chillybut
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:18 PM |
I'm Zachary Davis, I'm 17 and just escaped the city before they could drop the bomb. As of now, I'm walking through the isolated desert and lost. I have no idea where I'm going, but I hope I run into something useful soon. It is the year 2045 and tensions between countries couldn't be greater, a war could spark at any moment. In 2016, Russia went back to their old ways of communism, and they plan to invade countries with their military might. They have invaded many countries like the United Kingdom, Australia, and Germany so far. Their influence over the world is greater, than anything I've ever seen. Now back to me, I'm walking, deprived of water and food, sweat falls unto my brow as the summer sun beams on my back. My legs tread on the ground, and I just keep walking.
To be continued..... (Ran out of ideas) |
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xGabbyx
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:20 PM |
NIce
~ Blame the poptart. >.> ~ |
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:20 PM |
No ponies? No thanks.
~I'd like to be a tree. ^‿^ -Fluttershy ♥ |
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:20 PM |
yay
time to celebrate the OP's writers block |
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chillybut
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:35 PM |
It is the year 2045 and tensions between countries couldn't be greater, a war could spark at any moment. In 2016, Russia went back to their old ways of communism, and they plan to invade countries with their military might. They have invaded many countries like the United Kingdom, Australia, and Germany so far. Their influence over the world is greater, than anything I've ever seen. I'm Zachary Davis, I'm 17 and just escaped the city before they could drop the bomb. As of now, I'm walking through the isolated desert and lost, with my long, brown hair getting in the way of my eyes. I have no idea where I'm going, but I hope I run into something useful soon. I'm walking, deprived of water and food, sweat falls unto my brow as the summer sun beams on my back. My legs tread on the ground, and I just keep walking. Suddenly, out of the corner of my eyes I see a pond. I rush over and look down, I plunge my face deep as it can go, drinking the water. I grab the backpack on my shoulder and open it. I take out a canister and dip it into the pond, filling it up. I put back on the lid and stick it in my backpack, I stand up and continue walking. I look down at my feet and I see multiple lizards crawling on the ground, I take a stone nearby and bash one at the tail. I pick it up and put it in the backpack. The sun is starting to go down, I believe it's about 6:00 PM now. About a mile away, I see a cave. I walk towards the cave before the moon rises. I make it to the cave and prepare to sleep. I take out a sleeping bag from the backpack and I unfold it. I lay down in it and close my eyes. I am awaken by a large bang outside, I get up and look outside to find a small explosion far away, they released the bomb. I hurry up in fear that they will move their army out into the desert. I rush and start running as I see helicopters filling the sky, far away. I start running noticing that the moon is just setting.
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:38 PM |
read the first post it was terrible and nonsensical
Bow ties are cool |
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:39 PM |
| NAH I'LL GO BACK TO READING STEPHEN KING |
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:44 PM |
| That was totally horrible. |
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chillybut
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:47 PM |
| Hehe, my friend wanted wrote this, because he just made an account and didn't want to wait one day. -_- |
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chillybut
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:48 PM |
| Hehe, my friend wrote this, because he just made an account and didn't want to wait one day. -_- |
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:48 PM |
Tell him that his book is bad and that he should feel bad.
And that he should сommit suiсide. |
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chillybut
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:51 PM |
you're a bad friend for letting him post this tripe
Bow ties are cool |
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lion9031
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| 29 Jan 2012 03:55 PM |
| how come all stories people post are in a post apocalyptic future |
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