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| 14 Feb 2012 05:52 PM |
All chapters will be posted on the following forum, thanks to KillerCorvette/Loonarion for inspiration! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1, Part 1/4
As James walked up the stairs to the terminal, he gripped his carbine tight. They couldn't afford to lose any defense, that was his thoughts. He wanted to this war be a smooth UAF win. He spotted Ramuqua hidden by the stairs up to the top. "Bunches of RATs camping up there...", Ramuqua told him. "We'll have to sit tight and wait for reinforcements I guess then.." James replied. James crouched beside Ramuqua and waited.
Reinforcements arrived shortly. A small number, but great fighters. There were STaTiic, Tntboy, dcrox, and colonel cheesey leading them. They were of the members who went by their wanted codenames. "We need to get the terminal back fast.. I have a bad feeling our time's almost out", Whispered Cheesey. "Alright.. heres a plan.. we all charge up and run to the roof and lead them up to us.", Suggested James. "Alright.. lets do this!" Said Tntboy. They all charged up to see about a dozen miniguns pointed at them. "Oh.. no.." STaTiic said softly. "Open fire men!" Shouted Admiral st0rmx.
Pretty short for a beginning. Basically it's about me doing stuff in the war. But it actually has a secret plot.. your'll see. I can take some critizizing, no flaming please. I'll make the next part longer since I'll have something to go by. Seems like a good stop here anyways! |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:54 PM |
I enjoy stories very much like these. Can i be in them?
-Dolphins |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:54 PM |
This ain't a book.
This is a chapter.
I've seen paragraphs longer than this man, come on. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:55 PM |
@Dolphin, Sure. Would you like to go by your username (Codename) or by a fake name? I can fit you into a next part as a main character. :3 |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:55 PM |
@Leo, your trolling. You have to be. If not, read the top. This is just the 1st part of the 1st chapter.
qq. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:57 PM |
Could I be in it (Ex-UAF 3iC)
_FA5 |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:57 PM |
Codename please.
If you read the part of my profile where it says something about UAF.
You can get some background info.
-Dolphins |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:59 PM |
Oh I didn't pay attention.
Fail on my part. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 05:59 PM |
@Fire, Codename or fake name?
@Dolphin. :3 |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:00 PM |
Alright, codename.
@Leo, it's okay. It happens a lot. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:01 PM |
This is a ROBLOX group.
not 1945.
-FIRE IS BACK |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:02 PM |
meto plz code name ash SS-VI |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:08 PM |
Chapter 1, Part 2.
"RUN!" James yelled. He and the rest of the members ran down the stairs, narrowly dodging bullets. "GAH! MY ARM!", Tntboy shouted in pain. STaT picked up tnt and threw him over his shoulder. They charged out the exit and they all got to safety. As a medic came over to patch up Tnt, a alarm sounded throughout the city. "ALL UAF AND RAT, THE ROBLOX ASSAULT TEAM HAS WON THE RAID. RAT, PLEASE TAKE A PICTURE AT THE TERMINAL AND EXIT THE CITY OR FACE DEATH!" The alarm said.
As they returned home by helicopter, they had glum looks on their faces. "Hey guys.. we did good.. we'll do it next time!" Cheesey said. James looked at his feet. He hated losing..he was ashamed of himself. As he was exited the helicopter to go to the bunk, an official came up to him. "James, your getting a cabin change, your with two soldiers called Dolphin, and FA5." Said the soldier's cabin official. James sighed and took his bags from two workers and set of to his new cabin. His new bunkmates were asleep and he fell back onto his bed. He hoped there was a raid tomorrow.. he wanted a win to cheer him up. Then James let himself fall into a deep sleep. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:50 PM |
| I want to be in it, my name will be LordPWNED (PWNED99TIMES) |
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| 14 Feb 2012 06:53 PM |
| You'll never get representative bro. C: |
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| 14 Feb 2012 08:26 PM |
Chapter 2, Part 3
James woke up to find his new bunkmates gone. He got up and got dressed and head to the cafeteria to find Dolphins sitting there, chatting with FA5. He walked over to the table and sat down with his food.
"So.. your my new bunkmates then?" James asked. They both nodded and continued eating. "Hey, by the way, were raiding RAT today. A little counter-raiding. I heard about the lost yesterday." Dolphin told James. James nodded solemny and continued to eat his Frosted Flakes.
When done with their food, all 3 went back to their bunk talked.
"This is FA5, he's a great soldier, aiming for preliators, as well as I. I'm Dolphins." Dolphins explained to James. "Well I guess we got something in common then!" James exclaimed. They all chuckled together. "My names James, James Frost." He told Dolphins. They shook hands. An alarm sounded just then. They locked and loaded their weapons and headed out for the benblue9 momument rally place.
"Listen my soldiers, no! Not soldiers, comrades. We are going to counter-invade RAT, and show them our TRUE power!" Colonel Cheesey shouted to the crowd of UAF soldiers. He was host of the raid. "We shall put a win on OUR scoreboard, tying the score one to one!" Cheesey exclaimed loudly. The crowd of UAF cheered, and Dolphins, FA5, and James clapped and shouted in cheer. It was time for their victory!
Authors note: Next part, and final part, will be all about the raid! |
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| 14 Feb 2012 08:27 PM |
HURR DURR, MISTAKE!
*Chapter 1, Part 3.
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| 14 Feb 2012 08:32 PM |
Flame.. Why would I flame stories!?! Anyway, could I be in it? I'm former SiC of UAF if that will help. |
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| 14 Feb 2012 08:34 PM |
I want to be in it, I want to die :3
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| 14 Feb 2012 08:46 PM |
Okay.
@Sloppy, I'll try and fit you in.. I'll make sure you get atleast 2 big parts...
@Det, I'll put you in 1 big part..
@Jk, Well maybe I can fit one more person with the 3 main characters.. |
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