luniso
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:06 PM |
It was a cold day here in Venezia. I was speeding on my bike. I was going to Alianor. I was pedaling as hard as i could. As the blurry trees and buildings past me, so did Fire Engines. Not just 1 or 2. 12. They sped past me probably at 70 or 80 MPH. I was getting nervous. They were going the same direction i was. I started pedaling harder. Sweat started to pour down my face. As i got closer to the amazing Alianor II, i started seeing smoke. Thick, Black smoke. Not any chimney smoke... This was fire smoke. I stared in awe as i got closer. I herd loud explosions. I saw more Fire Engines. I saw Privates and Officers running around with Swords. I saw people in FEAR Honors Trench Coats chasing the FEAR Privates. BOOM! The 3rd Floor of Alianors building got blown off. Then i saw a Colonel yelling orders. I couldn't tell who he was because he was wearing a thick bullet-proof helmet. "GET TO YOU'R BATTLE STATIONS NOW!" said the Colonel. "Uhh Sir? What's going on?" I replied. "AN ATTACK!! NOW GET TO YOU'RE BATTLE STATIONS!" "SIR YES SIR!" I ran as hard as i could. An explosion knocked me down to the floor. I felt pain. Lots of pain. My back was burned. As i grabbed for my Pistol on the floor, everything was quiet. Too quiet. Like a normal day guarding Alianor. The attack ended. As Police sirens and Fire Fighters sirens and Paramedics sirens wailed through the silence healing the wounded, i was on the floor. I was tired. I wanted to jump on my bed ans rest for a good 10 minutes. I got up and rushed into Alianors 3 storie building. Well... Now it's a 2 storie building... As Colonels and General were yelling orders, i went into the building. I couldn't believe my eyes.. FEAR Commander SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX was standing right in the 1st Floor. 2 Guards were next to him. One guard was General JasonIIII and the other was Colonel ImAwesomeFoo. As he stared in awe at the damage done, i ran into the 2nd Floor which was missing the roof and I just looked at the damage. VROOOM! "WHAT THE?" I yelled. Next thing i know Commander SONIC was standing next to me. "OPEN FIRE!" His voice boomed across the room. I started firing everywhere although no enemies were seen. After waiting a good 2 and a half minutes.. BOOM! BOOM!! BBOOOOOOOMMMM!!! The building shook. I looked up and i saw planes. But something was different about these planes. Not Enemy planes. Vortex Security war planes. |
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:09 PM |
| Great job nice to see another FEAR writer can I be in the book! |
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luniso
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:16 PM |
| What about me? :P Am I not important enough? I'm an Officer. |
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luniso
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:18 PM |
| Nice story, luniso. Could I be in the story too? My rank is Colonel just in case. |
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luniso
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:22 PM |
| O_O BEST. BOOK. EVAR!. Are CPLs allowed in it? :D |
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luniso
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:24 PM |
| :DDDD Thanks!!! And sure! ^_^ I'll find a place to put you in! |
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:30 PM |
| You know what? You should be an author! (If possible, can you PM me the link to chapter 2 or put it in your blurb? I gtg. 3=) |
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cpb1199
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| 01 Mar 2012 02:48 PM |
| Can I be in it? I'm a captain. |
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| 01 Mar 2012 04:30 PM |
Uh-oh. A fear book. EVERYONE RUN!
~Love ensues~ |
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