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Re: Backround for darthbrett
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| 27 Feb 2012 05:36 PM |
Life was good in my village of Turkra. Everything was normal. I was an adventurer, always looking for danger. As I got older, I got better. Eventually, I was trained as a ninja. My life was perfect!!! But one day, as I was walking the woods for adventure, a mysterious man walked up to me, and offered me a sword. He promised I would never loose, and it was one of a kind. I graciously took it, and returned to the village. At the village, a crowd of kids gathered around to see my new beauty. As I remove the sheath, a dark energy overcomes me. I feel as if I'm in another person, immobilized, but see everything. Un-willingly, I attack the innocent children, blood flying like bats from hell. I can't control myself. I see my best friend, an expert warrior and bowman, charging at me. I close my eyes. He is knocked into a house and out cold The guards do their best to stop me, but die in vain. I see the blade cutting through everyone I know and love. I gain enough control to utter a magical spell that my father taught me, and I teleport, not knowing where. I am a disgrace to my village, a murder. I can never return. I now know, that the mysterious seller planned this genocide. Now, I must find him, and kill him so I can return home. But for now, I'm a disgraced soul, walking a path of destruction.
I realize that I'm in a church. As I look for a priest, the evil energy of the sword chills me to the bone, even with it in the sheath. I turn the corner, and bump into what seems to be the head priest. He says," I have been expecting you, young one." As I start to speak, he silences me and explains that he is the guardian priest of Turkra, and knows what happened. As I hand him the sheathed sword, he takes it to an altar, and begins saying a prayer. A bright blue cross appears before him, and attaches to the sheath. The sheath starts to shatter, and a burst of light explodes from the sword. There is nothing left. The priest walks up to me and says," I knew your father, and he expected something such as this to happen. That's why he used the remainder of his life, constructing a set of weapons, made for you. Of course, he made a test, that only you could pass. Since this evil time is upon us, I suspect you wish to obtain the set?"Of course!" I say eagerly, being the adventurer I am. "Very well. Your father put an invisible spell on you, and I will activate it. Come back safe... Your our last hope." And with that, he says the release word to the spell, and I'm whisked to a long hall. To be continued........
Please do not reply to this. I need it to continue the story, and random replies will make that difficult. |
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| 28 Feb 2012 09:25 PM |
| I look around. It is just a long hall with a left turn at the end. Simple enough. I take a step, and trigger a pressure plate. Darts come whizzing from the back wall and I duck just in time. The plate had a picture of a moon. I step on the two remaining different patter plates and realize that the sun picture does not trigger anything. It seems like I have to get across hitting only the sun plates. I take a step, and nothing happens. I take a diagonal jump to the next sun plate. Yet again nothing happens. I am almost at the end, then realize the rest are all moons! How can I pass them? I sit and think hard. Then it hits me! I get up, and jump, landing my foot on the wall, jump diagonally, and bounce off that wall into the safe end. I walk into a large room with nothing in it. The wall closes behind me, as three shadow fiends appear before me. They say in a crackling voice, " This is your final test, which you shall not prevail. You must defeat us three, using only what you can see..." And instantly one of them lunges at me. I do a back-flip, kicking him in the chin. As I land, the other two come running up. I do a sweep kick, sending them flying, and as a cat a pounce on one of the shadows throats. I lift him up, toss him in the air, and spiral kick him into his other. With one defeated and two left, they start to get serious. They run at me, with blade like arms, and start to slash. But instantly they deatomize into a shadow, and run straight through me! It feels like one hundred blades just ripped through my stomach. Staggering, I realize I have to finish this now. With the remainder of my energy, I run grabbing it by the leg and throw it at the wall. As it hits, I jump and smash his skull under my feet. As I spring off the wall, I do a back-flip, grabbing the shadow's head, and flip him to the ground, breaking his neck in the process. A pedestal appears in the middle of the room. A katana, with a blade like midnight blue and a handle like a black from the underworld. It seems almost holy though. The sheath matches the blade, with black trim. I also spot a blank black belt on the pedestal. I pick it up and under it discover a scroll. As it unravels, light blasts from it, giving me its knowledge. I put the belt and katana on. The priest appears teleport me out. To be continued..... |
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| 01 Mar 2012 09:46 PM |
