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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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20 Feb 2012 03:23 PM
One idea I have is that there is an abandoned building (warehouse or something?) where something bad has occurred (mu.rder, arso.n, or etc.). People looking for a thrill often enter... and never come out. (It's your average haunted house/place).
What happens when you (your character) enters is that you become lost, wander around, and find a small, dark figure which appears to be a child (from height) standing in the hall about ten feet away. The "child" playfully giggles and says, "Chase me!" before darting into a random room. As soon as you enter the room behind them and look around, your vision turns red and you pass out.
When you finally come to, you wake up in a room similar to the one before, but... newer. It doesn't like it's in an old, (abandoned/burned down) building at all. It looks different. The "child" from before enters, and you can see her features clearly.
"Where am I?" you ask.
"My home," she says.
(tl;dr version: You go into an abandoned builing and find a little girl.)
What happened is this: you go into the building and the (ghost/memory) of the girl transports you to the past. She has some other "friends" in there with her. She's just a kid, or is she?

(What do you think? For reference, part of the idea is from the book Miss Peregrine's School for Peculiar Children. You, know, the past part.)
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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20 Feb 2012 03:37 PM
Good idea.
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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20 Feb 2012 04:01 PM
Does anyone have any ideas for it?
I'm thinking that "the girl", as I'll be referring to her now, is:
A: Demonically possessed. (She can bring people back to the past to torture.)
B: Someone with great psychic potential. (She suffered from much trau.ma growing up and unlocked her powers.)
C: An eldritch g.o.d/abomination (who is still "childlike", so he/she/it brings people to entertain her to a pocket universe).
The main idea is that something that looks like a little girl brings people from different times into a pocket dimension to "play", which most people don't like, and you have to get out/ solve her mystery with others' help.
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AnnaBanana1999 is not online. AnnaBanana1999
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20 Feb 2012 04:34 PM
I like it. But, I feel no ideas on the matter.
May I ask what the newer-place-thing actually IS?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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20 Feb 2012 04:39 PM
I'm leaning more towards A or C; do any of you have ideas? (Some of "the girl's" dialogue will be inspired by the song "Circle you, Circle you" and the dialogue of the Little Sisters in Bioshock.)
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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20 Feb 2012 04:43 PM
@Anna Banana:
The newer place is a pocket universe that includes the building itself (in a much better condition) and 20 feet of land around the place. You cannot leave, as going in one direction will only lead you back. The time of day changes, so night falls. You are sealed off from civilization (no cell phone reception or internet access).
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AnnaBanana1999 is not online. AnnaBanana1999
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20 Feb 2012 04:55 PM
Ah. I like it. I think A is a good idea, also. Anything else need work?

The girls name could be Miridia.
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magma72 is not online. magma72
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20 Feb 2012 05:07 PM
Would there be an arrangment of timed puzzles?
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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20 Feb 2012 06:07 PM
I like A and B but if you lean to A, A.
So, where will you be portalled and what era is it?
Medieval?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 09:35 AM
I was thinking of you being portalled back to the place when it was first built in the twentieth century, or even earlier.
(Also, is "Miridia" a word in another language or in a code? If so, what deos it mean?)
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 09:37 AM
Maybe to the early 18 or 1700s?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 09:41 AM
(*does)
I really don't know much about the 18 or 1700s at the moment, but I think I'll look it up.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 09:44 AM
I don't know much either, but the 1800s was an era of industry and...trains.
There were also Victorian houses and things like that.
Yeah, I don't know a whole lot...
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 09:52 AM
Wait- what country are we placing this in? Architecture (and fashion) almost always varies from country to country.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 10:06 AM
I'm not sure.
I was thinking European.
Japan would still be in Medieval times.
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1perrytheplatypus is not online. 1perrytheplatypus
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21 Feb 2012 10:07 AM
Hmm...
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 10:09 AM
England?
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 10:10 AM
Sounds good.
I actually made a ghost character kind of like this one once...who hasn't?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 10:15 AM
Yes... The late 1700s or 1800s? Perhaps late 1700s-early 1800s.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 10:17 AM
Late 1700s or early 1800s sounds good.
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 10:28 AM
I looked it up a little. Maybe "the girl" (or Miridia, perhaps) lived in a wealthy family until the house was burnt down and rebuilt, only to be burnt down many years later.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 11:01 AM
Actually, I made a ghost character much like her.
She recently moved into a beautiful mansion with her parents and little brother.
One day, she was exploring the house when she was on the spiral staircase admiring the chandelier.
However, the house was haunted before she came and an angry spirit pushed her over.
Her family was so sad they left and she took over the house.
Is this good?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 11:20 AM
It is good!
But maybe someone burnt it down, then people rebuilt it as "a historical house" (but she haunted it, so it was shut down). It was then abandoned.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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21 Feb 2012 11:25 AM
Who burned it?
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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21 Feb 2012 11:28 AM
Her family probably had a few enemies. One of them burnt the house down. (I never really thought about this.)
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