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lordneo is not online. lordneo
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20 Jan 2012 05:07 PM
Teacher: We're doing narrative stories! Make a gripping opening!

-10 minutes later-

Time's up! [MYNAMEHERE], Please tell us yours?

Me: Miss, I don't want to...

Teacher: DO IT.

Me: "This must be it." I muttered as I folded up my map. I had traveled the world for these artifacts, and by god, I shall find them. I check the ruinous, vine-ridden doors of the crypt. No secret buttons. The door's lever was broken by weathering and age, but I managed to get it. The crypt's doors crumbled open. The stench of rotting corpses whafted from the door. I tried to hold in my wretching as I walked in, readying my sword.

Teacher: THAT'S DESCRPTIVE.

-Everyone giving me an odd look-
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lordneo is not online. lordneo
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20 Jan 2012 05:11 PM
At least I put effort into it.
¬_¬
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koopaNGC is not online. koopaNGC
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20 Jan 2012 05:15 PM
I liked it.
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masterx is not online. masterx
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20 Jan 2012 05:17 PM
nice
except for the part that the corpses smelled
if the crypt was crumbling, the corpses would be skeletons, if not horribly decayed skeletons
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lordneo is not online. lordneo
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20 Jan 2012 05:18 PM
@Master

I don't think they had air ventilation back then.
The stench would have stayed in.
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masterx is not online. masterx
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20 Jan 2012 05:20 PM
hmm
i think the miasma would eventually go away unless the room was airtight
but the air would be incredibly stale
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lion9031 is not online. lion9031
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20 Jan 2012 05:21 PM
>Narritive

obvious elementary student is obvious
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lordneo is not online. lordneo
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20 Jan 2012 05:22 PM
@Lion

College.
I believe that is High school for you americans.
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lion9031 is not online. lion9031
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20 Jan 2012 05:22 PM
Narrative*
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masterx is not online. masterx
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20 Jan 2012 05:23 PM
what is english (guessing) college, if 'college' is the equivalent of high school
and it's good to review
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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20 Jan 2012 05:24 PM
once in english i had to comment on the symbolism of rap

it was the worst class ever especially because it cant symbolize what it actually said

and then we had to see the music video of it and then teacher was like "you all were wrong it actually was what it said"
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Tranquilsprings is not online. Tranquilsprings
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20 Jan 2012 05:24 PM
no me gusta Inglés
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masterx is not online. masterx
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20 Jan 2012 05:27 PM
@boeing717

that is amazing

this year i did a report on linus torvalds
everyone started freaking out when i said he was a hacker
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lordneo is not online. lordneo
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20 Jan 2012 05:28 PM
We're studying how a good narrative can really grip a reader.

Basically it's advanced work I did before

But I'm Year/Grade 10. HOW IS THIS POSSIBRU.
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