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Re: How does this sound for a RAT story....

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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:09 PM
RAT has invaded UAF's home planet in the last days of the war.

RAT has just captured the Capitol city. However, RAA has unorthodox plans to keep it out of RAT's hands....

After RAA detonates a nuclear warhead inside a city, against UAF's wishes. This kills most of the RAT and UAF combatants inside the city. After it is clear RAT has lost, what remains of the city goes right back into the hands of UAF and RAA.

However, one squad of Immortals, lead by 250 year old Ivan Naeklovich, has survived the explosion by hiding out in the UAF Legislature building's fallout shelter.

The story focuses on their struggle to escape, but more importantly, survive...

What do you think?


-/(TDFall called me a sheep)\-
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:10 PM
Remove the "After" in sentence 3.

typo ftw

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shadowsword is not online. shadowsword
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02 Feb 2012 12:11 PM
our planet is earth.

~ shads
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:12 PM
@Shadow

See, I did not know.

Thank you for pointing that out...

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Evildestroyer2 is not online. Evildestroyer2
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02 Feb 2012 12:13 PM
Usually I'd be against a story like this, but since it's a struggle to survive, and not a story to hunt every last one of us down, sure, as long as:

1. I'm in it (derp)

2. There are some UAF soldiers in it who are wounded from the explosion, do what you will with them

3. The Nuclear Fallout is still present in the story.

If it has that, except 1, I will approve! ;3
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Adrocal is not online. Adrocal
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02 Feb 2012 12:13 PM
"lead by 250 year old Ivan Naeklovich"

"WE LIKE TO PRETEND HE IS STILL ALIVE"

~dont be stupid be a smarty, come and join the vakkie party
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Evildestroyer2 is not online. Evildestroyer2
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02 Feb 2012 12:15 PM
Adrocal, if you recall, most RAT, when they get old, get a sword cane, which 'apparently' makes them immortal.
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:15 PM
@Adrocal

Frostarian Health care + Experimental nano-aging= ya

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Evildestroyer2 is not online. Evildestroyer2
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02 Feb 2012 12:17 PM
@killercrovette

+Sword Cane. Add that to the equation!
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Adrocal is not online. Adrocal
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02 Feb 2012 12:17 PM
gl getting past the grox

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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:18 PM
@evil

I hate stories like that too. I prefer stories with more meaning than just "KIL KIL KIL!1"...

The wounded UAF may not make a big appearance, as UAF took back the city. But I will include an encounter with some...

Nuclear fallout is big in the story.

Be sure to track this thread, as I will post the story threads IF I decide to create them!


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Evildestroyer2 is not online. Evildestroyer2
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02 Feb 2012 12:19 PM
Okay, Evil approves. :D
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Adrocal is not online. Adrocal
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02 Feb 2012 12:23 PM
needs more vak

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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:25 PM
@Adro

I tried to create a RAT-VAK story similar to this during our war.

It did not turn out too good...

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Adrocal is not online. Adrocal
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02 Feb 2012 12:25 PM
vak

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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:26 PM
Writing the introduction now.

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XNoBoomX is not online. XNoBoomX
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02 Feb 2012 12:31 PM
RAT's home planet is Frostaria, right?

~Fo Dah' Wimminz!~
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squidboi2 is not online. squidboi2
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02 Feb 2012 12:34 PM
SOUNDS KINDA LIKE KILLZONE.

BECAUSE IT IS KILLZONE.
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:36 PM
@XNBX

Yes.

@Squid

If it is any consolation, I have never played Killzone. I do not even own a Sony gaming system...

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squidboi2 is not online. squidboi2
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02 Feb 2012 12:37 PM
A LIKELY STORY.
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:39 PM
@Squid

IKR?

Sony sucks. They wish they could be Microsoft...

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squidboi2 is not online. squidboi2
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02 Feb 2012 12:40 PM
I HAVE BOTH AN XBOX360, AND A PS3.

LOOK AT THE ENDING OF KILLZONE 2/INTRO TO KILLZONE 3 AND TELL ME IT ISN'T CLOSE TO THE SAME.
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DragonOfTime is not online. DragonOfTime
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02 Feb 2012 12:47 PM
so is VS involved in this story

is the group forced to call on a small group of VS soldiers to help them

cough cough
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mastercheifcarbine35 is not online. mastercheifcarbine35
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02 Feb 2012 12:51 PM
It isn't close to the same.
I have both games. And I prefer Xbox to PlayStation.

Sony sucks. Sony TVs, Sony PCs, Sony Gaming consoles...
They all suck.
RAT Conscript is meeeehhhhh.
~Telamon only likes BAKED chicken, as it is much healthier.
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killercorvette is not online. killercorvette
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02 Feb 2012 12:52 PM
@Squid

Surprisingly, it is pretty similar.

But there are SOME key differences....

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