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| 05 Feb 2012 05:31 PM |
(I will keep this whole story on one thread, to make it easier for trackers. So, additional chapters will be made in posts.)
Chapter 1: Part 1/3
"What is your name?" Ivan was hard at work. "Last chance." The leader was frightened, yet firm. "I will not tell you anything, you rodent!" Ivan gave a grin. "Rodent? I remember the X-101st soldiers calling me that same thing. That was over 100 years ago. I know how our enemies work. You are no different." The administrator frowned. He was unsure of what would happen next. "A little pain..." Ivan flipped the switch on the small noise amplifier he was hiding under the table. The high pitched ring started. The administrator cupped his hands over his ears and screamed.
Ivan kept a straight face. He had gotten used to it. "...and a little motivation." Ivan put an SP Magnum on the table. "All yours...that is, if you can get it..." The administrator kept screaming. He attempted to reach for the Pistol, but the pain was too much to take even a single hand off of his ears. "STOP! JUST STOP! I GIVE UP!" Ivan smiled. "Now, you are going to tell me some things..."
Meanwhile, in the City's Industrial district...
Coordinator Jak Risvari waited by his barricade. He was lost in thought. From what he heard, a platoon of Immortals had penetrated enemy lines and captured the last fragments of UAF's leadership. That was the kind of thing he always dreamed of. He knew, however, he was extremely far fetched. He wanted to be an Immortal, but he knew deep inside that he would never be one. He just did not have what it took.
Marshal Zaskoski walked up to his men. "WE GOT AN UNKNOWN VEHICLE A KLICK OUT AND IT IS MOVING FAST! GET YOUR MEN UP THERE, RISVARI!!" Jak leveled his Cyclone. "Of course sir. YOU HEARD THE MAN!" His troops did the same with their rifles. The Marshal took his Magnum off and walked to the barricade. "Alright, men. We have no idea who is driving the vehicle. Could be a civvie that did not get out in time. NO jumping the gun!" The soldiers let out a loud "YES SIR!"...
The van came racing towards the barricade. The troops held steady. About 10 yards away, the van came to a screeching stop. The door opened. Many fingers simultaneously slid to their Cyclone's triggers. Out stepped what looked like an RAA low rank. It did not make sense. A single RAA soldier? No squad? No weapon? Something was not right.
The Marshal put all that behind him. The clueless buffoon. "Put your hands behind your head and slowly approach the garrison." The soldier obliged, and did it. "Risvari, Besenti, Hern. Take him." Jak slowly took aim with his rifle and approached. Bisenti forced the soldier to the ground. Hern patted him down. Jak heard a strange beeping. "What is that?" The soldier remained motionless. Jak ripped his trench-coat off. A small screen rested there. It read "7". 6. 5. 4. 3. 2. "NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............." The screen hit 0. A huge explosion came from the van. That very instant, they where all vapor in the wind....
Part 2 out soon. -/(Killercorvette-14 day'd)\- |
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| 05 Feb 2012 05:58 PM |
Meanwhile, Legislature Center
Ivan was done. The CASEVAC birds took away all of the casualties. Evac choppers took the prisoners and everyone else, including the rest of the platoon. Just him and his squad, securing the actual building. His squad breached the whole center, room by room. No sign of anybody. They made their way to the basement. "Sir, you might want to see this..." The team's engineer, Alek Venskiena said. Ivan walked over. "Looks like some kind of bomb shelter. Might even be a fallout shelter. By these symbols, it looks older. 50 years in existence maybe. Anyone volunteer to g-" Ivan was cut short by his comms.
"Sir we may have a problem up here..." It was Chadd Doko, their squad's marksman. " I just saw a huge, I'm talking HUGE disturbance on the other side of the city. I do not know what just happened, but-" The comm cut off. A very vivid rumbling occurred from the earth. "Earthquake?" Vmera asked. At that moment, Doko came barreling down the steps, his scouter, hanging by his strap, hitting the wall many times. "BOMB! FREAKIN' BOMB!" Ivan reacted very quickly. "OPEN THOSE DOORS VENSKIENA!" Alek thought very far ahead. "Already done, sir!" Ivan always liked Alek. "COME ON! GET IN THERE!" The entire squad sprinted through the bolted door. Within seconds, the building was just a pile of rubble...
Part 3 coming soon.
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| 05 Feb 2012 06:10 PM |
Be sure to read these first! http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=62321737 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=62433916
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| 06 Feb 2012 04:57 PM |
My stories never get as popular as anybody else's. :(
PLZ READ!1111
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| 06 Feb 2012 05:03 PM |
| You know I was X-101st and I'm currently RAT....Why does everyone hate on X-101ST? |
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| 06 Feb 2012 05:04 PM |
@Lord
I was in it as a secondary clan whenever nathan owned it.
The character was just recalling his experiences in the RAT-X-101st war...
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| 06 Feb 2012 05:51 PM |
@Gamer
What?
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| 06 Feb 2012 08:36 PM |
Part 3 coming soon!
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| 06 Feb 2012 09:32 PM |
Part 3:
Sparrow Corp crash site, 1 klick away from the Legislature offices. 10 Minutes after detonation.
