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| 24 Jul 2011 08:29 PM |
Prologue: The Vin.
(For Vaktovians and Vins alike. DO NOT GET MAD AT THE DETAILS! I WILL MAKE THIS STORY GRUESOME AT SOME POINTS AND THE VAKTOVIAN EMPIRE WILL BE EVIL, Because we are..In some ways not all. You have been warned.)
The Vaktovian Empire has won many wars. We have conquered galaxies, planets, and races alike. There have been no enemy able to defeat us, or even pose a threat, until now…. The Vin, a militia of elite warriors who would stop at nothing to see Vaktovia burned and Vaktus Hung. They’re leader. Headmaster Swarpion, at least that is what he calls himself now.
But to tell you this story we must go back to the beginning, To where it all started. We must go back to when Swarpion was a child. Around the age of 12, he was playing in the living room of his house, during a Thunder storm, when his father ran inside the house Soaking wet. Swarpion could see the fear in his eyes. His father yelled “Get the boy to a Hiding place!” He looked around aimlessly, Swarpion was confused, but his mother understood. She quickly grabbed him and pulled him into a closet. When he was safely inside she whispered to him. “Stay silent my boy, stay silent.” Swarpion saw that his mother almost began to cry. This worried him.
It was Nearly Half an hour when they kicked the door in. Soldiers swarmed inside, They wore helmets that covered they’re faces completely, Black Mechanical armor, And held Assault rifles. Swarpion felt a cold chill run down his back when he saw who stepped through the door. Silently He left the real essence of Fear and Hatred, storming down through the door stepped in General Sam. He wore a Dark Trench coat with Steel toed boots, An Officers Hat , Gloves and a scar running down his left eye to the bottom of his neck. Swarpion Feared for the safety of his Mother and Father. He knew the General’s Reputation more than anyone, The General kept things simple, He put a gun to the fathers head and said In a Heavy British accent.
“You Refused to sell us this land to make a Medical base for our men, Now we take it from you.” Swarpions father smiled and said. “Your going to have to kill me if you want this land.” The General Laughed and Retorted back “So be it.” He pulled the trigger and Swarpions Fathers lifeless body slammed against the floor of his living room. His mother was grabbed as if to be taken prisoner, she resisted and was stabbed. The soldiers and the General left.
Swarpion out of pure fear Stayed in the closet for half a Hour then he crawled out to find his mother still alive. He Grabbed her head and cried. His mother said to him while coughing blood. “Don’t cry my child, me and your father will go to a better place.” Swarpion always knew his family was religious and he was himself a holy child, But where was God now? Where was God when his father was shot? When his mother was stabbed without mercy? His mother saw the look in his eye and knew. “NEVER give up on the Lord my Boy NEVER, He had a plan, A plan for you and a plan for all of us.” He kissed his mother on her bloodied cheek and stayed with her when she died. Then he took his belongings along with a Toy bought by his parents and left. He knew what Gods plan for him was…Retribution for the deaths of thousands… as he walked out the door he heard his baby brother cry, He turned and grabbed him and walked out with him. |
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bloxman26
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:34 PM |
| Lol, Nice did you actually read it though? |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:36 PM |
| Im too bored to read it all, sorry. |
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fourpapa1
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:37 PM |
| Really? Thank you and Spar, Not to worry if you dont wish to read it dont. |
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Icey39146
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:45 PM |
| Lol nice. Keep writing, because I wanna see how it ends. |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:46 PM |
God has a plan for everyone.
by the way, is this going to turn into a revenge story?? |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:47 PM |
| Im not sure, This is just how it all started. |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:50 PM |
| An amazing opener to the story! I am already loving it! |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:51 PM |
| This is AWEOME! Make more chapters! |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:53 PM |
| Alright! It seems I have to live up to expectations now. |
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NTV413
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:53 PM |
| Very interesting. You just inspired me to make a story. Called, "The Future: The End Of RAT". |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:57 PM |
| Good! I am always happy to inspire vaktovians. |
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StuntMike
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:58 PM |
| Interesting. I look foward to reading more chapters in my spare time |
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| 24 Jul 2011 08:59 PM |
| Good, I look forward to reading your feed back. |
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| 24 Jul 2011 09:10 PM |
| Im going to make a book now! Called The Takeover of RAT. |
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| 24 Jul 2011 09:10 PM |
OK! hahaha send me a Private message with the Link, I love reading.
OKAY EVERYONE RATE THE PROLOGUE 1/10 STARTING NOW! |
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| 24 Jul 2011 09:11 PM |
| Very immpressive sir. It shows what happends to people who go aginst our empire. |
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| 24 Jul 2011 09:13 PM |
| Yes, But this story will be fair. Vaktovians will die at the hands of Swarp No lop sided stories hehe. |
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