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Re: ~``Leaving a Mark``~
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 05:50 PM |
Long ago in the time where magic and other sorts of "witchcraft" was heavily frowned upon, there were a group of journeymen, the ones who practice the arts you may call them. These journeymen would make all sorts of spells and potions and things of that nature. They were a large group, united, but separate at the same time. This group was secretive, the reason for this was well known, fright. Fright from the ones that could have them executed with a simple shout, or maybe even a letter, the first being the more common.
One mystical day, the group was doing their usual wandering with the magical world, when some man had gotten enraged from the act of another man pulling a prank on him. The enraged man's name was John Eldrich, but the pranksters name was surprisingly unknown. John had risen up off the floor and left, not a word was spoken. As for the rest of the men, they had gone back to their business.
The next day in the sanctuary, hell struck.
Guards and other forces had stormed in, setting fire to the wizardly artifacts and taking the men along with them. The both sides knew where they where going, but one won't come back out alive. For the sanctuary, it was destroyed, leaving nothing but a crystal orb in its place.
As was excepted, the men were executed on the grounds of witchcraft. But instead of full termination, their spirits were pushed out of their bodies and dragged to a closed in cave in the side of a mountain. The spirits were given rest inside the cave and were obligated to leave, under the grounds that they had to find a human being in under a week, or full termination will occur.
There is a way out of this however, once inside the human, they were now able to search for an artifact, the only artifact remaining, the crystal orb. The crystal orb has the power to erase any signs of total termination, leaving the spirit the free will to travel and not have to worry about fading away into eternity. To get to this orb, the spirits release enough of their strength to give the human a very small power. A power that will enhance the humans abilities a slight bit, but also leaving a mark on their face that glows a certain color.
You are one of these humans, you have been given a gift. The gift of a goal, an objective, an objective set on finding this orb. You must do this, for the spirits have left their mark on you, and you will leave a mark on the stone tablet of eternity...
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Rules
1: Limited romance (You should know when you go too far.) 2: Regular ROBLOX rules apply 3: No Mary/Gary Sues 4: Put detail and originality in you CS'es, the Admins and I don't want to have to read through "And i wash teh orfan and stuf" every single time... 5: If you have read the rules (Which if you have, good job), put in "No" where it says "Have you read the rules?:" 6: My word> Admins word> Your word 7: 2 CS'es MAX for a normal user, 4 for admins, and I can have as many as I want. >:3 8: The spirit can't talk to you, don't even try... 9: No meta gaming (This means you make your character know something that they don't) 10: You MUST be over 21, the spirits would much rather choose a 25 year old over a 13 year old. 11: New rules will be posted by me or an admin, and even then, the admin has to have my consent. 12: No god modding. You character might die, if that is the case, make another one and play it off like they were there the whole time. 13: If you have any questions or constructive criticism, PM me or an admin and we'll work it out. 14: Trolling =/= constructive criticism and is NOT allowed, permitted etc.
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CS (The fun part. :3)
Name: A.ge (Over 21): Gender: Physical appearance: Clothing: Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.): Mark power (MUST be very small): Personality: Bio: Have you read the rules?: |
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| 23 Feb 2012 05:56 PM |
Name: A.ge (Over 21):23 Gender:male Physical appearance:Red hair, green eyes, scar under nose, 6'2 Clothing:Camo pants, black t-shirt, tennis shoes. Mark:sorry I failed at link, Infinity symbol on tempal. (Infinaty is likea sideways 8) Mark power (MUST be very small):Beter reflexes Personality:usualy nice but can be a jerk, He hates people who think they are 'all that' and has a good temper, talks alot, goes silent and blacks out sometimes. Bio:Normal life, same thing everyday making a book untill the mark apeared. (I'll make more if needed.) Have you read the rules?:No |
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 05:58 PM |
| (Even though you are an admin, you might want to add more detail to your CS.) |
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| 23 Feb 2012 06:04 PM |
Name: A.ge (Over 21):23 Gender:male Physical appearance:Red hair, green eyes, scar under nose, 6'2,more normal like and skinny then muscular. Clothing:Green camo pants, black t-shirt, tennis shoes. Mark:sorry I failed at link, Greenish black Infinity symbol on tempal. (Infinaty is like a sideways 8) Mark power (MUST be very small):Amazing reflexes Personality:usualy nice but can be a jerk, He hates people who think they are 'all that' and has a good temper, talks alot, goes silent and blacks out sometimes. He also loves reading and isn't an exersizing type, he is likes usually being inside. Bio:Normal life, same thing everyday making a book and every once in a while diferent things happened but not ususaly. But when the mark came things went different everyday and he started getting faster at catching and reflex kind of stufff. (Still I'll make more if needed.) Have you read the rules?:No |
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Nanikaaru
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| 23 Feb 2012 06:24 PM |
Name: Celestic Amelia
@.ge (Over 21): 22
G.ender: Female
P.hysical A.ppearance: Her hair is dark brown, her eyes are a light blue, she's between skinny and fat, she's between pale and peach, her mark is on her stomach, and she's between short and tall (Around 6'0)
Clothing: Usually wears tight clothing that are usually dark-colors w/ thigh-high boots. She also wears a mid-thigh skirt that she can easily run in. She sometimes wears loose T-shirts, rarely, still dark colors. And she sometimes wears a hoodie, with a red zipper and most of it is dark grey.
Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.): (If it's not loading, then just wait a bit.) http://www.roblox.com/Celestics-Mark-item?id=73163388
Mark power (MUST be very small): Can summon little fire, but can passout if she summons a large amount of fire and keeps it summoned over a long period of time.
Personality: Understanding, respectful, clumsy, very friendly, out-going, and is very smart/clever.
Bio: When she was born, she was called "The Special one" since no one in her family tree has very light blue eyes. She's also called that name because she has a special mark when she was born, as-well. When she was 9, she was just finding out of her fire-powers. She also trained with it til' she was 16. By then, everyone knew about her special powers that no one even believed in. When she was 20, she set out to find out what the mark and her special powers was about. When she was 21, she found out that she was one of the humans that had little power of the witchcraft way back then. Now her she swore that she's gonna find the other humans that has special marks and powers.
Have you read the rules?: Yes I did.
(Hope this is acceptable. :DD) |
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| 23 Feb 2012 06:26 PM |
Name: Markus D. Reirth. A.ge (Over 21):24 Gender:Male. Physical appearance: Blond hair, with thin, curly locks. His eyes, are a passonite, and delicate, blue. His skin, is pale. He has a small birthmark, above his right eyebrow, which looks like a smudge, and is almost a tanned color. His eyebrows, and light, and in sunlight, look almost invisible because of being blond. His exact hair color, is a light, sandy blond. His height, is about 5'4, and his weight, 136, making him generly smaller, and weaker then most people around him. The tip of his finger tips, rest about 8 inches past his waist. His finger nails, are slightly dirty, and are longer, about as long as most girl's finger nails are, and are jagged. His expression, seems stuck between pure coldness, and pain. His feet, are stainned slightly darker then the rest of his skin, and are hard, his nails are caked in mud. Clothing:Simple, black tunnic. It comes about three inches down past his waist. It sits rather loose on his skin, sugesting it was either a hand-me-down, or he got it too big. The back, is covered in mud, making the shirt seem like it was almost suppose to be brown on the back. He wears slightly faded, and worn trousers, which, he folded the bottom of the leggings up, and he constantly pulls them up. Which once again, sugests either it being a hand-me-down, or simply too big too. He walks bare-footed normally, just because of his liking of the enviornment "Closer to nature." is what he says, when asked about why he does it like that. Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.):A seperant, smalll, and curverd into a circle, it having a rattle snake tail, that it seems to be biting. The whole thing glows a small, bright green. Mark power (MUST be very small): Is able, to spit acid out, in times of need, for defense, otherwise, only spits saliva. Personality:He is kind, and a loner. He doesn't get angry with being around people, but his expression shows he disaproves of it, by seeming to turn into more of a scorn, when he's near anyone. He almost always, does what he can, for anymore, without risking himself too much. He has an angry side, which, if unlocked, he will go onto an almost berserker mode, ignoring everything, except the feeling, to break/beat something. He then generly feels sorry, and may get a bit moody or sad after events occur that get him that furouis. Bio: His parents, were generly nice to him, not too many expectations, dissoplines, or anything else. He had an older brother, Teff. Teff was the oposite of Markus in everyway possible. They barley even looked alike. That didn't matter, Markus acted like a brother should to Teff, Teff, wasn't all that kind to his younger brother. He did stuff to constantly anger Markus, and to make in fly into his rage, he blamed in all on Markus. This was usual. Finally, one day, when Markus had told his brother, he had finally found the girl of his dreams, Teff, took the oppurtunity, before Markus could. Teff asked Markus's love, Hazel, to marry him. She was about to say something, but Markus found out, and this time, suffice to say, Teff didn't move again. Hazel, thought of Markus as a monster, told the whole town, made a sentence for him, for death. Markus, wouldn't have it, he left, leaving the town behind, this happened five years ago. Have you read the rules?:"No" |
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Nanikaaru
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 06:49 PM |
Name: Emma DeLox
A.ge: 24
Gender: Female
Physical Appearance: Emma stands at 5' 9" and weighs 130 lbs. Her hair is short, ending only at her neck, the shape of it is almost like an oval, and is colored a choclate brown. Her eyes, just like her hair, are choclate brown at the iris. Besides the mark, her face is perfectly clean, free from acme, scars or make up. On her hands are 2" fingernails with red fingernail paint.