Admiral Heide Frinnchk opened her eyes. She was alive. She was a bit in pain from the crash, but she did not think she was injured too bad. Her vision re-focused. She surveyed the area around here. She was still in what was left of the SC chopper, but she was facing the hatch.
From outside, what she saw made her shiver. Dozens of bodies. All RAT. She noticed a crawling figure. That one was still alive. She tried to yell, but she was too weak at the moment. She also saw another body squirm. This was closer to the hatch. She tried to crawl to him, but she quickly retracted.
She saw a black figure balance itself on what was left of a roadway. He saw something on the other side of the road. He raised an SMG and emptied half the mag into it. He jumped off, into the area he just shot in. She flinched as she saw two more of the figures come to the area of her crash site. One of them noticed the crawling RAT soldier. He fired his SMG into him, killing him instantly. That figure stepped in that direction to search for more. The other one came in her direction. It was dark out, so he switched his Tac Light on.
The illumination from it showed his body. It was an RAA Hazop, with what looked like chemical survival gear on. He shined it on the survivor. He put his hands up, but the RAA trooper just chuckled and fired a burst into the man. The trooper proceeded to the actual helicopter. Heide hid behind the wall next to the hatch. This gave her an inside view of the heli. She saw Mendo, her Sparrow Corp bodyguard, impaled on what looked like an iron pipe. The chopper's pilot was covered in blood, and his entire body was through the windshield. The gunner was also covered in blood, but he was still breathing.
The RAA soldier stepped inside, gave Mendo a hard kick, decided he was dead, than proceeded to the cockpit. He jabbed the pilot with his SMG barrel. He turned his view to the gunner. She closed her eyes. She did not want to see this. All she heard was "p-plea-*cough*-please! no! do-Bam!" The trooper emptied a single round into the Gunner's head. She opened her eyes for just a second, so she could prepare for her encounter with the barbarian.
As soon as she did though, the RAA trooper screamed. A fast moving figure stormed the helicopter. She man grabbed the trooper, took his Pistol, and aimed it outside. She could hear the boots of the other trooper coming. The man took the pistol, put it behind the trooper's neck, and fired. The bullet killed the trooper, and impacted on the other one. The man threw the RAA pistol aside and pulled out an SP Flight from his trenchcoat. After coming within range of the dead trooper's Tac light, she saw his face.
"Admiral Raven" she noted. She was still "Admiral Frinnchk" he replied. He offered her his hand. After she was up, he picked up the SMG and forced it into her hands. "Hey Yursei! What is taking you!" she popped her head out of the hatch and saw Raven's SC bodyguard. He took the SMG from the other dead trooper and said "Ready." Raven gripped his Flight hard. "Listen Hiede, RAA has taken the privilege of killing any survivor they can find. If we can find any UAF, they might be a bit more merciful. If we cannot find a way out of here, we either go down fighting these RAA animals, or throw ourselves down to any UAF squad we see." Raven was a former foot-soldier, so he had an idea of what he was saying.
She tested herself. She was still hurting bad, but atleast she could move. They jumped out of the helicopter, and went on the move.
Chapter 2 out soon!
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| 07 Feb 2012 07:12 AM |
The man grabbed*
typo ftw
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| 07 Feb 2012 03:19 PM |
READ PLZZ
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| 07 Feb 2012 06:11 PM |
Chapter 2 coming out shortly!
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| 07 Feb 2012 06:20 PM |
Remove "She was still "Admiral Frinnchck".
typo ftw
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| 07 Feb 2012 06:27 PM |
@Tennis
Thanks!
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| 07 Feb 2012 10:30 PM |
Chapter 2: Part 1/4
Legislature Office fallout shelter, Immediately after detonation.
Ivan caught his breath. He was getting too old for this. He looked up to check his squad. Yvormin was leaning on a wall, resting her head on the butt of her Cyclone. Vmera sat down on a crate, unstrapped his suppressor, and leaned it on the wall. Doko collapsed and let his Scouter hit the ground. Ivan was worried at first, but realized it was just exhaustion and nothing serious. Glacktovic and Venskiena where busy inspecting the shelter. Hwitsz was checking everybody for wounds. Rrainsy was standing in a corner. Little was known about the team's operator. Nobody had heard him (or her. They could not even figure out his gender!) speak. They had never seen his face. He always wore so much armor that they could not check his body's form to hint at his gender.
It was not the mystery. His personality is why Ivan hated him. He had executed countless enemies. Many of which could not fight back. He would never help out a comrade. He showed no mercy. He was not human. He was an animal. Most of the squad distanced themselves from him whenever they could. Why he had to deal with this monster, Ivan never knew.
"HEY! I found something!" Glacktovic shouted. Ivan walked over. A small hatch was located near the supply room. It read "EMERGENCY TUNNEL ACCESS". "Alek, what does your Geiger counter read outside the door? "Too much radiation sir." Venskiena said. Ivan made his decision. "Alright men. We are miles away from RAT's encampment. Assuming that nuke did not blow it to hell, we have to get there. This hatch leads somewhere. I know for a fact, somewhere is a whole lot better than here. Lets move!" Glacktovic pried the hatch open with his Cyclone butt. They jumped down, into the darkness of the tunnel.
Part 2 out soon.
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