| "Very good. I see you have succeeded. Considering you're a refugee of your village, you have to be disguised, and well. That's why your father trained you as a ninja and a warrior. Take these clothes. They are similar to your father's, but no so much in which you'll get caught." I thank the man, and then he teleports me to a village called Bloodshed city, for its love of fighting. "Well the priest did give me some money, so at least I can buy some food." I say while taking in my surroundings. I start walking, looking for a food stall, where I find a boy practicing with a huge scythe. I run up to him and ask " Hey, do you know where I can get some food?" He responds," Your not from around here are you." "No, I'm not, I'm just an adventurer." "Are you looking for a new team-" "Sorry, not really." "But I'm a-" "I said NO!" And I take off running. A reach the town center, and notice a flyer that reads: Adventurer tournament! All fight styles welcome! 1st place prize is a sack of cash and two prizes from the "Lost souls Chest" Sign up Here! Interested, knowing a shouldn't try to become public, I sign up. I find some food, and time goes by. Eventually the tournament is up. As I walk in, I notice there is only three other people. A very attractive female, who is holding a giant staff. It looks basic enough, but something makes me think it is more than it shows. With long black hair, blue eyes that read your every movement, and a perfect complexion, she doesn't seem like quite the fighter, more of a little prissy snob. A couple feet away is a tall guy with possibly brown hair. He carries a sword and a bow on his back, suggesting that he has a deadly combo. He seems to have expert perception as well. Finally, I see the kid from the practice grounds! With his tall muscular body, muscles bulging especially from his arms, darker skin, and the menacing three bladed scythe on his back, he seems as deadly as the other guy! This is going to be one heck of a tournament! The announcer comes in and says " First round will be between- To be continued.... |
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| 02 Mar 2012 09:44 PM |
| " Soran vs. Kienshi!!!!!!" "Heh, this will be easy!" I say, slightly over confident. As we walk onto the arena, I ask " Why are you fighting? A pretty girl like you should be at home." " Pretty cocky for a guy who doesn't know their enemy." She smirks back. "BEGIN!!!!!!!!!" The announcer shouts, surprising us both. I run up, while unsheathing my sword. She instantly swings her staff at my head, misses, and I run up it, do an aerial back flip, and once I land, sweep kick her feet. As she falls, I use the ability of my sword shadow stalker, and turn into a shadow. These shadows burn when touched. I fly into her, bring her up to the sky. As I turn human again, I spiral kick her, sending her flying to the ground. She gets up, panting, and wipes the blood from under her lip. " I'll admit, you have some moves, but lets see how you keep up when I'm trying!" With that, she shoots needles from her staff. Instantly, I deflect them with my sword. What I didn't know was that those needles were a teleportation method. She appears right in front of me, a huge menacing blade pointing out from the stab. She smiles, and stabs me through the stomach, and screams " Have a nice trip fool!" And she looks away. The blade explodes, sending me flying and hitting the ground with a loud thud. Coughing up blood, I see that she is to be taken seriously. Somehow, I find the strength in me to keep fighting. Knowing I have limited moves, I have to make them count. "Still wanna fight huh?" She slowly steps towards me. Remembering I bought a couple weapons, I devise a plan. I take three shuriken from the belt, a smoke bomb, and some metal string. In my ninja training, I was taught how to fight without my vision. I throw the smoke ball right in between us. With the remainder of my energy. I run up and roundhouse kick her to the side. She flies and hits the pillar that supports the roof. Quickly, I attach the shuriken to the string, and throw them. Before she can get up, they clack against each other and dig themselves into the pillar. She is immobilized. I walk up, and put the tip of my blade to her neck. I win. She seems very mad. As I am cutting the wires, I say " You know you would have won if it weren't for that last second tactic right?" As the last string is cut, she instantly stands up, kicks me in the stomach, and runs off. Something about that girl interests me. As the paramedics come to take me to infirmary, I can't help but think about that girl... To be continued. |
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| 05 Mar 2012 10:12 PM |