Clothing: Emma wears a very stereotypical black beret on her head. Covering her torso is a black and white striped shirt, this shirt is long enough for one shoulder, but not the other. Her pants are black jeans and she wears 3" black high heels.
Mark: http://www.roblox.com/Emma-DeLox-II-The-Ones-Inside-Us-item?id=72728566 but for the ones that can't see it, It is a light blue Egyptian eye that is placed on her left cheek.
Mark Power: Night vision :o
Personality: Back when she was a child, Emma was a light-hearted being, one that would make witty jokes and laugh at her self. With in a few years, those jokes turned into silence, those laughs turned into cries, and that once light-hearted child is now a burdensome adult with the pressures of the English language among her.
Bio: Emma was born and raised in Bordeaux, France. Back then, she would have the time of her life. She would run around the city and smell the fine wi.nes, the warm toasty bread, she would make jokes about herself and laugh. Everything was perfect. Perfect until she hit the big 21, she and her parents moved to America for the opportunities the absolutely wonderful country has to offer. Emma was shocked in disbelief, she wanted to stay, but she just had to go with them.
Life couldn't be any worse for Emma, she gave up trying to learn English after months of preparation. Her classmates would always tease her about this, she was regarded as dumb and a bunch of other names that she wouldn't be caught dead repeating. And it did smell like wi.ne alright. She always keeps a French to English Pocket Dictionary near by, seeing she desperately needs it. And well, to put this in a nutshell, she's homesick. She wants to go back, but that will only be a dream.
Any thing else you want to say?: Emma is French... Deal with it...
Have you read the rules?: Nope. :P |
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 06:58 PM |
@Nani
The mark and power appears on your 21st birthday and when it appears, it appears on your face. Not your stomach.
@Golden
Accepted, shall I administer you? .... Welcome to the Admin club. :D |
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:01 PM |
| (Ima ganna make a Cs in a bit k?) |
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:04 PM |
(Can they have weird hair colors? Iam planning on having white hair,shes not old,only her hair is white. Notold white,but white white. Iam thinking all this in anime XD) |
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:11 PM |
(What year is it? So i can get a good idea of what to make my character wear) |
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magma72
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Nanikaaru
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:40 PM |
Re-done much? XD
Name: Celestic Amelia
@.ge (Over 21): 22
G.ender: Female
P.hysical A.ppearance: Her hair is dark brown, her eyes are a light blue, she's between skinny and fat, she's between pale and peach, her mark is on her stomach, and she's between short and tall (Around 6'0)
Clothing: Usually wears tight clothing that are usually dark-colors w/ thigh-high boots. She also wears a mid-thigh skirt that she can easily run in. She sometimes wears loose T-shirts, rarely, still dark colors. And she sometimes wears a hoodie, with a red zipper and most of it is dark grey.
Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.): (If it's not loading, then just wait a bit.) http://www.roblox.com/Celestics-Mark-item?id=73163388
Mark power (MUST be very small): Can summon little fire, but can passout if she summons a large amount of fire and keeps it summoned over a long period of time.
Personality: Understanding, respectful, clumsy, very friendly, out-going, and is very smart/clever.
Bio: When she was born, she was called "The Special one" since no one in her family tree has very light blue eyes. When she was 9, she was just finding out of her fire-powers. She also trained with it til' she was 16. By then, everyone knew about her special powers that no one even believed in. When she was 20, she set out to find out her special powers was about. When she was 21, she found out that she was one of the humans that had little power of the witchcraft way back then. She also found out that a mark suddenly appeared on her face, one day when she was in a hotel, looking into a mirror. She also found out that these humans that has supernatural powers has marks when they turn 21. Now her she swore that she's gonna find the other humans that has special marks on their faces and non-human powers.
