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Re: A Somewhat Fictional Story of a Soldier.

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Camdis21 is not online. Camdis21
Joined: 28 May 2011
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05 Feb 2012 03:19 PM

A young soldier born on the plains of Vaktovia hadnt been like the other VAKS. He was strong like them, but he didnt want war, he wanted peace. When he became 18 he escaped the siege of VAK when Frost Clan had attacked. Two snipers almost got him but he leaped toward cover. A killed VAK soldier had a M14 ACOG GL dropped, and he took it. When he was walking towards the gate to the Air Force bunker with a helicopter to escape in, a airstrike had knocked him senseless.

He had awoken in a helicopter with a soldier looking at him. He wasnt VAK, nor Frost Clan. He had a sign that said TRFE on it. He was putting pressure on my wound, not letting the soldier die. "You alright soldier?" The mystery man asked. Stunned, he looked at him, "Where am I...? Who are you?" He asked. "Well. I'm Colonel Brigadier General Ahead007. Your in the TRFE Pavelow, we're heading to HQ. Only reason your here is because you were still beating after Frost Clans airstrike." He said politely. "Are you going to take my prisoner?" I said confused. "Ha. No. TRFE stands for THE ROBLOX FREEDOM ENFORCERS. we are a organization to fight off evil and bring peace to ROBLOXia."

"So, whats your name?" Ahead asked. "Camdis." he replied. As the Pavelow landed I stared at my new commander, Alexrocksdude. "Hello there!" Alex said. "I'm Alexrocksdude. I lead T.R.F.E, I see you met Ahead! Now, We're sorry we brought you here if you didnt want to help, but I ask you, in our deepest concern, could you help us against the evil forces?" Alex said. "Yes. Peace is the only thing I care about."

"Glad your on board. Get to the training grounds, Recruit!" He said, Camdis saluted as he ran towards the training grounds. A general stood towards him. "Hello! I'm Awesomecoollegoman. Here we will test your skills in arms, knifing and getting your way in and out of trouble." he said. Camdis watched closely as Awesome took a futuristic MP5 and shot at the test dummies. Camdis soon picked it up and shot, 20 headshots and 10 chest shots. He then tried his knife and knife the dummies easily. Now, it was Air Force training.

With the buzzing of jets flying across the sky at the AC-130 tasking base, Camdis jumped in a Apache helicopter. He grabbed the wheel and flew like a pro. he shot down 5 dummy AI practice jets. He was now a full fleged Seargent.

At a TRFE meeting in the Recruition Centre Alex said that we were now at war with Neblous Empire. One foggy night Camdis awoken to a explosion. The comms tower was destroyed. He saw 10 squads of Neblous Empire come out of no where. Camdis ran towards the alarm tower. The fight was now on. "Move, move move!" Alex yelled as he shot at the Neblous Empire squads. A apache helicopter was firing at the TRFE soldiers. Camdis grabbed a Strela-3 and blew it up. As dawn broke through the darkness of night, the Neblous Empire squads had retreated into the shadows. For now.

On the final day of the war, Camdis was sent in to set a charge on their nuclear bomb they were going to use against TRFE. Camdis had taken a Neblous Empire uniform to be stealthy. He went to the Nuclear Warhead room in the HQ, in Outpost Xellous. The charge was set. The stealth-cover had been blown. Camdis had called in backup the minute he placed the charge. 5 minutes for transport to arrive.

3 minutes had gone by, and Camdis started to worry. Then, a huge squad of armed Pavelows came in. Camdis had to grappel. He fired a grappling hook and shot at the Neblous Empire troopers. He had escaped and the minute he did.... BOOM.

No one really knew who won the war. Not even I do. We declared that NO ONE won the war. THE END.
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ahead007 is not online. ahead007
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06 Feb 2012 06:44 PM
Nice.
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CapRex213 is not online. CapRex213
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06 Feb 2012 06:45 PM
>Implies VAK uses M14s
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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
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06 Feb 2012 07:03 PM
What do you mean somewhat...?
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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
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06 Feb 2012 07:05 PM
Well written though. Good general idea.
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crazyweirdo2000 is not online. crazyweirdo2000
Joined: 16 Nov 2010
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06 Feb 2012 07:08 PM
Make a book with one chapter per post and put posters in the story, I vollenteer to be in it...
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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
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06 Feb 2012 07:18 PM
I could be in it. I hunt VAKs and other good fighters for sport.
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Camdis21 is not online. Camdis21
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07 Feb 2012 06:00 PM
Okay! Ill put a list of people in it! Ill call the forum book: The Uprising
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Alexrocksdude is not online. Alexrocksdude
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07 Feb 2012 06:03 PM
I love it! It's an amazing story! I want to see another chapter!

-Alex
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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
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07 Feb 2012 06:25 PM
Cool. PM me for info on my character.
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awesomecoollegoman is not online. awesomecoollegoman
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07 Feb 2012 07:19 PM
Wow, you have great grammar skills and that was a great story, I really enjoyed it.

I guess you could call this...

* Puts on Sunglasses *

CardioVAKular Rush

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Ken10Ethan is not online. Ken10Ethan
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07 Feb 2012 07:40 PM
That was a good joke for a change!
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Starluna is not online. Starluna
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07 Feb 2012 07:43 PM
Wow, a person with a good story, refined grammar, and something slightly resembling Shutter Island.

I have hope for RP.
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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
Joined: 30 Apr 2011
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08 Feb 2012 06:43 AM
@Awesome You, my friend, are one of the few people on roblox who think they are funny, and actually are.


"I don't trust soups on the whole, no more than I trust stews."-me

"Oh my god the humidifier commited suicide!"-me

"A senses taker once tried to test me. I ate his liver with some fava beans and a nice candy."-Dr. hannibal lector (Silence of the lambs)
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XDin15half is not online. XDin15half
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08 Feb 2012 02:59 PM
Kewl.

-Completely
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Louisianadood is not online. Louisianadood
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08 Feb 2012 03:14 PM
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Camdis21 is not online. Camdis21
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08 Feb 2012 03:57 PM
Nothing nice to say? Dont say it at all.
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hdog78 is not online. hdog78
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09 Feb 2012 02:33 PM
nice in the next story can i be in it?
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clonetrooper300 is not online. clonetrooper300
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09 Feb 2012 03:05 PM
I agree with Louisiana, this belongs in C&G...Since this is related to groups, GO to C&G, ROleplay accepts stories...But not group stories...SO good-bye, and btw, don't Hate on VAK, Hatin' ain't good
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Camdis21 is not online. Camdis21
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09 Feb 2012 05:25 PM
Maybe you should read: FICTIONALLLLLLL. I wasnt in VAK, and I dont care what their weapons are.
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Louisianadood is not online. Louisianadood
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10 Feb 2012 04:33 PM
You shot yourself in the foot by saying somewhat. Which means not all aspects. Not my fault.
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Camdis21 is not online. Camdis21
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11 Feb 2012 11:32 AM
I shot myself in the foot?
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gwebster2 is not online. gwebster2
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11 Feb 2012 11:54 AM
its a....


CRYPTIC METAPHOR.



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kingdestroyah is not online. kingdestroyah
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11 Feb 2012 07:07 PM
By somewhat, he probably means that the true part is his position in T.R.F.E.
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clonetrooper300 is not online. clonetrooper300
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12 Feb 2012 06:39 AM
They still belong in C&G =/ And again, Don't hate it isn't good for you
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