| As I'm in the infirmary, I drift off into a heavy sleep. A enter a dream, and see my father. I walk up to him, and can't believe my eyes.He is in golden robes, with a cape made of the brightest gold, slowly fluttering behind him. His sword is in a scabbard decorated with diamonds, rubies and all sorts of other gems, and his smile is friendly and comforting. As I get closer, he says,"Hello Soran. I know this is startling, but I need to test you. This test will prove to me that you are ready for my master collection. Once proven worthy, I will explain to you how to defeat your foe. He is a much bigger threat than you realize. Now lets begin." And with that, he releases his sword from its sheath, its gold trim glittering in the sun. I take out shadow stalker, ready for anything. My father runs up, and takes a quick downward slash towards me. Effortlessly, I block the sword. Then without warning, he delivers a kick to me stomach, that sends me flying in the air. He jumps up, slashes my back, then kicks me to the ground. "Come on son, don;t you wanna give up? You know you can't win." He runs up, his sword sparking against the ground. He delivers an uppercut slash to my face. I'm flipped back like a rag-doll, with him right under me, he drives his sword through my back. Although this is a dream, I feel everything. My body slides off his sword effortlessly. I can barely stand, but with all my might, activate the shadows. They fly at my father, but he effortlessly side steps them. I've run out of energy and collapse. I slowly start crawling towards him. I want him to be proud, I can't give up. He kicks me point plank in the face, breaking my jaw. I can't even bare to move. He walks up to me, and places his hand on my back. I feel a soothing energy overcome me. Before I know it, I'm healed. "I am impressed Soran." "But why father? I couldn't even hit you!" "That may be so, but you wouldn't give up! That is the spirit of a true warrior, a true hero. You have proven yourself worthy, my son. To defeat this evil, you will need the dagger on connections. It was forged by the seven great tribes, long ago. After they used it to defeat the evil of their time, they sealed it away in a seven-key-locked palace. You will need to gather the seven keys from each of the seven original tribes, and obviously they will be heavily guarded. Whether you like it or not, you can not do this alone. You need people that excel in what you don't. I have made some weapons,armor, and defensive clothing, and hidden them in dungeons. My time is fading. I have put new clothes under your bed. They are woven from the fur of the rarest creatures, and enhanced by the most magical beings. They will suit you well in combat, and in hiding your identity I will place in your mind the location of my first dungeon, where you will find a weapon that may help you in many situations. Soran, please son, don't let us down." And with that he disappears. I wake up, wondering if I was hallucinating due to a concussion, or if this really happened. Scared, but excited, I look under the bed. And there they are, the clothes he described. I notice that I am not injured at all, in fact feel stronger! I jump out of bed, and put on the clothes my father has given to me. I remember that I have one day till the fight for the championship. The only thing on my mind is finding the dungeon. To be continued.... |
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| 06 Mar 2012 08:42 PM |
| n. It is in the middle. I walk straight. have figured out the pattern! After a series of beeps, I come to a door and open it. I walk into a room that is a plain square. To my left and right, In front of me, is a design of a humanoid creature with targeAs I step out of the hospital and onto the ground, I can see a very specific forest ahead. I start walking towards it, determined to get to the dungeon. I just start to enter the forest, when I see a giant maple tree, that seems like it shouldn't belong. I take out my sword and carve a symbol into it. The ground beneath me turns into a spiral staircase heading down. As I walk down, the stairs get wider, then I come into an opening. As the door closes behind me, the lights go out. I walk forward, feeling the wall when I hit a switch. The wall shoots out, throwing me against the wall, and that wall slides throwing me against the door. "Crap that hurt!" I say, rubbing my arm. "Fine, I was go straight on!" I start running, hear a beep, but keep going. THUD! I run straight into a wall, Then the wall shoots me back to the door. I sit, trying to think on how to get through. Beep! I hear that noise again. A minute later, I hear it again. This time, I notice it came from my left a little further ahead. I go all the way to the right, surprisingly not getting hit by anything. I keep walking, and trip over a wire. A land on the floor, witch catapults me back to the door again. Beep! I hear it in the same spot as last time. I go the way I did last time, then stop. Beep! It comes from right in-front of me. I go to the left, and listets on major parts like the neck head and heart. With sword in hand, I walk into the middle of the room. A couple of mini daggers shoot from the wall. Instinctively, I deflect them with my sword, and watch them fly into the ground. Then a boatload of daggers come flying out from the left and right walls. I start deflecting dagger after dagger. They just keep coming! I start to think that those targets mean something. I carefully run up, deflecting all the daggers that come withing my range, and stick my sword through the head, neck, heart, and stomach. The daggers stop flying. A couple more shoot from the right wall, miss me horribly, and spell round two on the left wall. Then, much bigger daggers start to shoot out, but not as fast. I deflect one with my sword, and am pushed back a little. I run up, dodging the daggers due to their lack of numbers and speed, and try to hit the head target with my sword. I hit an invisible psychic field. I turn around, just in time to deflect a dagger. I watch it fly through the forcefeild and hit the wall. "How the crap did that happen?!" I say, astonished. I deflect another dagger, trying to aim for the head. It's a direct hit! I concentrate on the next dagger, which comes in three. I turn into a shadow, and grab the daggers, they catch on fire, and I throw the daggers hitting the vital spots. The daggers stop. The forcefield drops, and the wall bursts open. A huge angel like being bursts through the wall. He is flying in the air and says " Young Soran! It is time for your test for the daggers of the searing wind! You will have to beat me!" And with that, he shoots a chained dagger. It wraps around my chest. He pulls, and throws me into the next room. I fall for a while and hit the ground. To be continued.... |
