
Lego, do you want to be a part of the battles, or should I put you in a command post?

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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sillylego is not online. sillylego
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06 Mar 2012 11:07 PM
I am a sniper girl. :P

You should give me some cybernetic high intensity laser sniper rifle :P
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sillylego is not online. sillylego
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06 Mar 2012 11:08 PM
But this is very good! Keep writing! :)
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:17 PM
[OSE attack helicopter; 1219]

 Captain C747 leaned back and sighed. He had been hitting targets for an hour now, and he was rather bored of it. He grabbed a bottle of water and poured it over his head, then drank what was left. It was going to be a long day. He leaned forward and sighted down the scope again. He lined up a shot, and was squeezing the trigger to fire when the chopper was suddenly blown to one side by a direct hit from a flak cannon. He grabbed his rifle from where it fell, and pulled on a parachute. He charged out the open door and began to fall. In a daze, he didn't pull his ripcord fast enough. His parachute deployed, but he still slammed into the ground much faster than usual. It badly injured him, and he knew he was down for the count.

[Sillylego, crash site;1223 hours]

 Sillylego scrambled over the debris, trying to reach the soldier she had seen falling from the helicopter. She finally saw a deployed parachute, and traced the line over to the pack it came from. Sillylego looked down on the man, thinking he was dead, when suddenly he retched and coughed, then said,"You OSE?"

 Silly was surprised, and replied, "Yes, yes I am...How are you not dead?"

 "Not..exactly sure..myself. But I guess my sniping career...is over for a while. Take my rifle."

 "Seriously? I think you need a medevac first."

 "No, take it. Others need the medevac more than me."

 Sillylego was astonished, but accepted the rifle. The soldier let his head drop back to the ground, then murmured, "I guess this is the last time. This is Captain C747. Hail OSE!"

Happy, silly?

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matt2703 is not online. matt2703
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06 Mar 2012 11:17 PM
WHO WAS PHONE?!?!
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:19 PM
@matt
What?

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 11:30 PM
Yes, I'd like to be in the battles.

{OSE Emperor}
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darktrooper600 is not online. darktrooper600
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06 Mar 2012 11:32 PM
I'd like to be in battles too.
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RobotWeegee101 is not online. RobotWeegee101
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06 Mar 2012 11:33 PM
Matt has a big imagination, don't pay attention to him.
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:38 PM
[NFC Fort Topixa; 1345 hours]

 Legodude12 arrived at Fort Topixa, expecting a large crowd of cheering OSE celebrating a total victory. What he saw as he climbed out of the helicopter, though, was much closer to reality. Debris and the dead littered the area, and it wasn't limited to just NFC members. Many OSE died, many more than expected. Three assault teams were annihilated, two more were down to less than twenty-five percent strength, and several officers had died. Those soldiers that could still be useful helped line up the bodies, burying their comrades in the earth of the fortress they died to take, and throwing the NFC into a mass grave. The atmosphere was one of intense sorrow, and nobody who fought that day wanted to continue the war, not after this.

 Legodude knew he had to somehow boost the morale of his troops so that they would continue to fight, but for now, he decided to let them mourn. He walked among the working soldiers, attempting to comfort those who needed it most. He eventually came to one of his captains, Sillylego. She was holding a soot-covered sniper rifle that looked like it had fallen from the sky.

 He knelt down next to her and said,"Hello, silly. How's it going?"

 "Not well, sir. This isn't exactly the way I planned on becoming a sniper."

 "What do you mean? I see you have a rifle. Did you take it from one of the NFC?"

 "No. It was one of our comrade's. He covered DocterCooper and I when we were pinned down earlier, but his chopper was hit. He's over there. He lapsed into a coma, and the medic doesn't know if he's going to wake up." She nodded towards a medical tent. "Go see if you want."

 "Alright, I will. I'm sorry, I truly am." Legodude stood up and walked towards the tent, looking around and taking in the horror scene. If the whole war was going to be like this...No. It won't be, he convinced himself as he strode more quickly towards that tent, and slipped inside.

 There were four patients in this tent, all of which seemed to have extreme injuries. Legodude knew that only one of them was a sniper, the Captain in the back. He walked over and stood by the officer, silent and respectful. He pulled off his cap and placed it on the Captain's chest, saying "This is the ultimate honor. The Cap of the Emperor. I hope you can one day wear it with pride."
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:38 PM
@Lego
Alright, you'll be in the next battle.

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 11:40 PM
I love how we have an official OSE storywriter.

Some of the best I've read, and I'm not just saying that because you're OSE.

{OSE Emperor}
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:41 PM
Heh, thanks.
I'll post more in about twenty minutes, then take a break 'till tomorrow, unless I really get into it.

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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matt2703 is not online. matt2703
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06 Mar 2012 11:42 PM
DIE YA FRENCHIE!
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 11:42 PM
I hope you really get into it. I want to read more.

{OSE Emperor}
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:43 PM
@matt
Mmkay.
Je parle francais. Umad?

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:54 PM
*Disclaimer:Prologue was Day One, Topixa was Day Two*

[OSE attack force en route to JC Fort Fang; Day Four, 1245 hours]

 Legodude looked up from his comm-pad when the pilot of the chopper, darktrooper600, announced over the fleetcomm that they were twenty klicks out of Fort Fang. The entire attack force knew that this was going to be an easy victory; Fort Fang had never been well-defended. Legodude took control of the guns, getting used to the controls and doing weapons checks. He knew that this victory would be terrific for morale if all went well.

 "All troops, prepare to drop. I repeat, prepare to drop. This is your leader speaking. Topixa may have been a hard battle, but this is going to be a turkey shoot! Let's move!" The scream for blood and revenge for fallen comrades filled the air, drowning the engine noise for several seconds.

 The helicopters continued advancing, but Legodude had planned something new for this attack. A roar drowned out everything, and a squadron of OSE's most elite pilots shot by in jets, darting across the sky towards the fortress. The cheers from the assault force came back as fireballs rose up from the ground, totally destroying the outer wall of Fort Fang.

More to come; I got into it.
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F5StealthBomber is not online. F5StealthBomber
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06 Mar 2012 11:59 PM
Great story, but OSE has sort of had their behind handed to them almost every time they fight a war.

(Example: RAA)
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legodude12 is not online. legodude12
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06 Mar 2012 11:59 PM
Good. I made a shout. I'm positive all of OSE will be begging you for more soon.

{OSE Emperor}
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Commander747 is not online. Commander747
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06 Mar 2012 11:59 PM
@F5

This isn't meant to reflect any combat abilities OSE actually has. I'm just playing it by ear.

~F.I.HighComm/OSECaptain~
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