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Re: The Festival Of Petals

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tehllama3721 is not online. tehllama3721
Joined: 14 Apr 2011
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15 Jan 2012 02:22 PM
(( Give Feedback I wont continue this if you don't ))
June 15th, 5 days till the Festival of The Flying Petal, and Isabella is preparing for one of the biggest days in her life. In the small village of Tör, is preparing for the festivities that will soon amount. As for Isabella, she is shopping at the market.
''Purple or Red?" I say as I hold the dresses up.
"Bella, it's your choice just pick one." Aaron responds.
"But..." I mumble, "This is a big event! The Anointment of the Petals is an event that only happens to a girl once!"
"Bella... fine I choose the purple one." Aaron groans.
"Ok then, red it is!" I say humorously as I throw the purple dress at Aaron and run away
"Hey!" he says as he pulls the dress out of his face, "Come back!"
"Catch me if you can!' I giggle back.
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pmcdonough is not online. pmcdonough
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15 Jan 2012 05:42 PM
try doing it in past tence not present tense all good books (if you read most books) youll see they are in past tence
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whitesparky is online. whitesparky
Joined: 26 Feb 2011
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15 Jan 2012 07:49 PM
Its fine so far
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X0Hannah0X is not online. X0Hannah0X
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09 Jan 2013 08:29 PM
Good job
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