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Frostarian Story : Government uprising

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blobmista4 is not online. blobmista4
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13 Feb 2012 01:40 PM
---Setting---
Lying over large depths of mineral rich mountains sheeted with a wide depth of frost and fog, lies the Frostarian Capital city Orovich, surrounded by forged walls with mixtures of many dense elements to protect the city from outside projectiles, location of the city was proposed in relation to the atmospheric quantities of certain locations, a property of the element urixide found in the element in this area of land reacts with the fuels used in most air-type vehicles used, in retrospect this protects this city from the majority of aircrafts, to ensure no trespass seen necessary from the government concerning all connections to the inner and outer of the city, however lies the drawback of the rule of this government, taking position of umpire in the rule ladder is a recent dictator influenced man known only as Mr black, hidden like a silhouette amongst citizens. The strict regulations concerning outside contact have kept other neighbouring and friendly cities from word of this corrupt dictation, however, outcasts also play their part...... A small handful cast of rebellious citizens keep to what is now known as “the old way” with democracy riled beliefs intended for the purge of wrong doing in the government, Mr black obviously opposes of the outcasts for the intention of lowering the chances of being over-thrown, the majority of the community show signs that suggest they believe the black is intending to soon enlargen his military forces with over-expenditure on the promotion of hiring new recruits, seeing as no expenditure is put towards any other aspects like equipment or training, most of the extra unnecessary taxes would be put to waste.
It would seem a turn of overthrowing would be necessary...

LOG 1
A man draped in cloth rags lying over layers of highly battle worn armour gradually approached the large circular room where I sign above the doorway stated “Outcast Veteran Lounge”, on approaching he heard murmurs and whispers as he neared further he heard the retort of a man’s voice say “any news on the attack on the Blackback mountain outpost?” the armoured man hesitated then entered the room, it was filled with an eerie sense of comfort, and draped with architectural cubic patterns on the walls, included in this room were several tables and chairs, one from which four pairs of eyes glanced towards his direction.
A short stubble man burst out from the table. ‘Ah Arzhoa how are you, I hear your assignment was temporarily post-poned?’.The man who had entered the room replied ‘Yes Rixul, due to complications of a government official getting word of our intentions, we were going to be forwarded to an already proposed defence, nevertheless he obviously spread the word to his petty authority of his achievement.’ Rixul stared at him for a second then strode over to a nearby drinks cabinet, only for the atmosphere to switch to a women named Lirua, even if such mournful times she smiled and strode with a somewhat elegance towards the windows ‘That is unfortunate, what do you intend to proceed with next then may I ask?’ Arzhoa hesistated for a moment, then replied ‘Seeing as they will be weary of us evermore, we should lay off the current intention of infiltrating blackback, as much as “sources” say there is valuable information, I cannot see that it would go amiss to send us like pigs to a slaughter-house in a less than half chance of even receiving the information.’ With a seconds hesitation she turned to the final man at the far end of the table, whose face was covered in a black mask burned onto his face, with a bright white bandana hanging below it. ‘Yes, I am sure Anomous (assumingly named after the word anonymous) would agree with that’. The man supposedly known as Anomous turned towards Lirua and made his opinion clear with a simple agreeing nod. There was a short silence until Arzhoa suddenly said ‘Rixul do me a favour and fetch me a drink from the vending machine, its been a long day’ without even as much as a word he strode over to the machine, a few seconds later a curious look crept over his face ‘erm, I regret to say, but we appear to be out’ Arzhoa gave a heavy sigh ‘s’those damn brothel members again if you ask me, I’ve caught them in here twice already, regardless I haven’t had to stoop as low as to put them under consequences, nevertheless I see no reason to have them here, they speak of some tosh of what is sins which I have on several counts I have peered to find them guilty of themselves, nevertheless I’m not one to disagree with Riplifars’s decision’ Rixul gushed a slight pink in his cheeks and whimpered ‘ erm, you know how I’m quite the uninformed guy, but, who is this Riplifar bloke?’ Lirua laughed ‘I know your new and behind on this stuff Rixul, but he’s the one who overlooks us Outcasts, He may be nearing an old age, but blimey he has the wisdom and skills I’d only dream imagine of, not that everyone agrees with his decisions, but it can’t be denied his actions have often ended with the better outcome, what say you Arzhoa?’
‘Hmm, it is hard to portray Riplifar, but that is not currently of matter, Rixul, seeing as I have currently done my days deeds, I see it fit that you could do us the favour of somewhat finding us some new supplies.’ He picked up a glass then retorted ‘Well I am not exactly busy so I suppose it wouldn’t hu--’ the piercing sound of a bullet suddenly struck unexpectedly and smashed the glass Rixul was holding.¬