Have you read the rules?: Nop.
(Derp, re-did. XD) |
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:47 PM |
@Nani
Scratch that part out with the special powers at 9, then training with it till 16 and setting out at 20. The powers and the mark come at the same time. Also the mark is at your face, whether you like it or not. |
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| 23 Feb 2012 07:51 PM |
| ((So.. uh.. when will we start, once this is fixed and all? Or.. later?)) |
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magma72
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| 23 Feb 2012 08:00 PM |
(Might as well start now)
Everybody
You sit down at your couch after a long day. Your tired, flipping through the channels, half asleep, when you hear something. The TV must have been flipped to the news station. They seem to be talking about some archeoligest trying to find some crystal orb. Your mark starts to burn. It never has done that before.... Weird. You ignore it and change the channel. |
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Oneiroi
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| 24 Feb 2012 11:06 AM |
| (It's starwarslego11, mag, I'm joining.) |
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Nanikaaru
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| 24 Feb 2012 03:24 PM |
Name: Celestic Amelia
@.ge (Over 21): 22
G.ender: Female
P.hysical A.ppearance: Her hair is dark brown, her eyes are a light blue, she's between skinny and fat, she's between pale and peach, her mark is on her stomach, and she's between short and tall (Around 6'0)
Clothing: Usually wears tight clothing that are usually dark-colors w/ thigh-high boots. She also wears a mid-thigh skirt that she can easily run in. She sometimes wears loose T-shirts, rarely, still dark colors. And she sometimes wears a hoodie, with a red zipper and most of it is dark grey.
Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.): (If it's not loading, then just wait a bit.) http://www.roblox.com/Celestics-Mark-item?id=73163388
Mark power (MUST be very small): Can summon little fire, but can passout if she summons a large amount of fire and keeps it summoned over a long period of time.
Personality: Understanding, respectful, clumsy, very friendly, out-going, and is very smart/clever.
Bio: When she was born, she was called "The Special one" since no one in her family tree has very light blue eyes. By then, everyone knew about her special powers that no one even believed in. When she was 21, she found out that she was one of the humans that had little power of the witchcraft way back then. She also found out that a mark suddenly appeared on her face, one day when looking into her room's mirror. She also found out that these humans that has supernatural powers has marks when they turn 21. Now her she swore that she's gonna find the other humans that has the same features as her, the marks on their faces and special non-human powers
Have you read the rules?: Nop.
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| 24 Feb 2012 03:36 PM |
| (Bookmarked until I get around to the CS. :L) |
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magma72
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| 26 Feb 2012 03:48 PM |
"her mark is on her stomach"
Nope, try again. |
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Nanikaaru
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| 26 Feb 2012 03:53 PM |
Name: Celestic Amelia
@.ge (Over 21): 22
G.ender: Female
P.hysical A.ppearance: Her hair is dark brown, her eyes are a light blue, she's between skinny and fat, she's between pale and peach, and she's between short and tall (Around 6'0).
Clothing: Usually wears tight clothing that are usually dark-colors w/ thigh-high boots. She also wears a mid-thigh skirt that she can easily run in. She sometimes wears loose T-shirts, rarely, still dark colors. And she sometimes wears a hoodie, with a red zipper and most of it is dark grey.
Mark (Links should be posted, but if you can't, just describe it.): (If it's not loading, then just wait a bit.) http://www.roblox.com/Celestics-Mark-item?id=73163388
Mark power (MUST be very small): Can summon little fire, but can passout if she summons a large amount of fire and keeps it summoned over a long period of time.
Personality: Understanding, respectful, clumsy, very friendly, out-going, and is very smart/clever.
Bio: When she was born, she was called "The Special one" since no one in her family tree has very light blue eyes. By then, everyone knew about her special powers that no one even believed in. When she was 21, she found out that she was one of the humans that had little power of the witchcraft way back then. She also found out that a mark suddenly appeared on her face, one day when looking into her room's mirror. She also found out that these humans that has supernatural powers has marks when they turn 21. Now her she swore that she's gonna find the other humans that has the same features as her, the marks on their faces and special non-human powers
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