swany2
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| 27 Jan 2012 11:57 PM |
This is the beginning of a Chapter series.
Chapter 1: The Unknown
___________________________________________________________________________ Year: 2123 Location: The Cascade: In Maracus's Orbit.
At the end of the 22nd Century, Robloxia had been ravenged, pollution, wars,
and other human effects had trashed Robloxia. The United Robloxia
Government decided it was time to pioneer and find a new planet to begin to
colonize, for years they searched, then after several years of searching they
discovered Maracus. The planet seemed to be the right temperature for the
Robloxians, although no water or air, it was a good start. Right away The
United Robloxia Government begain prepairing a colony ship to colonize.
Plants, water, animals, people, and other supplies were loaded after the 10
year construction of The Cascade. The ship was grand, although it only held 20
crew due to the need for room of supplies, its goal was to make Maracus a
liveable planet. They then started out on there 5 year journey to the planet.
They reached there destination right on schedule and the crew was waken from
there deep slumber in their time capsules. It was supposed to be easy, get in
set up a control center and some surrounding domes, for oxygen. Except they
completely underestimated what was to come.
"Private Andrews," screamed Major Williams. "Yes Sir?" he responded. "We
need you and Moss to take descend to the Maracus for routine
examination." "Of Course Sir," resonded Andrews. Moss and Andrews entered
there shuttle and descended to the depths of Maracus. They talked little
knowing that they would be the first on their future planet. They got off into an
erie foggy marshed planet. They walked, several miles exaiming the terrain.
Nothing unusual it seemed just as HQ suggested. They headed back and Moss
went into the shuttle to radio HQ the condition of the planet. All of the sudden
a rumble, Moss went outside and screamed "What the crap are you doing
Andrews?" Andrews wasn't there. "Andrews enough with trying to scare me." He
walked around the side and there on the wing lay Andrews, or what was left of
him, from the Torso up was gone. Moss jumped back screaming and ran into
the radio booth on the shuttle. He shouted into the radio "ANDREWS IS DEAD
SOMETHING GOT HIM".
The radio reciever sat in the brigg and heard andrews message. "What is your
situation the reciever asked". "What the H*ll do you think it is!" Then the radio
man heard Moss say, "Wait I hear something, ......... What THE!" Then the
radio went dead.
Commander Swany sat in his Office dreaming about the glory this mission
would give him. He sat drinking a cup of coffee, and his favorite edition of The
Robloxian Special Operatives Magazine. General Brayden ran into the room
and brought a recording in his hand. "Sir we have a problem" After listening
Swany went on the intercom and said, Gentlemen we have lost contact with out
ground scouts, we are on Code Red Phase 1 as from now, I need Squad Alpha
to ready up, we are descending to Maracus. ___________________________________________________________________________
To be continued.... |
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| 28 Jan 2012 12:01 AM |
| I read the first sentence, which included both a grammatical and spelling error, and just gave up. |
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swany2
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| 28 Jan 2012 12:02 AM |
| ^ Quiter :P and the thing that I don't think is very polite is attempting to insult one's work. |
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| 28 Jan 2012 12:12 AM |
| I'm sorry, but I looked at your complaint, which ironically had another spelling error and another grammatical mistake, and I loled. XD |
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swany2
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| 28 Jan 2012 11:37 AM |
| ^I Lol'ed when I saw your profile. Also this isn't English class. |
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Colbalt13
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| 28 Jan 2012 12:12 PM |
| I LOL'ed at the comments, but good story, although RSO's magazines doesnt sound quite popular. :p |
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