nqi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:06 PM |
After school today, I passed out at around 6:30 PM because I was exhausted.
Just a few minutes ago, I got awoken by a high pitched really loud noise. The first time I heard it, I had no idea what it was. I didn't know what time it was, and was too tired to care. I started to go back to sleep and 3 times in the next minute, I heard the noise again.
The high pitched, extremely loud noise was laughter. More specifically, the laughter of my mom's friend who apparently came over as I was sleeping to use her computer or something.
I decided, she will stop in a minute or two. I continued to lay down only with a few yards separating me and her. The aggravating, high pitched noise seemed to only take 5 second breaks to catch it's breath.
After I was forced to listen closer, I heard my mom and my sister wide awake, chatting away to our neighbor and being the real reason she is laughing.
I told my mom kind of quietly when she walked past my room that her friend was really loud. I can't remember exactly what she said, but she implied something about "It would be rude to tell her that she laughs loud enough so the neighbors can hear her."
After admitting defeat and some form of consciousness, I took out my laptop and decided to check what time it was. I was shocked when I saw it was 8:40 PM
I asked myself silently, "Did I sleep through the entire Saturday?". I put my mouse over the time and I was even more surprised when I learned it was still Friday, and I only got a little less than 3 hours of sleep before I was awoken by the high pitched, extremely loud noise, that has the inconsistency of laughter. |
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nqi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:07 PM |
| Insert this line to the end: And that is why I am now on ROBLOX. |
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mustyoshi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:08 PM |
I was waiting for a monster or something...
~Monica |
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KABLAMOW
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:08 PM |
| Good grammar, however the ending was quite boring. |
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Hatchets
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:10 PM |
| @ musty I thought you quit roblox. Wait till I tell the miners about this. |
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Hatchets
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nqi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:11 PM |
It isn't creative writing, it is a true story about how I got rudely woken up just now.
I don't care if it doesn't sound like an A+ piece of paper.
Be thankful I have grammar and kept myself awake to finish it. |
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Hatchets
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nqi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:17 PM |
| I feel so special now. >_> |
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mustyoshi
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:26 PM |
@nqi You should write a creepy pasta Basically keep the first five paragraphs, but then have it take a dark turn as you go investigate.
~Monica |
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| 17 Feb 2012 09:30 PM |
| I was really hoping you would yell at her be quiet |
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