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Torn7790
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| 13 Feb 2012 10:10 PM |
| I know next to nothing of halo, but I'll try my best...Can it be just CLOSE to halo, or does it have to BE Halo? |
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| 13 Feb 2012 10:13 PM |
| It can be close, or doesn't even have to be halo. I wan't the people's opinion, but I wan't it to stick with Sci-Fi. |
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Torn7790
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| 13 Feb 2012 10:35 PM |
Painful Friends
Earth, 2097. A strange alien race of insect like creatures came to Earth, offering gifts and knowledge. They had antenna, and clawed mouths. Their skin was crimson, and their eyes large and white. Their bodies were in three parts, like and ant, with arms on the upper two halves and legs on the bottom.For years we trusted them, gave them all we had. But they turned against us. We became so trusting of them, we believed them when they said it was an accident when their warships halted over Earth. How could we have been so stupid...
They fired upon Earth, destroying cities, turning people to dust. They sent down troopers. They stormed our homes, destroying our families, and captured those who cryed in the streets. They burned Earth into dust, heated it until only it's rocky minerals remained. Now they send us down to Earth to mine, and scavenge.
Earth,2154. I have brought together all the others, I have told them of our true history, for the aliens have taught them lies of our past. I am the only one left from the Before Time, when Earth was lush and green. I have invoked their anger, and now we take up arms. We broke into the restricted area, and stole back our people's long lost armor and weapons. I am Logan Harrington, ag.e 93, and I am the leader of the Rebellion, to take back Earth.
Join me, and we will win...
Is this good? |
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Torn7790
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| 13 Feb 2012 10:36 PM |
| You would not believ how long I have been trying to post that...finally realized ag.e needed the . ....It had been more descriptive before... |
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even1001
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