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| 06 Mar 2012 08:50 PM |
As I step out of the hospital and onto the ground, I can see a very specific forest ahead. I start walking towards it, determined to get to the dungeon. I just start to enter the forest, when I see a giant maple tree, that seems like it shouldn't belong. I take out my sword and carve a symbol into it. The ground beneath me turns into a spiral staircase heading down. As I walk down, the stairs get wider, then I come into an opening. As the door closes behind me, the lights go out. I walk forward, feeling the wall when I hit a switch. The wall shoots out, throwing me against the wall, and that wall slides throwing me against the door. "Crap that hurt!" I say, rubbing my arm. "Fine, I was go straight on!" I start running, hear a beep, but keep going. THUD! I run straight into a wall, Then the wall shoots me back to the door. I sit, trying to think on how to get through. Beep! I hear that noise again. A minute later, I hear it again. This time, I notice it came from my left a little further ahead. I go all the way to the right, surprisingly not getting hit by anything. I keep walking, and trip over a wire. A land on the floor, witch catapults me back to the door again. Beep! I hear it in the same spot as last time. I go the way I did last time, then stop. Beep! It is in the middle. I walk straight. have figured out the pattern! After a series of beeps, I come to a door and open it. I walk into a room that is a plain square. To my left and right, In front of me, is a design of a humanoid creature with targets on vital spots.With sword in hand, I walk into the middle of the room. A couple of mini daggers shoot from the wall. Instinctively, I deflect them with my sword, and watch them fly into the ground. Then a boatload of daggers come flying out from the left and right walls. I start deflecting dagger after dagger. They just keep coming! I start to think that those targets mean something. I carefully run up, deflecting all the daggers that come withing my range, and stick my sword through the head, neck, heart, and stomach. The daggers stop flying. A couple more shoot from the right wall, miss me horribly, and spell round two on the left wall. Then, much bigger daggers start to shoot out, but not as fast. I deflect one with my sword, and am pushed back a little. I run up, dodging the daggers due to their lack of numbers and speed, and try to hit the head target with my sword. I hit an invisible psychic field. I turn around, just in time to deflect a dagger. I watch it fly through the forcefeild and hit the wall. "How the crap did that happen?!" I say, astonished. I deflect another dagger, trying to aim for the head. It's a direct hit! I concentrate on the next dagger, which comes in three. I turn into a shadow, and grab the daggers, they catch on fire, and I throw the daggers hitting the vital spots. The daggers stop. The forcefield drops, and the wall bursts open. A huge angel like being bursts through the wall. He is flying in the air and says " Young Soran! It is time for your test for the daggers of the searing wind! You will have to beat me!" And with that, he shoots a chained dagger. It wraps around my chest. He pulls, and throws me into the next room. I fall for a while and hit the ground. To be continued....
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| 06 Mar 2012 09:28 PM |
This is terrible. Stop before I am forced to rip my eyes out. |
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| 21 Apr 2012 09:22 AM |
| U SHALL NOT STOP DARTHBRETT GO ON AND ILL DEAL WITH TEH HATERS SOMDAY!!!! |
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| Joined: 18 Apr 2012 |
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mrbeaners
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| Joined: 30 Apr 2011 |
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| 08 Apr 2013 02:11 PM |
| The op is copying and pasting from wikis |
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| 13 Jan 2014 07:40 AM |
| it is?? I dont think THATS true :| |
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| 13 Jan 2014 07:42 AM |
all i know is that writing fiction about yourself makes you look like a dummy |
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| 13 Jan 2014 08:06 AM |
| You're going a little too fast. You need to space your story. Like, maybe give us some time in the beginning, showing normal everyday life, make us get attached to the village characters so we're unhappy when they die. |
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