nick642
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| 12 Jan 2012 04:59 PM |
This is the book I am Working on, This is only the Prologue and Much more is to come.
Slayer
By: Nick642
Prologue
The beast let out a earsplitting roar as I stabbed him in his black heart. My men and I were on but a simple mission, to go out and kill whatever we could find protecting Galduneer from Attacking armies or in this case, Bleak Worms. These creatures were at least 20 feet in length when full grown, and had a very big appetiet for humans. My name is Kar'zak, and I am a Monster Slayer.
"Take the Beast and bring him to the castle, we can use his skin for leather." said Helgarthur, one of my many hunters. At this remark most of the other men groaned at the thought of dragging back a 400 pound slime-filled worm back to the city, for it would be a long walk home. I mounted my horse, Blackthunder- named after his soot-black colour and his speed- and we were off to the castle. "The will have to give something good for somthing as big as this." said Jorgand, One of my "younger" hunters. Jorgand was not the brightest man in the world, but he was a good fighter when it came to monsters and we needed him to replace the other man I lost when fighting a Dragon. Jorgand was also one of the more handsom fellows in my hunting guild. With Brown eyes and wavy brown hair with seemingly perfect facial details, many of the women in Galduneer could not stay away from him. My other men, not so much. Then Jorgand spoke again " I wonder how much this is worth eh? At least a huge pile of gold for this one right Helgarthur?" "You never can get enough moeny can you Jorgand? Greedy fool. It will cost you your head someday!" said Vodrund my best compainion and one of the best archers in Rik'Maul. " Why don't you keep your mouth shut for once and let a man have some fun? Vod-" Right then he became silent, I turned around to see what was troubling him and then IT was there. |
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Moonstuck
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nick642
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| 12 Jan 2012 07:38 PM |
| You Suck. I bet you couldn't even imagine to write a good book. If it does not please you to read it. Do not read it. |
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tnt91
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| 12 Jan 2012 07:44 PM |
| this failed to impress like u ! get a life |
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nick642
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| 12 Jan 2012 08:00 PM |
| Like I said before. If you do not like it I do not have time to read your posts. Your the one needing a life if all you do is run around trolling people. |
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tnt91
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| 12 Jan 2012 08:01 PM |
| LOL trolling people ? WOW not everyones gonna agree with ur opinions ! btw u dont even have obc .. |
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1999James
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| 12 Jan 2012 08:02 PM |
This sucks.
Petty children think they can write a novel because they sat and wrote 100 words. |
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nick642
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| 12 Jan 2012 08:08 PM |
| Well arn't you proud of yourselfs? |
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tnt91
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nick642
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| 12 Jan 2012 08:16 PM |
| This is only a draft anyways. I havn't edited it or anything so its Gonna suck. Pretty much straight forward. |
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