LOG 2
The only thing on Arzhoa’s mind right now was the condition of his members rather than his own sake, he sprinted with a surprising towards the direction ease seeing as he was wearing a considerably dense and ultimately heavy armour, while on a definite edge of discomfort he caught sight of a glimmering semi-opaque beam of light...much like that of a aiming assisted laser. It also happened to be on Rixul.
With only half a second to react he dived through the air and the events unravelling burst past in an everlasting blur, then an explosion of air burst out of him as he hit the ground and at the same instant was a piercingly loud crack, Arzhoa was quick to inspect the body laying in his arm. He praid his diving attempt at saving Rixul was successful, he looked at his arms towards Rixul, but the life signs made his hopes doubtful, and the expression on Lirua’s face expressions further did too, only to be confirmed by another second to observe, that Arzhoa was actually covered in scarlet blood.
--------- 1 Day later ---------

‘Arzhoa, we cannot stay here, I am sorry, but this is the second time we have encountered this happen to us here, it is obvious someone is after us, who of us, maybe all of us, I really don’t know, I know we all have that sinking feeling, even if Anomous is not desperate to express it’ Anamous Turned towards Lirua, his emotion not apparent as always, however there was a sense of intrigue, not on Lirua’s remark, more rather the inspection of where the bullet had hit, he seemed to be inspecting the angle more than anything.
‘Well, seeing as we cannot stay here for a durable time, not that we were making much use of it anyway, I am contacting Riplifar so that we may move out to Errift Gorge in three days, there is no purpose of us three being here, we only stay for three days so that we may stay for Rixuls burial and make a further inspection of the incident’. Lirua looked taken aback and blurted ‘Arzhoa, I know you may be on edge and have a rush of getting things done, but is that really necessary, the outcome we want is the best outcome, not the quickest and the quickest outcome doesn’t necessarily mean a good one, I could understand maybe relocating a few miles, but straight into a suspected source of the governments intentions?’ ‘Im sorry Lirua but it is already decided , besides, look at this place, its a total wreck and is completely exploited when we are not here. Goodness knows what could be spoilt of our intentions upon the lower ranks.’ Lirua looked stubborn, but took a second to calm and simply paused for words, after a great moment she spoke ‘Okay, admittedly it is not my decision here, we shall simply have to make do, I hear we are gaining two new members who have proved themselves, is this true?’ He gave a sigh at this. ‘It certainly is, only one of them pertains my recognition of respect though, I would probably call them “less suited” to our way of things, anyway, I must be going, there is much to sort on our leave, I advise you two do the business that is left for you here on these three last days.’

----- SIDE NOTE ----
Yeah, long read, I'm only about maybe 15-20% done on this I'd say, then I would like to tweak it, and I only really did this for fun, this probably isnt going to be read in one go while foruming so I'd probably refer to this link and read i another time IF you can be bothered, wont be blamed if you cant though, oh and it isnt split into paragraphs as it doesnt do that when pasted across from Microsoft word

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13 Feb 2012 01:45 PM
funny thing is its so long I doubt anyone will post a proper opinion on it(disregarding the length of it)
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13 Feb 2012 01:47 PM
Holy flub caiks.

REALLY good story.

Didnt really like the end, though :p
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13 Feb 2012 01:47 PM
damn, sent you a pm as I told you I would lol
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13 Feb 2012 01:50 PM
Lol.

Thanks.
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