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Re: FEAR Book 1: The battle | Chapter 1: The Planes

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luniso is not online. luniso
Joined: 10 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 161
01 Mar 2012 02:06 PM
It was a cold day here in Venezia. I was speeding on my bike. I was going to Alianor. I was pedaling as hard as i could. As the blurry trees and buildings past me, so did Fire Engines. Not just 1 or 2. 12.
They sped past me probably at 70 or 80 MPH. I was getting nervous. They were going the same direction i was. I started pedaling harder. Sweat started to pour down my face. As i got closer to the amazing Alianor II, i started seeing smoke. Thick, Black smoke. Not any chimney smoke... This was fire smoke.
I stared in awe as i got closer. I herd loud explosions. I saw more Fire Engines. I saw Privates and Officers running around with Swords. I saw people in FEAR Honors Trench Coats chasing the FEAR Privates.
BOOM!
The 3rd Floor of Alianors building got blown off. Then i saw a Colonel yelling orders. I couldn't tell who he was because he was wearing a thick bullet-proof helmet.
"GET TO YOU'R BATTLE STATIONS NOW!" said the Colonel.
"Uhh Sir? What's going on?" I replied.
"AN ATTACK!! NOW GET TO YOU'RE BATTLE STATIONS!"
"SIR YES SIR!"
I ran as hard as i could. An explosion knocked me down to the floor. I felt pain. Lots of pain. My back was burned. As i grabbed for my Pistol on the floor, everything was quiet. Too quiet. Like a normal day guarding Alianor. The attack ended. As Police sirens and Fire Fighters sirens and Paramedics sirens wailed through the silence healing the wounded, i was on the floor. I was tired. I wanted to jump on my bed ans rest for a good 10 minutes. I got up and rushed into Alianors 3 storie building. Well... Now it's a 2 storie building... As Colonels and General were yelling orders, i went into the building. I couldn't believe my eyes.. FEAR Commander SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX was standing right in the 1st Floor. 2 Guards were next to him. One guard was General JasonIIII and the other was Colonel ImAwesomeFoo. As he stared in awe at the damage done, i ran into the 2nd Floor which was missing the roof and I just looked at the damage.
VROOOM!
"WHAT THE?" I yelled.
Next thing i know Commander SONIC was standing next to me.
"OPEN FIRE!" His voice boomed across the room.
I started firing everywhere although no enemies were seen. After waiting a good 2 and a half minutes..
BOOM! BOOM!! BBOOOOOOOMMMM!!!
The building shook. I looked up and i saw planes. But something was different about these planes. Not Enemy planes. Vortex Security war planes.
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cherrybomb117 is not online. cherrybomb117
Joined: 23 May 2009
Total Posts: 147
01 Mar 2012 02:09 PM
Great job nice to see another FEAR writer can I be in the book!
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luniso is not online. luniso
Joined: 10 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 161
01 Mar 2012 02:11 PM
Sure! What's you're rank?
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Wizard2268 is not online. Wizard2268
Joined: 31 Mar 2011
Total Posts: 985
01 Mar 2012 02:16 PM
What about me? :P Am I not important enough? I'm an Officer.
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luniso is not online. luniso
Joined: 10 Jun 2011
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01 Mar 2012 02:17 PM
Sure!
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nighthawk698 is not online. nighthawk698
Joined: 16 Jan 2010
Total Posts: 104
01 Mar 2012 02:18 PM
Nice story, luniso. Could I be in the story too? My rank is Colonel just in case.
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luniso is not online. luniso
Joined: 10 Jun 2011
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01 Mar 2012 02:20 PM
Mhm! :D
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RebeccaLynnFifield is not online. RebeccaLynnFifield
Joined: 28 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 278
01 Mar 2012 02:22 PM
O_O BEST. BOOK. EVAR!. Are CPLs allowed in it? :D
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luniso is not online. luniso
Joined: 10 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 161
01 Mar 2012 02:24 PM
:DDDD Thanks!!! And sure! ^_^ I'll find a place to put you in!
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RebeccaLynnFifield is not online. RebeccaLynnFifield
Joined: 28 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 278
01 Mar 2012 02:30 PM
You know what? You should be an author! (If possible, can you PM me the link to chapter 2 or put it in your blurb? I gtg. 3=)
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cpb1199 is not online. cpb1199
Joined: 30 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1557
01 Mar 2012 02:48 PM
Can I be in it? I'm a captain.
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inception284 is not online. inception284
Joined: 29 Feb 2012
Total Posts: 34
01 Mar 2012 04:30 PM
Uh-oh. A fear book. EVERYONE RUN!

~Love ensues~
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