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| 15 Jan 2012 11:09 AM |
A demonstration of how present-day ROBLOXians are polite. On my channel, ROBLOXbunnybun. |
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| 16 Jan 2012 09:11 AM |
| I would like some feedback. |
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LunicDawn
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| 16 Jan 2012 07:06 PM |
| Um, exactly how would this work? We talk about the hallway? >_< |
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balone123
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| 17 Jan 2012 05:04 PM |
| You obviously came up with this idea in like, one minute. Because it has no good formula to it. |
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tallpie
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| 17 Jan 2012 08:50 PM |
| do you know videos dont take 5 minutes they take days weeks months... |
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| 17 Jan 2012 09:57 PM |
The idea popped into my brain in five minutes. The video took about half a week.
MONTHS? o_o" |
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tallpie
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balone123
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| 18 Jan 2012 07:03 AM |
| I saw it. It's good, BUT. You want to make sure that the cahracter doesn't pass through the camera man, or where you're positioned. It'll make it look tacky. |
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| 18 Jan 2012 04:40 PM |
| Tried my best on that, but the magnitude of the camera kept resetting itself, and there was no escaping it. |
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| 22 Jan 2012 10:20 AM |
| The camera usually does that when the magnitude of the Camera, and the Focus of the camera, are far apart, but it wouldn't let me zoom in to fix that. |
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Koprio
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| 22 Jan 2012 11:34 AM |
That was actually one of the better videos presented on ROBLOXiwood lately -- considering that standards have fatally dropped in the past few months from what I've seen.
I have only a few suggestions. You don't have to take them, I just, as a new critic, like to express my own opinion about other's projects. First off I liked the music. Added to the grey hallway, mysterious figure hallway concept. I like how the camera would sometimes be fidgety when the character got closer to the camera, added a nice effect. My first problem though was the drumroll. I don't know if it's just me or my earphones, but when it got near the end of it, it sort of hurt my ears to listen? I liked, though, how you quickly moved back into the music and continued on with the video. My second problem arose quickly afterward though -- when they start running at eachother, the brown-haired character doesn't move his legs.. he sort of skates across the floor towards the Dominus character. I know, small hiccup, but I notice a lot when I'm watching videos. The final problem I had was another one with the audio where I had to actually just click away because my ears hurt from the sound. When the Dominus character starts screaming on the floor incessantly, it hurt my ears quite literally. I'm not trying to be extremely technical here but maybe make longer pauses between something with that sound or magnitude of volume to not turn off the viewer immediately? Anyways, good video.
OVERALL: I thought it was a very good video. Nice framing, fidgeting of the camera, and music/sound FX. Although some of the sounds were hiccuped or a character may not have moved his limbs, I don't think I can deny this wasn't one of the higher-tiered videos we've had in the past two or three weeks.
I give it a 9/10. Good work! :D |
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| 22 Jan 2012 04:40 PM |
| Uh, well, he wasn't supposed to move his legs, I could've put in an animation script. And sound FX were not a problem to my ears. |
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zuorthon
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| 22 Jan 2012 08:31 PM |
| No one takes days for a video idea. the longest time is probably 5 minutes, then everything else is established into it. |
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tallpie
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| 22 Jan 2012 10:49 PM |
As i said...
My Bad...
~Think Before YOu Post I'm Talking In Caps Why? |
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tallpie
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| 23 Jan 2012 02:52 AM |
It was wasnt it :D
Check out mah channel RadioActiveBroadcAst |
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